4 attempts ke baad finally comment update kar diya.๐
Har baar site crash ho raha tha.. ๐ญ
4 attempts ke baad finally comment update kar diya.๐
Har baar site crash ho raha tha.. ๐ญ
Who is Basu to question her about her relationship with her husband.
Loved how Prena was more worried about him than anything else.
Loved it.
Originally posted by: Niyati_T
Bajajโs donโt give explanations to people who are not important to them ๐
Exactly. They don't own an explanation to anyoone in the world.. but clear communication amongst themselves is what they make sure happens all the time ๐
She defers to him to be double sure of her move , because she knows that he wonโt let her do anything wrong.
He is her mentor, and her husband too.. ofcourse she will discuss with him.. Bajajs COMMUNICATE and that's their USP๐ณ
I loved their silent communication during their dance
Inspired from there London wala dance when prerna was busy imagining ๐ค But Bajaj's slight tilt was โค๏ธ
She was worried for him, aur Bajju bechara itna thaq gaya ki ghar aake seedha so gaya... bohut kaam karta hai na.. ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ
Bhaut kaam. 30 secs calls.. ek stupid deal and he takes a 10 hour flight, attends the party, goes out to sort the land issue.. kitna kaam.. mujhse sochke hi neend aa rahi hai๐.. itba sara kaam he does ๐
60 crore ka land liya aur abh deal nahi sign karni?! Bajju ke paise dub gaye ๐ณ (refund mang sakte hain kya?! ๐)
No need for refund. She doesn't need to be in India to construct anything on that land. She can do it from London too.. it's just she is giving her revenge that consumed most of her time and energy... uske liye second thoughts hai.. so uska no loss. But haab Basus bach gaye for now.. ya fir hamesha ke liye.. dono husband-wife ne basus ko maaf kr diya..
I loved loved reading this one Meenakshiiii ๐ค
Thank you so much Niyati.. I know its thoda avenyi, but I am so glad that you liked it๐ค
Originally posted by: Niyati_T
4 attempts ke baad finally comment update kar diya.๐
Har baar site crash ho raha tha.. ๐ญ
Mera poora edites draft gayab ho gaya tha ๐
So I know the pain.. but you made 4 attempts, a jhappi for you ๐ค
Wow....wow..
Wow...
It's so awesome, blossom, amazing, fantastic, fabulous, super, duper, blockbuster and mind blowing shot...
Yaar tum to queen ho...
Story ki life ho...
Prerish ki flawless writer ho...
You just made my day for giving this shot...
It's so amazing...
Loved prerish after 8yrs....
Anurag is constantly nagging her for asking her relationship with Bajaj..
Loved Bajaj and Prerna bonding and there silent communication....
Bajaj don't give explanations to outsiders....
Loved prerish chemistry in this...
Prerna is so much worried for Bajaj...
Loved the end...
Do give your more work link for prerish
And when you write next pm me please
Who is Basu to question her about her relationship with her husband.
Loved how Prena was more worried about him than anything else.
Loved it.
Thank you Dumas for reading, hope it was worth your time..
I agree Anurag has no business questioning her. But him being him wo kar sakta hai. Also show mein he has already declared into a thornbird, so waha se hi I got these vibes that he might soon begin questioning Prerna like he did in last traxk. So ab post break hi pata chalega.
Prerna has truly moved in this one shot, but kya show mein bhi she has moved on?? I have my doubts..lets see what they show when the show returns.
Thank you again Dumas for sharing your views๐ค
Originally posted by: Sunn_shine
Mera poora edites draft gayab ho gaya tha ๐
So I know the pain.. but you made 4 attempts, a jhappi for you ๐ค
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heyyyy really loved the OS especially the second half .. you portrayed quite some layers of Prerna and Rishab 's relationship ... The way she seeks him with respect to business advise and relationship advise and the way she got worried when she couldn't find him.. really build up their whole relationship moment and my most favorite was the study room moment of their .. the easiness and the mutual love and respect and mystery of soulfulness .. was amazing .. loved it !! Thank you for the loving OS.. during this quarantine .. please continue writing.. eager to read more of your work.. :)
๐คmujhe kisi ne nahi bataya iss os ke bare mein
I loved it!!!! Baki ka comment baad me!!!!
After i give two or three more reads to finally comment on it!!!!!!
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