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Posted: 6 years ago


Hahahaha... Me too hate that yudhishthir...but not kunti that much (after all she is Arjun's motherπŸ˜†)
But where is update...???????
Get posted check it now dearrr... 
Nd Ya missing you much babesss 
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Posted: 6 years ago
yeah trying to do something different...
Comedic fictions are my actuall genere... I hope me able to do justice with the characters 
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: bubulswt

amazing update this is part I hate most that is dividing Darupadi like she is some 

materialistic thing that's why I don't like Kunti at all 
continue soon  

Even me don't like her at all...
Controlling myself and my words with great difficulties while writing that part ...
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Posted: 6 years ago
                          MOST PAINFUL DECISION 

Draupadi was in her own turmoil of thought which is vexing her to the core. She was not in a state to understand anything.
Her body was shaking with fear. Who will say she is a fireborn by checking her body temperature which turned cold. Her beautiful face turned into a paled one.

Kunti, Yudhister, Bheem and the twins came to her.
But her eyes was searching someone else who was not in the pictures. 
Kunti : Pardon me Draupadi 
I said so unknowingly. I am taking my words back.
Please don't take it seriously.
Bheem : But mata how can the words be back. 
Arjun's arrows and mata's words can't be back off.
Bheem said that much words but Draupadi's ear heard only one name.
( Author's note : I think no need to mention that particular name. My readers and his admirers are much smart. ) 
Shahdev : Every questions have some hidden answer in it. And every queries have some solutions. This will too have one. We should consult with the Vedic gurus.
Shahdev : By the way where is bhrata Arjun ??
Draupadi was eager to know the answer from long
But her poor luck No one knew the answer.

Yudhister after thinking a little bit replied : Now there is only one solution.
Draupadi was not intrested in hearing any solution. Her mind and heart both were working for a single person's look and his ways.
But still she heared.
Nakul : What is that jyesth ??
We'll do whatever needed for overcome this problem.
Yudhister : We the four pandavs excluding Arjun will take Sanyash.
Then only Rajkumari Draupadi will able to marry Arjun without letting mata's words go in vain.
Kunti : What ?? 
Draupadi looked at Yudhister slowly and then nodded in negativity.
Bheem : Yesss Mata this is the last option and we should do it.
Kunti : But how can it possible No this can't be happen I'll not approve this.
How can I let my four sons to go for Sanyash for the sake of one.
Draupadi's heart pinched for a second.
Nakul : Except bhrata Bheem too as he is already married to Bhabhi Hidimbi. 

Shahdev heard some sound and said : Maata Sounds like someone is coming near us.
Nakul : May be bhrata Arjun.
Draupadi didn't paid attention this time by hearing his name as she is getting anger on him more and more for being went from there leaving her alone with his family in such situation.
Nakul by seeing the person : Maata he is none other than Guru Ved Vyash.
Kunti : Truth !! We needed him right now and he came.
Let us go and consult with him.
He himself came there.
Pandavs welcome him and his disciples.
Kunti : Guru Vyash see what had I said 
Ved Vyash : Kunti no-one can say anything without the God's wish. 
Every moves of us is as per his wish.
Yudhister : Solve our problem Acharya. We lost.
Ved Vyash laughed and continued : Putr Yudhister Pandavs are taken birth for win then how can  you guysss loose.
Bheem is getting irritation by his round words so said directly : Acharya Please clear our confusion 
Don't put us in any other matter. We are not able to solve one.
Ved Vyash by looking towards Draupadi : This has only one way putro 
All were waiting eagerly for getting the answer.
Draupadi the most.
Nakul : What is that way Acharya ??
Ved Vyash : Draupadi has to marry you five.

