The way you describe emotions and surroundings, it's truly marvellous!
It was a pleasure reading this enchanting tale π
Do write more π
Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-awesome update π
Tfs for pm Aru π€
Originally posted by: ApekshaMYayyy hurry...!! I'm first to comment.. Aru yaar.. I was waiting for this story since ages... π² but chalo koi baat nahi der aaye durusth aaye...π₯³π₯³ I always love ur stories...
now coming to the update.. loved the storm of Flashbacks.. it was so emotional and heart touching... and pratap's way of making ajab realise her feelings and accept them.. it was just amazing and beautifull.. humare kuwar ji toh bohot smart hai u know.. π
and not to forget.. that last praja moment.. haaye mere praja.. π³π₯³
overall.. loved the update.. do cook some mew stories.. it's really a pleasure to read something on praja from u.. π
Originally posted by: twilightlover29
Itne lambi time se hide n seek khelene ke baad finally curtain Fall ho gaya story par humari story ka the end ho gaya and I feel so sad- itna wait kiya tha maine and you did justice to the end ki mereko rona aa gaya - itna toh main kisiki bidaai mein bhi emtional nahi hui re jitna itni beautiful ending ne mujhe kiya
Aru you are a fabulous writer the way you describe teh emotions from the flashbacks to the kshama at the end they all tug the reader's heart.. Amazing, mind-blowing work and I hope we get more of your work as well
Thank you for sharing this heart warming story with all of us
Originally posted by: ..Madhura..Res
I don't want to miss this place this time .I'll come back soon...
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Unres
Aru ,I love you
I Wish...I mean...I just can't write it down. I mean writing is the best way for me to convey anything but not this time. If you could just see me now, I think my eyes would have conveyed it more nicely than me.
After reading for five or four minutes I was lost...I mean I was lost like lost...and when I was finally back to reality something felt so heavy inside me ...maybe it was my heart. ..
I don't know if you know it or not ...but you are amazing. Your each story has that power to gently pull out the reader from reality and place him in your wrold. There are those small things which make it more and more real like this
Pratap joined his hands to thank anndevta and swiftly left the dining hall in the blink of an eye. This small thing is really important. Nobody notices these things consciously but subconsciously these things take them out of reality...okay I know at this point you must be thinking that something is really wrong with me.
And yes that Flashback scene was A-M-A-Z-I-N-G
Now do I really need say anything about the Question and Answer scene? that was so True and Pure!
Aru...I am proud to say that you are favourite writer.
God Bless you...
Your permanent Reader
Madhura
Originally posted by: Aru_A
I was waiting for you...I love you to jaana...Now you're making me speechless...I really don't know how should I express how overwhelmed I am...coz loss of words is like, loosing a part without which the body can not function...if you really are so moved, I...well...what should I say...apparently, you are the only one. I did want to move people through this, all those flashbacks and calm yet hard realisation...seems like it reached your heart...You have left me speechless Madhura...and I'm honestly saying that, maybe i'll never be able to forget all that you say...I really think that it will be insulting to reply this word to word you know. It's like, exchanging auras right now, not just words...and I guess this is better if it remains unsaid...Between you and me...Thank You so much...Madhura :*
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