The Dinner Invite ~ Aman's thoughts of PaRud | Drabble-ish (2/14) UPDT - Page 4

Sona

@mistyrains

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

This is hilarious! And delightful and all things nice. I couldn't stop grinning till the very last line. If only...😊

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Serenade

@Serenade

Senior Member

Posted: 10 years ago

This is really cute! Can't stop grinning at the thought of Rudra being putty in the hands of his very annoyed beautiful wife!

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sho-shweet

@sho-shweet

IF-Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

Hope this happens in the show some day :)

Good work!

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Payali09

@Payali09

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

😊 Great work! Short and sweet. Can't wait for more.

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Scarlet Wizard

@FromTheAshes

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

A very lovely and awezome OS.
Hope to see thus kind of parud in real.

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

Goldie

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

Oh Rae,

I loved this OS to bits..Aman's POV on Rudra and Paro was excellent...Loved Rudra's desperation to convince Paro that he didn't tell off Aman...I can picturize Aman's smile while hearing their conversation and his stutter and stammering when Rudra was on call...And Rudra's authoratative voice commanding Aman to be home for dinner within 10 minute...Nice one..do continue..

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