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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 1


In flight man search his 5 years daughter calls her name by peehu, he came to one seat n called peehu once again.
1 young girl & one little 5years old girl- yes to him.

Man- to aap yaha par baithi hai.

Little peehu- yes papa, meet my big version of peehu

 Man- hi, peehu.

Big peehu- hello sir, she is ur daughter.

Man- yaa ur name also same.

Big P- yupe mom-dad's fav

Man- ohh, i m just asking coz these name is to rear that's why.

Big P- yaa, u go to Mumbai for holiday.

Man- nahi for one important work like dur k rishton ko paas lana hai.

Man- then all the best.

Big P- thanks sir.

These all convo in plan of Delhi to Mumbai.

Peehu kapoor, age 21years old, she go to Mumbai for reason, not reason, like relation.
Flight landed to Mumbai, she seat in taxi, n she way to bandra, bungalow name raya-peehu, which is famous singer ram kapoor's bungalow.

At raya-peehu's bungalow, one man on call.

Man- arrey ek baar bola bappre dates nahi mil sakte ram kapoor, wo uss din nasik me hai, 'one sided convo' recording hai, meri complete karega, ram kapoor se, usske manger vikram se baat karta hai, aur usski complete tu karega, jaa-jaa ram kapoor ko mera naam pata hai, rakho phn mujhe bahot saare kam hai, vikram ram's manger cum secretary cum friend.

He heard sound of argument from out side get of bungalow, he go there.

 Out side of bungalow, peehu argument with watchman about entry in bungalow, vikram asked to watch men, what's the matter.

Vik- somji kya baat hai.

Som- sir ye ladki bol rahi hai andar jaana hai.

Vik to pee- appointment letter hai.

Pee- khud ki beti ko apne papa se milna hai uss ke liye bhi appointment letter ki zarurat hai, kya

Vik shocked n said- meri beti, aur tum, ho hi nahi sakti.

Pee- Maine kab kaha mai apki beti hun.

Vik to som- tumhari beti hai.

Somji- sahab meri abhi tak shaadi hi nahi hui hai.

Pee- mai ram kapoor ki baat kar rahi hun, ram kapoor mere papa hai aur mai unn ki beti peehu ram kapoor.

Vik again shocked n said- tum ram kapoor ki beti ho.

Pee- haan.
Vik- toh mai ram kapoor hun, baat karti hai, chalo jaao yaha se n he give instruction to watch man that no one can meet without appointment.

listen all these n she little far from ram's bungalow n fine there wall of ram's bungalow.

Pee- legal tarika nahi chala ab illegal tarika hi apnana hoga, she look at sky n said- nani i m sorry lekin mujhe ye karna hoga, aap mere saath toh ho na, n little bell ring, 'ting' n again she said- thankyou n she throw her hand bag n other side of wal, then other her bag then she climb herself.

Pee to herself- shayad mai piche wale raste aayi hun n she pickup her bags n go towards the open window.

She look inside n that window is kitchen, she look inside n find no one is in, so she go in like thief.
She open fridge n take out one water bottle n she started drink, same time vikram came there n find one person are stand there, he thought thief is there, so he pick vase in his hand n he walking little-little step n he found girl drinking water.

Vik- kon ho tum, peehu's back to him.

Peehu stop drinking n turned herself- mai hun UNCLE.

Vik- tum..

Pee- haan mai.

Vik- tum andar kaise aayi.

Pee- apne sidhe andar aane diya hota toh mai kitchen ki balcony se andar nahi aati aur na mujhe wo bungalow ki wall climb nahi karne padti.

- ruko mai abhi police ko phn karta hun.

Pee- kijiye phn mai bhi police ko bata dungi apne mere saath batmeezi se baat ki, recording hai mere paas, sunnau.

Vik drop the police idea n said- tum yaha par nahi ruk sakti.

Pee- mujhe pata tha iss liye saara intzam kar ke aayi hun n she show tent bag.

Vik- tum iss ghar k andar tent nahi bandh sakti.

Pee- ghar ke bahar Jo khali area hai jise aap garden kehte hai waha par.

Vik- mai municipal walon ko call karunga.

Pee- kuch fayda nahi hoga, Jo bungalow hai na usske area me ye khali jagah aati hai, aur municipal ka ek rule hai, Jo aapka area me aata hai, uss area me aap Jo bhi karo usse renovate karo yaa uss area me ghar todo usse unn ka, KOI lena dena nahi hai, to municipal ko call kar ke kuch fayda nahi, agar aapko karna hai to karo aapka bill badhega.