All left dumbstruck 
Tears started rolling from Draupadi's eyes.
Krishna came there and stop the tears from falling down.
Draupadi said only one word : Madhav !! 
Krishna : Yesss Sakhi I am here for you.
Everyone turned towards Krishna.
Krishna greeted Ved Vyash and Kunti.
Kunti : Krishna !! I am sorry putra.
Krishna : No bua no need of this.
As guru Ved Vyash already mentioned this is written in their faith so this should have to come into the acknowledge by any means.
Don't blame yourself.

Draupadi started moving towards the direction with what she herself was unknown.
Krishna : Stop Sakhi.
First let's hear Guru Ved Vyash's words.
Draupadi without turning : No need Madhav. 
Like how Mata is given her words which can't be back off me too gave my words to Jiji 
Whomever my Faith decided my groom I'll accept him.
Krishna : Sakhi !!
Draupadi turned towards him and sat on the adjacent rock.
Krishna : Acharya please elaborate the reasons behind this.
Ved Vyash : What to elaborate to you Gopal ?? What's on this earth by which you are unaware ?? 
Bheem : We are eager Acharya.

Ved Vyash told everyone about Draupadi's past life in which she wasn't able to marry and hence worshiped to God Shiv for granting her wish of marraige with the person with five qualities.
1. Dharm follower
2. Strong
3. Greatest Archer
4. Handsome
5. Bright
She repeated her wish five times. God Shiva granted her wish but as she asked for the person with that much quality which can't be in a single person and She repeated her wish five times so she will get five husbands with each having one quality in her next birth. 

Draupadi almost got fainted but composed herself with great difficulty.
Krishna : Bua don't take my sakhi wrong. This is natural for any woman.
Kunti : I know Krishna. I myself not able to take it easy. How can I blame any other ?? 
Shahdev : No this is not possible we have to think some other way to get rid off it... 
Ved Vyash : Why can't it be possible ?? 
Nakul : Acharya how can a woman be shared between five men ?? 
Ved Vyash told another story of a angelic lady who had five husbands.

Drupad : This will never happen.
Nakul : Maharaj Drupad !!
Drupad : Yesss Drupad here king of Panchal.
By putting his Palm on Draupadi's head : Don't be afraid putri your father is alive.
Vasudev , Acharya Vyash I don't acknowledge anything. My daughter will go back with her father to her own kingdom. 
Dhristdumn : Let's go Drau.

Draupadi sat still.
And hardly said the next sentence : I accept my Faith I accept the Pandavs I accept.

Pandavs, Kunti, King Drupad and Dhristdumn left shocked.
Drupad : Drau !! 
Draupadi : I accept I accept.
Kunti hugged her.
Kunti : Thank you putri Thank you.

Draupadi reciprocated the hug. She imagined Arjun there staring at her. Her eyes meet with her imagination's king eyes. She felt mixture of emotions surrounding her.
Hate, Sacrifice, Concern, Separation, Love.
And her heart wanted to ask : Where is he ??

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Author's note - Don't forget to tap on the like icon.
Me eager to have tons of feedbacks  and yeah all the healthy criticisms are most welcome... 
Thanking all the readers of mine and admirers of them...
@UnmeshaAcharya this part dedicated to you and your love for me babess... 


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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Amayaa_pkj

Hllo nice to meet you aparna dear... I hope you liked the ff... liked na ?? πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³

 
Yaa😳
Edited by TwinFlames - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
What to say!!!!!...finally... Arjun's Panchali becomes the wife of five Pandavs
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Edited by UnmeshaAcharya - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: UnmeshaAcharya

What to say!!!!!...finally... Arjun's Panchali becomes the wife of five Pandavs

😭

hmmm why can't de Destiny be changed ?? πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Amayaa_pkj

hmmm why can't de Destiny be changed ?? πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­

Jo v ho,Panchali humesha Parth ki hi Panchali hogi...😭
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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice write up amayaa .sorry for the delay in reading...good luck.




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Posted: 6 years ago
amazing update but too painful
just don't how to say this I am hating this totally 
keep the good work up 
waiting for next part