OS - Oops I'm In Love - Page 4

Originally posted by: aparna3011

wonderful os

Originally posted by: swapna.p

Lovely OS..

Waiting for happy ending..

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

<font color="#6600ff">hi thanks 4 da pm n emotional OS! well written! Feeling 4 Maan! he went through so much n gt married 2 Geet! she says she loves someoneelse! pls post next part 2 end it! thanks</font>

Originally posted by: _Chinmayi_

Nice Os

Originally posted by: nehaa9

nice os

Originally posted by: SANJANA9167

I hope u planned another part dear
Lovely one
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: sweetysaran

Loved it... But pls continue with happy ending like its a prank or she loves only maan type... It's just a suggestion... Do continue...

Originally posted by: its_me

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">Wow... It was so cute...</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">But I really hope you would be giving another part with a happy ending...😉</font>

Originally posted by: anu5

Cute OS dear

Loved it to the core!!

Maan was small and was fascinated to know what is love and abt it's feelings

Dadima's words played effects in his heart

His heart rang bell and he was in air seeing beautiful girls but alas did not last long

Maan had his share of crushes and finally got married to his bride of dadima's choice

Geet on their wedding night dropped bomb on him stating that she is in love with someone else and doesn't accept him as her husband

At the wink of time his heart crushed down and had tears on his eyes

Maan realised his love and was in pain witnessing his wife's pain which brought tears in his eyes!!

Lovely dear

Hope u will continue this One shot with maan persuading Geet with his own gesture that make her fall for him!!

😊