Vik- chalo ghar k bahar, peehu pickup her all things n came out of the house n she stand her tent, vikram also stand there n saw her all drama.

After an hour, she side her tent curtain n shouted- uncle.

Vikram eating his tifin, he listen her voice he get scared n his bite of roti let down from his finger, vikram came out n asked.

Vik- what happened.

Pee- when my papa came to home.

Vik little rude- pata nahi.

Pee- pata nahi ya aap mujhe batana nahi chahte.

Vik- nasik gaye hai thodi Der me pochta hoga.

Pee- good n she go in tent.

Vik- kaisi afat hai ye ladki.

Peehu from inside- jaise apke boss hai.

Vikram slap his forehead n go in.

An hour later one car came in bungalow, peehu side her tent curtain n find inequality man came out from car.

Man saw tent infront of his bungalow he asked to vikram.

Man- ye kya hai vikram.

Vik- wo..wo.
Peehu came out from tent n said- ye tent hai.

Man- these is my bungalow.

 

Edited by Arpipatil - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
resss...ab yaha padh sakta hu me :-D :-P thnks aprita.. sis
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Posted: 7 years ago
arpita r u maharashtria I mean marathi speaking. coz I think I know this story. Sachin and tyachi mulgi cha ek marathi movie ahe. tyache naav ahe ekulti ek. bahutek tujhi hi story tyasarakhich ahe ase mala vatata. pl continue. pl pm me
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Posted: 7 years ago
You back with nice concept Ram kapoor ki itni badi beti Peehu
Wat she want from her father and where is Priya hope to see her soon in the story
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Posted: 7 years ago
wah wah!!! nice... now i curse myself why i ddnt read it! :-) hmm...really nice start...waiting for more sister... :-D
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Originally posted by: iluvusakshi

arpita r u maharashtria I mean marathi speaking. coz I think I know this story. Sachin and tyachi mulgi cha ek marathi movie ahe. tyache naav ahe ekulti ek. bahutek tujhi hi story tyasarakhich ahe ase mala vatata. pl continue. pl pm me


yes i am maharashtria, most important that is my one of the fav.movie ty movie madhle kahi parts mi ghetle ahet je 1st part madhe read kele ahes and thankyou for the comment 
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Part 2

Man- these is my bungalow, my own property. 

Pee- peehu ram kapoor. 

Man turned n looked at her- tum yahi par kya kar rahi ho.

Pee- Mumbai ghumne aayi hun, aur aap hi ek insan aise hai Jo yaha par rehte hai, haan ye baat alag hai, maa ko pata nahi hai, ke mai aap ke yaha ruki hun. 

Ram- tum yaha kitne din rukne wali ho. 

Pee- mai yaha 2 chize karne aayi hun, ek to abhi bola, aur ab dusri baat ye hai k mujhe actor banna hai.

 Vik- ram tum issey jaante ho. 

Pee- papa aap aise kitne peehu kapoor ko jaante ho, zara uncle ko baatiey plz. 

Ram- vikram iss ka saman guest room me rakh do, aur issey koi chiz ki pareshani nahi hone chahiye n he go in. 

Peehu give little attitude to vikram n said- Maine kaha tha na uncle, papa aane ke baad sab se bada shocked lag jaayega aapko, chaliye ab. 

Vik- waise tum kitne din rukogi. 

Pee- shayad ek din, ek hafta, ek mahina, ek saal, jab tak actor nahi banti tab tak. 

Vik- it means mujhe pareshani hogi. 

Pee- aap mujhe pareshan karoge. 

Vik- how irritated you are. 

Pee- you too uncle. 

At evening, ram in his room, vikram came n asked. 

Vik- itne saal se tera dost hun aur tune itni badi baat mujhse chupayi. 

Ram- tune kabhi pucha nahi. 

Vik- wow! Great, kitne saal ki hai peehu. 

Ram- 21year old, 5 saal ki thi tab Maine Delhi chodi, aur Mumbai aaya singer baanane. 

Vik- peehu actor banna chahti hai. 

Ram- haan subhe boli hai, sunna Maine. 

Vik- you help her. 

Ram- no way mai meri beti ko actor bilkul nahi bannaunga. 

Vik- uss ke karaname dekh kar to nahi lagta wo apna faisla baddl degi. 

Ram- maa par gayi hai. 

Vik- uss ke har ek aadat aur harkat dekh kar lagta hai baap par gayi hai.

 Ram- chal mai milkar aata hun. 

Vik- haan tu jaa mai nikalta hun, neha wait kar rahi hogi. 

Ram- haan, bye. 

Peehu on terrace, clicking selfies, ram came n wish her. 

Ram- good evening. 

