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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow Priya is missing ram and they are going for a date so pls update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
I loved all friends convo. it's lovely nice one. Priya k pyaar me chakkar me hi sahi ..lekin ram ne college me top kiya. gud. pl continue
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Posted: 7 years ago
Both parts are very gud
      Plzz next bhi update kro na
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Posted: 7 years ago
School life is so full.of joy and energy and Ram along with his friends is enjoying so is Priya with Shruti.
Their language is so bindass and soon the gang will meet their would be Bhabhi.
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Posted: 6 years ago



Part 1
completely different concept I never thought will see RaYa in such situations but thanks to your writing I actually can imagine them these way too good awesome mind blowing but I didn't like way they talk I mean their languages but I guess today's kids always talk like this so let it be... but last part were awesome both are perfect for each other no doubt on that...now wish Ram gets the mark what she desired moving for next to read...

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Posted: 6 years ago



Part w
loved the all friend conversation of RaYa with their friends so true college days are golden days of our life I really loved the way you penned them so well so Ram brought the results she wanted awesome thank God Rajat & Esha is couple so no haddi for RaYa here awesome... I feel Priya has planned something for him can't wait to know plz post next soon...

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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice os
Continue soon
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Part 3

priya know about his result and planned something naughty for him..

priya - beta ram Bht hero bnta hai na ab tere hero giri nikalti hu..and smile naughtly

next day priya going school she  confident about it ki ram aj school jarur ayega usse Milne..so she is so much excited but when she get down from bus she saw every were but didn't find him..she became so sad and think aya kyu nhi abhi tak result toh aa gya...phle toh majnu bna ghumta tha or ab koi fiker nhi is ranbir kapoor ko..and going to attend her class..

shruti - priya set with her and shruti told her haan toh mil gya tera hero. priya stair at her shruti continue Maine bola tha na ye rich ladk se he hote hai mat pad ink chker mai..vase bhi RV international k ladko ka toh sbko pta hai sirf time pass he krte..

priya - now lost her temper..shruti tu chup kregi ya aj tu ghar Bol k ayi hai Kya ki tu zinda wapis nhi ayegi..Ab ek or word b bola toh dekhna tu...or ek bat Vo jarur ayega smjhi suddenly she came in naughty mood just think about him change her mood..

priya to shruti - Dekh shruti apne hone wale jiju ki jra respect kiya ker smjhi Kl ko Tujhe b toh fayda hoga and hug her friendly..

shruti - confused vo kase..

priya - aree uska koi dost vost hoga toh tu b pta Lena dono sath sath he rhenge and laugh shruti also smile and said shut up ok mere pass hai mera Ashwin mujhe nhi chahiye vo bndr 

priya - uff shruti tujhe pta nhi kya dikhta us monkey mai he is so dum yar I dont like him as a frend tujhe advice De rhi hu tere liye acha nhi hai vo..

shruti - O hold on madam ap apne hero ko smbhalo or ager tujhe itna he bura lag raha hai  toh ram k sath krwa mere usk dost k sath tu ker lena I promis mai ashwin ko chod dungi..

priya - sad from heart ki shruti ne Asa kaha jb Ki use pta hai ki vo ram ko psand krti hai 
shruti mai ram ko invitation dene nhi gyi thi vo khud mera picha krta rha ab vo kisi ladki Ka picha isliye toh nhi krega ki mere khne per vo mere sheli se friendship krle mai use tere bare mai bol dungi baki uski mrji and going from there...

ase he din niklte rhte hai 5 din ho jata ram ka koi pta nhi now priya think kahi sach mai shruti ki bat Shi toh nhi Vo mujhe bhul gya hai use koi or mil gyi hogi tear role down from her beautiful eyes...

priya standing on her balcony that's her fav place jb b vo sad hoti yhi per ati priya's father came and told her to get ready unhe hospital jana hai unk ek frend ka accident hua hai toh unk hal chal puchne jaNa hai..

priya - kon papa..

sudhir - beta vhi jo samne wali building mai rhte hai..ahuja uncle aye the na apni bete k sath kuch din phle..

priya - ohh ok but ap chle jao papa mujhe nhi jana..plzzz

sudhir - tu udas lag rhi hai beta Kya bat hai...

priya - kuch nhi papa study ka stress hai thoda..

sudhir - koi bat nhi tu chal tera thoda mood he change ho jayega..

priya - papa rhne dijiye na 

sudhir - tere maa b sath Ja rhi hai or vo tujhe akele ghar per nhi chodne wali u know that..

priya - ofoo papa mai bache nhi hu Ab pta nhi maa ase behave kyu krti hai...

sudhir - laugh haan dadi amma ho gyi hai tu mujhe nhi pta fer apni maa Se bat krle..

priya - no need isse acha mai ready ho he jau Vo toh manegi nhi..

