really dear thiis song is as beautiful as ur write up... really it thouched my heart like always it showed the whole pain which Ram go threw in this 5 years without love... but I would have added some Priya's side parts too how did she felt after coming back to he home & how she missed Ram so plz do continue... pls do continue soon...
Originally posted by: Sakshiashu
Beautifully written!!!!!!
Do continue soon.
Originally posted by: DiehardRaYafan
Leena, my dear ...so sorry for the vanishing act here in IF. I have been extremely busy with really nothing major and it might take another two weeks for things to calm down. Thank you for always encouraging and liking my write ups. I have started writing another OS on another ghazal and the reason I write from Ram's point of view is because the lyrics support a guy's POV but I do try to incorporate Priya's emotions wherever I can. Hope to finish the new one soon and get your valuable feedback on it too
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