OMG di it was really awesome update no doubt in that too good mind blowing so RaYa were unknown to each other destiny or I say Shudhir bring them together too good... the way u described their journey from unknown person to be soul mate was really good it was really short as compare to concept but u beautifully cover it up in just one part which is really difficult... as I alway try to put story in one part but always ending up by making it for 2 to 3 parts. .. u did fair job with it u covers all the important parts of their journey which is amezing. ... sizzling hot all together so enjoyed them a lot...now waiting for more kind if this OS hope u will penned down them soon...
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