PaRud OS: Choices - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: What_the

Very nice! Enjoyed reading it...their desperation for each other was palpable..you write very well..


Thank you so much!!

I am happy that you liked this write-up!! 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MemoriesDieHard

WOW!!! This was totally Breath-taking... I could see it all in my head.

Ur words just seep through the reader's heart and mind
I am speech less...
I could literally hear Rudra saying,"Dekh dimaag math Kharaab kar..."
Wow!!!
Do I need to say more? Cuz I am totally at a loss of words... I hope u do write more PaRud...

Lots of Love...
Yashi


Thank you Yashi for such an amazing comment! And I'll definitely write more when if and when inspiration strikes!! 
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Posted: 10 years ago
heyaaa diii🤗
this s d 1st tym m reading a work on PaRud😳
well-written diii👏👏
jus lovedd ittt😊
thanx for d pm😊
andd congozzz 4 becoming purpleee🥳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aishu3003

heyaaa diii🤗

this s d 1st tym m reading a work on PaRud😳
well-written diii👏👏
jus lovedd ittt😊
thanx for d pm😊
andd congozzz 4 becoming purpleee🥳


Thankooo Aishuuu!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Anky!!

How did I miss this!

I love LOVE LOVE it very much. I love how he knows he can't screw it up this time. He has to be patient and cant go in with his usual guns blazing approach because now he has something precious to lose. A vulnerable side for a great warrior. I love how Paros subconscious looks for Rudra at such a weakened state and how she had completely faith that what ever game they were playing he wouldn't hurt her.

"He felt his soul was breaking too" ❤️

I love this. Bas!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: niyoti

Anky!!

How did I miss this!

I love LOVE LOVE it very much. I love how he knows he can't screw it up this time. He has to be patient and cant go in with his usual guns blazing approach because now he has something precious to lose. A vulnerable side for a great warrior. I love how Paros subconscious looks for Rudra at such a weakened state and how she had completely faith that what ever game they were playing he wouldn't hurt her.

"He felt his soul was breaking too" ❤️

I love this. Bas!


Hehehe! This is the first write up for RR by me! 

I am happy you liked... nahi nahi.. LOVED it so much! 

I LOVE YOU for the comment! Bas! 
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Posted: 9 years ago
it was simply beautiful.loved the way he was controling himself so that he won't commit any mistake n risk her life,indirectly his life too.
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Posted: 9 years ago
What a beautiful story! How I wish this had happened on the show...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Just found this OS and read it...
It was awesome!!!! You actually dreamed about such a sequence???

Anyways, your story was better than what we were offered... This is what I had wanted to see on the show... Paro running off with Tejawat, leaving behind Rudra... And Rudra could have figured out what to do!!!!

But this version of Rudra was a treat to read about... He didn't fly off the hook once he realised that Paro had run away with the enemy!!!!!

Loved reading this story...
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Posted: 9 years ago
simply brilliant
loved it.