IN hospital 
Mr.ahuja ko private room mai shift ker diya jata hai..
sudhir - yar ye sab Tu b na kitni bar kaha hai dhyan se drive kiya ker..but Tu hmesha ase he krta hai..

ahuja - nhi yar mai toh dhyan Se drive ker rha tha but vo ladka itna aflatun or itni speed Se car chla rha tha ki kya btau..

shipra - Kon ladka bhai saheb 

ahuja - hoga koi bigda nwabzada mujhe toh vo 18 ka b nhi lag rha tha or gadiya pkda dete hai maa bap bacho k hath mai..or bade gharo k ladk kaise hote hai ap toh jante he hai...ye toh uper wale Ka shuker hai k Bach gya. ...

isse phle koi or bat hoti doc round per aa jate hai chequp krte hai or kuch med likh ker dete hai..

riya - ahuja's daughter riya vo papa mai med lene k liye medical store ja rhi hu ap uncle aunty Se bate kriye 

sudhir - priya beta Ja Tu bhi chli Ja di k sath 

ahuja - it's ok sudhir rhne do vase b priya ko yha acha nhe lag  rha hoga yha itne log hote hai kham kha mood khrab hoga uska bhid Dekh ker..

priya - nhi uncle jase he Maine apk bare mai suna mai toh papa k itna piche padi hue thi ki mai b sath jayungi uncle Ka Hal chal puchne and smile..or papa toh man he nhi rhe the Bht mushkil Se ayi hu uncle..

sudhir and shipra got shock hear this and look at priya with shocking expression priya just smile and go with Riya to take med leaving there parents in shocking state..

ahuja - Kyu bhai sudhir kyu nhi la rhe the use..Vo bhi  mere bete jase hai..

sudhir - nhi nhi yar ye study ker rhi thi toh desturb nhi krna chahte the..and smile 

shipra - in low voice mai bta rhi hu sudhir ye ladki kisi din hmare achi khasi band bjwa degi herkte dekhi iski..

sudhir - smile it's ok shipra bachi hai shrarte toh kregi he..

priya to riya di Ap med laker aao mai tb tak thoda garden mai ghum k ati hu Ap ate hue mujhe bula lena..

riya - ok priya but idher udher mat jana kahi priya smile and nodded as yes..

priya garden ki traf Jane lgti hai and on 2nd floor  raste mai vvip rooms hote hai and she look at that rooms so big..

priya thinks kitne bade room hai or bakiyo Se kitne alag sare facility toh amiro ko he hai..ander Se dekhti hu kase hai..and she saw inside or 4-5 young girls boys same as her age 17-18 kisi ko dant rhe hai but face priya ko dikh nhi rha kyuki ek ladki face k samne khdi hai..

priya  thinks kase bachare ko dant rhe hai..pta nhi Kya kiya hoga usne..priya Jane lgti hai she hear name (ram kb sudhrega tu )and she turns or ander Aa jati hai and bed ki traf dekhti hai and he'll shocked yes its ram her ram..plaster on his leg bandage on her for head and scratches on his arms also..

priya - shout omg u duffer yha kaise phunch gye or Baki sab priya ki shkal he dekhte reh jate hai or ram bhi Bht shocked hota hai priya ko vha Dekh ker..

ram - priya tum yhaaa 

priya - come near him haan mai yhaa but ye kya halat bna rkhi hai result ane ki khushi mai shat Se khud gya tha kya u dambo 

ram - with so cute face ab tum b mujhe datogi..

priya - with fake smile nhi nhi mai kyu datungi apko apne toh #padam bhushan* jitne wala kam kiya btaiye kb smanit kre apko Mr.ram kapoor 

sare frend abhi nhi shock mai hai but laughing priya ko bate sunker..

raj - omg kitni Tikhi hai yar 2 bar ram se mili hai or bate dekh use kase suna rhi abhi thik krta hu is Mirchi ko..

raj - excusme hai kon ap or kyu dant rhi hai hmare dost ko..

priya turn and look at him head to toe and told shkl se toh andhe nhi lgte but fer b puch lete hu r u blind or what and all frends laughing hear this

raj - what ? r u mad 

priya - mera pta nhi per tum jarur ho mad mai b use isliye he dant rhi thi jisliye Tum log tum jada bap bnane ki koshish mat kro..and neha haste haste lot pot ho jati hai..

neha - u know what priya tum bilkul vase ho jase ram ne btaya tha ptakha 

priya - achaa se bolta hai mere bare mai and punch on his leg 

ram - scream aaahhh priyaa dukhta hai yar..or ye Sab mere frends hai best frends 

priya - itne sare best frend best frend toh koi ek hota hai..

ram - nhi but hm Sab hai or Ab tum b aa jaoge hmare group mai..

priya - kyu tum log ka koi terrorist gang bna rhe ho ki jo aye lpet lo ander..

vikram - laugh haan ram de jwab kuch puch rhi hai..

ram - priya tum chup kro plzzz thodi der mujhe thik hone do fer btata hu tumhe..

priya - haan toh ab btade tujhe konsa tang Se bolna hai..

ram - priyaaa chup tum yha kya ker rhI ho Vo btao 

priya - mai toh mere mom dad k sath ayi hu mere ek uncle ka accident ho gya unki khbar lene..or raste mai tumhe dekha toh ruk gyi 

neha - hme b toh introduce krwa ab ya tu he bkwas krta rhega..

