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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

haan dekha meine๐Ÿ˜†. ro rahi hai
tum khol do chahe toh...waise bhi tum aur malu uske pages bhar donge๐Ÿ˜†

wahi toh...lagta hai aapko bhi peeche chod degi๐Ÿ˜†
thik hai aapki birthday pe open karungi๐Ÿ˜‰ as a gift ๐Ÿคฃ
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thx for  dedicating it to me. ZI m sorry I couldn't make it timely,
Thanks to  khichdi gang too.
har kisi ne apne  hisse ki khichdi poori tarah se pakayi hai๐Ÿ˜† what can i say
koi bheeg kyun na jaaye, bimar kyun na pade, open space me romance kyun na karein sab apne apne hisse ki puri siddat ke saath nibhaye ho ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ‘
kabhi raya ko rulake, kabhi ek dusre k liye tadpake, kabhi pyar jatake , kabhi gussa dilake, kabhi hug karake, kabhi romance karake. All is well that ends well. What is important is the result ,how we achieve is immaterial ๐Ÿ˜†and raya's love story is always immortal.

Oye stupid CC , chandni boli๐Ÿ˜† neha ne  priya ko, Neha toh 4g ki speed pe chali ya kahoon ki aadhe line me line marliya, ladka set karliya , apna banaliya, suits her ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
best uff kitna mahan aatma  hai yaar. 
uff kitna mahan aatma hai yaar four words me mixed feelings aur mortyr  ban gya, har baar aisa kamal kaise hota hai๐Ÿ˜† pichle janam me zaroor villain tha iss janam me har baar usko sacrifice nhi nazar bhi hatana padta hai priya se๐Ÿคฃ

Neel ye bhi chahiye tha romance bhi๐Ÿ˜† chalo hogyi tumhara khichdi me masala adding hope u r very happy now๐Ÿ˜†

Thank u sandhya , thankx for giving me this wonderful gift.
luv u guys
Edited by bpatil3 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Sandyyy soryyy .. you do know i read the story but i havent given the comment yet .. 


coming to first part 
Beautiful start with Raya fight .. 
loved raging priya at Ram .. 
HAHA  ram is tooomuch how much work he has give n to priya 

superb and different angle .. 

Thanks for pm 

Neel please no sorry and thanks for comments๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Hayeee you wont leave this rajat thing right ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ก 

lol chodo , you wont listen any way 
so finally Ram knws priyas past and he do knws that he had feelings for priya .. 
awww that was  with in short time 
good to knw that .. 
lovely ram  went with priya to  doctor 
haha i so loved te expression wen doctor called her mrs.kapoor ๐Ÿ˜† 

superb one .. ๐Ÿ‘

Rajat se itna pyar๐Ÿ˜†. Kya karu Rajat aa hi jata hai meri galti nahi hai๐Ÿ˜†
haan short time OS hai na๐Ÿ˜†
thanks for comments๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

part- 3 

wow .. so ram confessed his love towards her 
aww that was cute .. haha but priya  didnt understand  whats happening 
here also  rajat ๐Ÿ˜†  .. 
goddd .. hmm  i loved rams raging bull avatar .. 
awww the polar bear didnt have any food .. pria got nicely 

oh my priya kissed him ... awww that was swift move ๐Ÿ˜‰ 
but ram didnt realise   that and yelled at her .. ... 
moving to  next 


Rajat hai re har parts mein๐Ÿ˜†
Bold Priya๐Ÿ˜‰
thanks for comments๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Part - 4

wowww that was splendid confession .. 
and his ill ness brought them closer very closer 
awww very neat exclusion .. ๐Ÿ‘ loved the romantic part .. .. 
before marraige ๐Ÿ˜‰ haa super fast ,, 
thank you so much for the beautiful part 
and in one line you added neha vikrams maarige also .. 
lovely ending of lovely story 
thank you so much  concidering my request in romantic part .. 

thanks for all pms .. 

sorry for very late reply 

Haan romantic logo ke suggestion se part romantic ho gaya๐Ÿ˜‰
thanks for comments๐Ÿค—
again Sorry๐Ÿ˜ก
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Thx for  dedicating it to me. ZI m sorry I couldn't make it timely,

Thanks to  khichdi gang too.
har kisi ne apne  hisse ki khichdi poori tarah se pakayi hai๐Ÿ˜† what can i say
koi bheeg kyun na jaaye, bimar kyun na pade, open space me romance kyun na karein sab apne apne hisse ki puri siddat ke saath nibhaye ho ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ‘
kabhi raya ko rulake, kabhi ek dusre k liye tadpake, kabhi pyar jatake , kabhi gussa dilake, kabhi hug karake, kabhi romance karake. All is well that ends well. What is important is the result ,how we achieve is immaterial ๐Ÿ˜†and raya's love story is always immortal.

Oye stupid CC , chandni boli๐Ÿ˜† neha ne  priya ko, Neha toh 4g ki speed pe chali ya kahoon ki aadhe line me line marliya, ladka set karliya , apna banaliya, suits her ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
best uff kitna mahan aatma  hai yaar. 
uff kitna mahan aatma hai yaar four words me mixed feelings aur mortyr  ban gya, har baar aisa kamal kaise hota hai๐Ÿ˜† pichle janam me zaroor villain tha iss janam me har baar usko sacrifice nhi nazar bhi hatana padta hai priya se๐Ÿคฃ

Neel ye bhi chahiye tha romance bhi๐Ÿ˜† chalo hogyi tumhara khichdi me masala adding hope u r very happy now๐Ÿ˜†

Thank u sandhya , thankx for giving me this wonderful gift.
luv u guys

Finally u commented๐Ÿ˜ก
thanks for comments๐Ÿค—
and thanks all who helped me ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hii,

Sorry I'm late.

@  Part - 3

Just Superb. โญ๏ธ

 Ram ki itna gussa...baapre...๐Ÿ˜ฒ Priya just couldnt stop imagining Ram kissing her.๐Ÿ˜ณ  Thats lovely.

Lo...phir gussa.๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก  Hayee...priya feels insulted...๐Ÿ˜ญ  Its going to take more for Ram to manaofy Priya...lets see...Going to read now.

Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
@ Last part...

Ram manaliya priya ko...woh bhi bheeg bheeg ke... ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜† The kiss was super hot ๐Ÿ˜ณ 

Bechaari Neha...Priya has fallen in love and she is losing her sleep.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† 

See...Ram got fever...and they consummated their relation...hayee๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Priya is in tears...that moment her feelings are well depicted ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

After that everything are soo lovely...happy happy ending.

Totally blushy blushy update...

Thank u for the writer, the three people who helped to deliver such a wonderful writing and more importantly thanks to the birthday baby.  Stay blessed guys.

Thanks for the pm.