The Fireborn's Thirst - An OS on Draupadi's yearn for Love - Page 4

Originally posted by: DharmaPriyaa

I can't tell you how much I love this one! I have always believed that Pandavas were five parts of Panchanan Shiva and Draupadi was Parvati (as supported by Puranas also) but before this I have never read anything like this pointing to that divinity of them 👏 Take a bow! You have given a hint to make the divine love of Pandav-Panchali alive in your readers' hearts. I will be eagerly waiting to read the next part of it. Please write more and send me a PM whenever you write on them!

Originally posted by: ..RamKiJanaki..

Your writing is beautiful, Panchali. 👏 I loved reading about Draupadi's thoughts and feelings before her swayamvara. You have conveyed all the emotions so perfectly.

Only one suggestion I have - next time, choose a color for your font that is a little darker. The bright lime green is hard to read against a white background, and I had to highlight it to read. 😳