Last part😲😭 Me feeling sad sad now.. will really miss this story.. coming to the update.. Great one.. maaneet were finally married after long wait of 52 parts..😉 Loved the way how you described all the rituals & simultaneously geet's feelings.. It was an emotional moment.. but you made it lighter with Rishabh's comment.. Post wedding rituals were again very nicely written.. I especially liked the morning scenes, one where ria teased geet, another where Raj Khurana kept hand on her head & blessed her.. Very heart warming scene.. It made me realize how far the story has actually come.. from him hating geet so much in his son's life to accepting her whole heartedly.. Okk.. next 2 para adult alert so savvy di asked me to skip.. Last part, where they discussed of future, maan assuring geet & them confessing there love made me feel nostalgic.. Such lovely story came to an end.. little hurting, but again it had to end somewhere.. And it was a perfect ending.. you wrote it really wonderfully..
P.S- we can atleast hope for a bonus part?? like you know life after some 10-15 years?? Edited by LovelyUmang5 - 6 years ago
Nice update and lovely ending a very simple story line with lovely narration. indeed i will miss it. i loved the starting very much how geet a simple girl who had crush on maan nd gradually their feelings deepened. still u know i love the rikara version more😆 i know i am nuts but its just d way it is this kinda shows how geets middle class journey unfolded into becoming the bride of a millionaire. posh wedding. tho honestly speaking i expected more twist nd turns seeing d pace also u have mentioned in some update as i recall so thought i will read more chapters so it's very sad that unexpectedly this just got ended but all good things come 2 an end so have 2 deal with this for now but again glad that u r back with another story congratulations for ending this one a very lovely ff. 👏 thanks for writing nd pm Edited by Solacesings - 6 years ago
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