MG FF Girl Friday Thread 2 - Epilogue pg 146 *COMPLETED* - Page 63

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Posted: 6 years ago
boy's pov can be so different...
how you did it !!!!!!! you are fabulous
Jyoraj thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
Beautifully written part. 
Romantic. 
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Posted: 6 years ago
From Maan's pov this seemed a lot different sweet and adorable. The way he felt trusted and stimulated was feeling so good to read. Waiting to see the change in their relationship after this night...
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Posted: 6 years ago
fantastic update ...
it was so passionate yet so beautiful ...I loved it the way u wrote it ...
but didn't understand the last line ...why maan will see geet differently now ?
waiting for next ...
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Posted: 6 years ago
Passionate and Sensational Chapter

What I actually loved the most about this chapter is the emotions
that was connected , its a rare that I read a passionate chapter where emotions are filled more and less action which for me makes an excellent read I totally enjoyed this chapter
I liked how Maan cared if Geet was comfortable , if she had perhaps changed her mind but the most beautiful fact is that she trusts him and he sees that in her eyes in her facial expressions
coming together when in love is so special and I'm sure Maan now would start getting a bit possessive for his lady after his birthday gift
 Maan just loves and adores Geet and seeing her in this form he finds her the most beautiful and every second he cherishes 
thank for for writing it in Maan's pov
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Posted: 6 years ago
awesome update . so maaneet became two body one soul... at first maan was hesitate to accept geet's special birthday surprise (and you penned down maan's thought beautifully) but when he realized geet trust him & ready to submit herself , he couldn't stop himself & both became one 😉
waiting for next
and of course I will vote 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
simply beautiful...will maan now stay apart from geet...
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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome update!!
Very beautifully written.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Fabulous update dear
It was very hot and romantic...finally they are one with no barriers left between them and the way u wrote the update from maan's point of view made it all the more special...loved the update and enjoyed reading it a lot...continue soon dear...
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Posted: 6 years ago

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