OS-let me heal you-morning of 18/4 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: Oldestfan

Very well written! Thank you for bringing out Paros bravery, in fact using scenes and memories exactly from the show! He indeed tells her that he would have been impressed with her refusal to biw down to his intimidation if she had not been on the other side, for a false man! 

She is made of the desert sand, our Paro... Silky, shifting, pliable, but relentless. After all stone erodes and erodes until sand is what is left... It cannot be eroded further! ( well technically it can, but who is lookin?! ) 


Thank you

That scene where he tells her he'd admire those qualities about her...its one of my faves...i think these are the qualities that make him love her even now
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Posted: 10 years ago
This was really nice! 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovelyyy...AWESOME writing...👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
I really like your take on the episode. Right from Rudra's explanation of what he is doing, to what Paro is saying - its always so on point. And fits with the story! 
You should really write more (time permitting) they're wonderful :D