ram - ohh sry haan priya ye neha or ye vikram.

neha - tu rhne De hm khud he Ker lete khud ko introduc..
hi I m neha 
p - hi
hi priya I m vikram 
p - hello vikram
hi I m Rajat 
p -hi 
hi I m Sid 
p - hello
 Esha...Esha malhotra apne colz Ko Sbse khubsurat ladki hu mai.
priya look at her said tag kaha hai..
esha - means 
priya - ap sbse khubsurat ho iska tag kaha per lgaya apne ya Mila nhi abhi tak..

all r shocked kyuki kbhi esha Se kisi ne ase bat nhi ki..esha glare at ram..

ram look aside immidently..
priya cell ring priya saw the I'd name it's her father 

priya - omg mai toh bhul he gyi ram mere dad wait ker rhe hai I m going 

ram - ruko priya 
priya - haan bolo 
ram - I miss u priya or mera result dekha Tumne
priya smile or said tum jldi Se thik ho jao fer bat krenge is bare mai fer tumhare pitayi krungi mai..
ram - haww y 

priya - tb btayungi now by and kiss him on his cheeks in front of every one and smile or said get well soon mere ranbir kapoor and said bye to every one and go from there

ram happiness have no bounds ...

vikram - congress lAdki pat gyi...

ram - uff ye ladki mujhe pgl ker degi 

raj - or tere sath sath hme b sachi mai yar itni tikh mirchi hai kaha se dhund liya ise and all laugh and make comment on them 
other side..

shipra - priya kaha chli jati hai tu bachi hai Tu ?jo tere ungli pkad ker rkhu kbhi toh responsible hua ker her time masti mjak bas..

sudhir - bas kro shipra ghar Chlo ab jab dekho mere bete ko Danthi rhti ho...

priya run and hug her father and said han papa hmesha maa se krti hai..

kuch din fer ase he nikal jate priya hospital jana chahti hai but ja nhi skti kyuki ahuja uncle ko discharge mil gya hai vo ghar aa gye hai..

priya thinks Maine toh apni bato mai uss ye b nhi pucha ki lagi kase chot bechara pta nhi kya soch rhe honge mere bare mai sab ki kase ladki hai jisne ate he bate sunade use b or usk dosto ko b...priya tu b na bilkul control nhi hai khud Ki bkwas per huh...pta nhi ram kesa hoga kb ayega mujhe uski yad aa rhi hai in nyt she look at the Moon or ye sab bate ker rhi hoti hai khud se

in socity park shruti meet her or ask about ram..

s - Mila tujhe tera hero..

p - haan Mila..

s - kaha 

p - hospital 

s - Kya?  but Kyu 

p - accident ho gya hai bechare ka tang b tut gyi hai..

s - omg toh Ab Tu langde ko bf bnayegi..

p - shut up shruti tere shkl achi nhi hai km Se km bat he achi krle Vo thik ho jayega 

s - han ab toh tujhe use Ki shkl achi lgege hmare kaha

p - uff shruti mai Kya kru tera yar bat bnane toh de tu phle he tapak padti hai bich mai..and going from there shruti laugh from behind pagal ho gyi hai ye ladki 

kuch din or ase nikal jate hai now a days priya ram ko Bht miss ker rhi hai...dusre side ram phle se kafi better hai he got discharge from hospital and feeling Gud...
 
all frends seting in ram's room and teas him 

vikram - haan bhai ab toh bhabhi ko date per le Jane ki planning ho rhi hai kyu ram..

ram - just smile and said I miss her yar uski bate and smile automatically came on his lips

neha - ohoo kya bat hai majnu saheb ab intzar khtam hone he wala kuch din mai tu thik ho jayega..

sid - haan fer bol dena tujhe use jo bolna hoga

raj - haan ager vo tujhe bolne degi toh and all laughing on his comment 

esha - ram I dont like her kase bat krti hai vo cheep and middle class..

ram - angry to hear this shut up esha I like her or Vo mere gf bnne wali hai so stop this aj k bad se bat ki na toh dekhna..

neha - relex yar kyu iski bat ka bura man rha hai vase b priya ise Dekh legi in dono ki war dekhne ka toh mja aayega..

ram - han tum log usk mje lete ho so bad use pta chla toh btayege tumhe...all r laughing and enjoying...

ram bilkul fit or fyn ho jata hai and ready to go to meet her..

I m coming priya aj toh tumhe apni gf bna ker he rhung bht miss kiya tumhe or ab bilkul wait nhi ho rha mirchi..

precape -  ram and priya going for date and there first kiss 



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Posted: 6 years ago
Well going this teenage love story of RaYa with some elements of fun. A sad Priya for not able to meet Ram but now in a different circumstances they meet and as well his friends and it was a blast.
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Posted: 6 years ago


awww it was super cute so Priya missed Ram a lot... but Ram was not well he was hospitalized I guess he was the one who got Ahuja uncle but the truth will out soon... I love Priya esha' s fight it was awesome so Ram had many new plans for first date waiting for it being it on soon...