Pee- good evening, mai aapko papa bula sakti hun na. 

Ram- matlab. 

Pee- means like today's generation called, paa, daddy, dad, papu, father etc, etc. 

Ram- papa best n better. 

Pee- ok little awkwardness between them. 

Ram asked her- kaisi ho. 

Pee- mujhe kya hua hai, apke samne khaadi to hun. 

Ram- yaa right, maa kaisi hai tumhari. 

Pee- wo bahot acchi hai. 

Ram- ok, kuch, kya bolna hai, kya nahi kuch samjha nahi aa raha hai. 

Pee- ok. 

Ram- tum actor kiu banna chahti ho. 

Pee- that's my dream, jaise aapka dream tha singer banne ka. 

Ram- yaa right, waise tumhari maa ko pata hai, tumhare iss pagalpan k baare me. 

Pee- nani ko pata hai, toh kuch tension nahi hai. 

Ram- wahi mai sochu ye dimag aur ye actor banne ka bakwas idea tumhara ya tumhari maa ka nahi hoga. 

Pee- badon ko aise nahi bolte papa, n she looked at sky n said- nani papa ne Jo kaha uss ki baat ka bura mat manna, ok aap gussa nahi ho na, good n she looked at ram n said- nani aap se gussa nahi hai. 

Ram didn't got any idea n her phn started ring, she excuses herself. 

Ram to himself- iss ki maa ne bigad k rakha hai, bahot saare manners aur rules ki baatein kartik hai, don't worry ram peehu yaha par jab tak hai tab tak usse manners aur rules sikha apne tarike se, n he smile. 

Next morning, he gives the water to plant. 

Peehu came in jogging suite n saw ram give water to plants n she asked him. 

Pee- aapne garden k liye mali nahi rakha. 

Ram- Jo kam mai khud kar sakta hun uss ke liye mai dusra admi kiu rakhu. 

Pee- but apki ek image hai, u are the singer n a ideal for young stars aur aap kya kar rahe hai, pani de rahe hai. 

Ram- mai 24x7 media me nahi rehta Jo ye kam karne se me TV ya news channel par breaking news bannau. 

Pee- jab mai star bannugi na tab mai aisa kuch bhi kam nahi karungi, inn sab ke liye mai log rakhugi. 

Ram- tum actor nahi bannogi, nani ki permission li hai tumne, aapne maa ko ye baat bolkar nahi aayi ho, tumne jhoot kaha hai k tum Mumbai ghumne aayi ho, toh mai tumhe permission nahi dunga. 

Pee- papa. 

Ram- peehu. 

Pee- thik mai bhi dekhti hun aap mujhe kaise rokte hai. 

Ram- tum jaha par bhi jaaogi na audition k liye mai waha par call kar ke baat dunga, peehu ram kapoor ko audition me select hi mat karna. 

Pee- mai bhi dekhti hun aap ye sab kaise karte hai, mai bhi aapki beti hun aur nani mere saath hai. 

Ram- mai bhi dekhta hun nani kitne din tak aur kaha tak saath rehti hai. 

Peehu looked at sky n said- haan nani abhi bolti hun. 

Ram also look towards sky n said- kis se baat kar rahi ho. 

Pee- nani ka direct connection hai bhagwan se. 

Ram- buddhi ko abhi iss umar me koi aur kam hoga bhi nahi. 

Pee little shouted- papa. 

Ram looked at with irritated- kya hai. 

Pee- Jo log bhagwan k paas gaye hai unn ke baare me aisi baatein nahi karte. 

Ram- matlab. 

Pee- nani ko gaye ab 2 saal ho gaye hai. 

Ram- ohh sorry! Toh tum. 

Pee- nani se baat karti hun. 

Ram eyes wide open in shocked- kya tum nani se baat karti ho. 

Pee- haan. 

Ram in same reaction- kai...kai..kaise. 

Pee- mujhe unnki baatein sunnayi deti hai, aur wo mere saath baatein karti hai. 

Ram- nani abhi bhi baat kar rahi hai tumse. 

Pee- unnhe kuch kam nahi hai Jo mere saath din bhar baatein karegi, mai abhi jogging k liye jaa rahi hun n she started jogging.

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Posted: 7 years ago
how sweet yaar. pihu is literally irritating ram n Vikram .poor Vikram. thanks for pm. pl continue
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Posted: 7 years ago
What an imagination!!!!!!!!!!
Pihu is superb. 
Jaldi Priya ok scene me le aao..
Thanks for your pm and 
Waiting eagerly. 
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Posted: 7 years ago
Sweet.. Beautiful story.
Thanks for pm.