New OS Meant to be together pt 5 on pg 12 25.3.17 - Page 10

Nice update
But why u stopstory
Pplzz continues

Awesome Yar...pls do write more stories on RaYa

Beautiful ending to a superb story.
You're an Amazing Writer.
Do write more on raya.
Thanks for pm.

Part 4
what a star but really sad ending... like where you stopped was most in perfectly moment for sure... I m not loving it for sure just the end I was expecting little naughty more but the whole part was awesome the way Golu behaved front of girls then the game then Priya getting right chit & song for Ram but poor he that was not so pleasant for him for sure... would have surly like it little more if I got the chance well over all it was fantastic update like always you have awesome & mind blowing with fantastic start n end...

Teasing nok jhok and full of romance is in RaYa life.

Part 5
awww this was classic end but you know what dil mange more... really can't get enough of this cute RaYa the way u penned down whole bedroom scene I actually can imagine lol... Neha entering in room via balcony that was really epic for sure I so so so loved it awesome mind blowing this is gonna be best one for sure yaar the end was more interesting the way Neha & Nuts act like RaYa omg she actually copied RaYa fully poor Priya always have to suffers with teasing due to her Golu & ultimate Drama queen...
but I would like to see one more part in this story how did elders took care of Peehu whole day nd night nd how does RaYa made their night more beautiful... so if you can plz write epilogue of the story as a last part plz...

Part 4

simple cute story

Beautiful romantic story...
Thanks for pm..
Plz do write more...