MG FF - The Burnt -Chapter 11 Pg 70 May 17 - Page 72

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Posted: 15 days ago

Nice update. The whole family come to meet her. Geet informs her son that Maan is his dad he gets excited and really happy. He is also introduced to his whole family. The doctor advices that Geet should not be left alone. Maan decides to bring her to the Manor and he will stay in the outhouse only if Geet agrees. The family does not want Maan too to stay alone because of his health  Maan is in in remorse for the injustice he did with Geet. Maan father wanted Maan to marry Geet so Dadima made him marry Geet against his will. Waiting for the next update.

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Posted: 15 days ago

Part-11

Nice update..

Commented on blog..

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Posted: 15 days ago

Awesome 

But painful 

Now maan repenting so badly 

His health condition is not less than geet 

But in past

His ego make.him to do all.wrong 

Just proving own words 

He cross every limit 

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Posted: 14 days ago

Hello Anu

always appreciate the update

thank you


Chapter 11

Riveting update… outstandingly written

of cos Geet was stressed 

glad that Maan took Advay out

as expected Maan kept checking on Geet's condition

well Annie and Dev know are about Geet and on their way to meet Geet

liked that they love and care so much for Geet

Maan clearly does not deserve Geet

however he has repented

will Dev and Annie understand this and see how much Geet loves Maan?

so Maan does not want to see Geet as he knows she cannot bear his presence

good that he does want to do anything against her will or harm her

after so long Geet met Dev and Annie

she was naturally uncomfortable when Annie called her "bhabhi"

Geet was certainly confused seeing Meera

finally she gets to know that Meera is Dev's wife

ahh Dev apologised to Geet about Meera's action

oh Meera tried to clarify her actions

her reasons were understandable

glad that she told Geet that Maan has changed and is repenting

however Dev refused to believe that Maan has changed

Dev had a point that Geet suffered 

at least Meera apologised to Geet

agree that her intentions were not bad

adore the bond that Geet shares with the Khurana family

great that dadi told her that Advay is with Maan

Annie was happy that she has a nephew

hmm Dev was unhappy that Advay is with Maan

Geet's response was anticipated 

Geet was overwhelmed by Khuranas love and care

Geet was adamant that Advay needs a father's love

Geet's thoughts were reasonable

cannot blame her

after all Maan instilled these fears in her

pleased that Geet wants Advay to meet his family

loved Maan taking care of Advay

not surprised that Maan went to speak to the doc regarding Geet's health

Gosh Geet told Advay that Maan is his dad

Advay was so ecstatic

he also met his entire family

one thing for certain is that Advay loves his dad so much

Geet has surely see that Maan loves Advay

well the doc advised that Geet needs to be with family

amazed that Geet told Chetan that Maan is her husband and Advay is his son

despite what he did, Maan's siblings care for him

Maan wants his family to convince Geet to move in with them

nice that Maan decided to move to the OH 

Maan's thoughts were justified

loved that he can do anything for Geet

Past well incorporated

hate Geet's family

wonderful that dadima told Maan that his alliance was fixed with Geet years ago

dismayed with Maan's attitude

dadima had a valid point

Geet revealed that nothing happened

however her family was adamant that they get married

Geet revealed that she loves Maan

alas Maan agreed to marry Geet

angry that Maan thought that Geet trapped him

Maan ruined everything

feeling for Maan and Geet

happy that Maan wants to do everything with Geet's permission

will Geet agree to move in with the Khuranas?


update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 14 days ago
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Posted: 14 days ago

great part 

Annie and Dev though angry with Maan but can’t leave their brother 

hope they see the changes in him 

cont soon

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Posted: 14 days ago

Loved it 😀😀😀😀

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Posted: 14 days ago

 wonderful update looks like geet is ready to make her son get father s love and maan doesn't want to do anything against geet s wish will geet come to stay in Khurana mansion and how will she react seeing maan leaving in d outhouse waiting for next .

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Posted: 14 days ago

wonderful update

whole family come to meet geet

dev and annie are dead supporter for geet

maan also repnd his deeds

past is very painful

without any mistake geet suffer

thanks for pm and pw

waiting for next

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Posted: 14 days ago

Nice update

Family reunion

Chetan shocked to know maan as geet's husband

Advay happy to know his ice cream uncle is his dad

Waiting for nxt

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