Rain beauty RiKara FS epilogue-pg4

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Rain beauty Prologue


It is inspired by the Malayalam movie ‘Beautiful’.It's a converted FS

 

Introduction:

Omkara was a part of his paralyzed friend Rudra.Rudra existed because of his deep friendship with Omkara.Omkara’s music was soothing for him.Rudra was happy in his own world with his friend Omkara.He was not a weak person who cried through out thinking of his ill health.He believed in enjoying every bit of his life in a funny manner.Rudra,the Multi Millionaire could not enjoy his wealth because of his lifeless body.He knew that he was surrounded by his relatives who were his enemies actually.They were his mercy less blood suckers who pretended to be sweet only for his wealth.He knew that at any time they could kill him for that.He knew that if he could trust any of his relatives that was only Dev;his cousin.

Omkara was in his own little world which was decorated with Rudra’s friendship and his music.

 

Prologue:

A beautiful blue pool….

A beautiful girl drowned in the pool.Her cry was snatching the beauty of the innocent water pool.Omkara jumped into the pool and carried her in his arms.She looked at her savior with gratitude.

He placed her down.He stared at her.

“If you don’t know swimming why do you swim?”

“I came here with my friend to learn swimming.He got an urgent call and he left.That’s why…”

Before she could complete her sentence he left.

Another day….

The same girl sank in the sea.To her surprise this time also the same masculine hands saved her.Omkara.

She could’nt believe her eyes when he lifted her in his arms.

 

Omkara was irritated:You can’t even swim in a swimming pool.Then why did you try to swim in the sea?Are you mad?

She:Sorry…I was just wetting my legs.My leg slipped and I fell down.The waves carried me away.

Omkara:The next time onwards be careful.

She:Ok…and thanks for saving me twice.

Omkara:No mention.

He walked away.

 

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Congrats on the new story👍🏼Intro is superb😳Prologue is very intriguing..Excited for you to start it

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Nice prologue pls do continue

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terrific prologue! 

congrats on the FS

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Gauri drowning twice and Omkara saving her

This ff looks mysterious

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Thanks a lot friends



Part 1



Omkara gave an advertisement in the news paper searching for a home nurse to look after Rudra.

Rudra:Till now no one has come.Everyone who came here to look after me left.Now no one is willing to come.

Rudra talked in a jovial way.

Omkara smiled:Wait…some one will come.

It was raining….

Omkara stood at the verandah with Rudra at the wheel chair.They were enjoying the beauty of the rain drops.

RUDRA:Omkara,do you feel like composing a lovely song on rain?

OMKARA:Ya…

Suddenly his eyes fell on a lady who was walking towards them.

She was a simple pretty lady draped in an ordinary saree.Her big black bindi was very attractive and striking.Her hair strands fell on her face carelessly. She was completely drenched in the rain.In her wet saree her beautiful figure was noticeable.

Omkara and that lady were surprised o see each other.

She:Sir…you?

OMKARA:You?

Rudra:Who is she?

OMKARA:I have met her at beach and swimming pool.

She smiled:For him I am just a woman whom he has met at a few places.


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She looked at Omkara and said:But for me he is my savior.

 

He saved my life twice when I drowned in the water.

Omkara smiled.

RUDRA:Wow!That’s nice.

OMKARA:Your name?

She:I am Gauri.

OMKARA:I am Omkara.

GAURI:Sir…I came here for the job of a home nurse.

They were surprised.

OMKARA:As a home nurse?I can’t believe it.First I met you somewhere.Now you reached here as a home nurse.What a coincidence!

She smiled.

OMKARA:Have you worked anywhere?

GAURI:Ya…I have worked in an old age home.As a home nurse it’s going to be the first experience.

OMKARA:Your family?

GAURI:I have a mother and a sister.Actually my mother was’nt happy about this job.She is scared whether I will be safe.But somehow I managed to get her permission.





RUDRA:Are you not scared?

GAURI:A little bit.But now I am not.Omkara Sir is someone who saved my life and I am sure that he can’t trouble me.

RUDRA:What about me?

She just smiled.

RUDRA:Since I can’t move you don’t have to be scared of me.Right?





Gauri was embarrassed.

OMKARA:Whenever I see you, you are wet.





Gauri smiled:Ya…I am fond of water.That’s why I was not worried about getting wet in the rain while coming here.

RUDRA:But since you are a home nurse you can’t fall sick as you have to take care of a patient like me.So go change your wet saree.

She smiled.

She went and changed her saree.She wore a yellow Salwar Kameez.

Rudra told Omkara:Gauri is really impressed with you.For her,you are her Savior.

Will it turn into love?

Rudra had a naughty smile on his face.Omkara was shy.

Omkara went away.While passing by he saw Gauri drying her wet hair with a towel.

Her eyes met his.Slowly she smiled.



He was lost in her sweet mesmerizing smile.

 

Gauri came back to the room.

RUDRA:By the way we need to test your capability.Only if we are satisfied we will appoint you.

Gauri’s face became dull.

RUDRA:Get me a coffee please.

GAURI:Ok Sir.

Gauri made coffee for Rudra and Omkara.They tasted it.

OMKARA:Very nice.

Gauri was relieved.

RUDRA:Very nice coffee.

GAURI:Thank you Sir.

OMKARA:Stop calling us Sir.

RUDRA:Yes,if you call us sir we won't appoint you.

She smiled:Ok Rudra and Omkara.

They smiled.

RUDRA:You are appointed Gauri.

Gauri was very happy.

GAURI:Thank you…thanks a lot.

 

Gauri took care of Rudra very well.She fed him food.She gave him medicines on time.Omkara did’nt have to worry about Rudra at all.He trusted her that much.Very soon Gauri became their good friend.

They went out..chatted together.Gauri’s way of relaxation and entertainment was making bubbles.

 

She entertained Rudra and Omkara by making wonderful bubbles.


 

Gauri took them to the temple.The Idol of Goddess was decorated beautifully.But Omkara was lost in Gauri's beauty.



GAURI:Omkara,why are you looking at me?You pray.

 

Omkara was embarrassed:Sorry Gauri.I will pray.

Omkara closed his eyes and prayed.



Edited by jasminerahul - 4 years ago
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Omkara saving Gauri from drowning was heroic. Sad that Rudra is paralytic and no one came to take care of him. Glad that Gauri could manage to take permission from her mother and take care of Rudra. Glad that Omru appreciated Gauri's coffee and appointed her. Hope Rudra gets well soon.

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Good that now Gauri is home nurse for Rudra, now they are good friend, cool

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Awesome story

Love it

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

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lovely update! thanks for the pm