Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted
Hi Soha,
I finished all the chapters in one go last night. Your writing is incredible and addictive. The dialogues are funny, poignant and sexy! I loved the situations you put them in to build towards a beautiful romance. For eg. the garden scene was so endearing and sweet.
I understand it must take a hell of an effort to be this detailed but I really hope you continue this lovely tale. I have been a silent reader of IF for the longest time! I got a writerโs block years ago and just stopped expressing as much. Only logged in today after 5-6 years to express how much I loved your writing and how you have inspired me to work towards bettering my craft. Also, I donโt even watch KZK. Saw only the first couple of episodes and then never saw it again. I visited the forum on a whim to check if fan fictions are still a thing so many years later and came across your story! THATโs how awesome your work is ๐
I think you could explore a more raw sexy side of Bajaj in further chapters too. So far, we have seen how he is controlled and often unemotional in his approach. But what if you were to slowly bring out his animalistic side with regards to Prerna. That could lead to some delicious sexual encounters ๐ Tastefully written but definitely memorable. Something tells me you have a knack for writing sexually charged scenes but perhaps, the IF policies restrict you. Maybe you could post two versions of the same chapter - one without filter on the sexual scenes as an external link and one edited. That may give you a lot more freedom to explore.
If you have written more fan fictions in the past, I would love to read them too. Thank you for your efforts and detailed research on everything. How do you even know so much about the business bit?! I have an MBA and yet it would take me a while to refresh my Finance course. Oh, and I loved the whole Greek (?) mythology bit you wrote with Hades. Now THAT was something refreshing to read โค๏ธ
Awaiting the next chapter ๐๐ป
- Pratiksha
Hi Pratiksha!
What a lovely message you've left me. It's often a sore point that after putting in the kind of effort into research on the technical points - Like making sure there is actually a restaurant called Capella in Salt Lake in Kolkata - there aren't that many people who are gracious enough to leave messages. I know everyone is busy and stuff, but sometimes these kind of messages are the only fuel that makes me want to continue a piece.
I'll definitely be unraveling Rishabh. But it will be a slow, gradual process. I just don't buy into characters who change their personality overnight. ๐
Which is why Prerna is the more emotive one. She's always been a lot free-er with her emotions.
I work in the economics field. And what I don't know - I research. I'm not joking when I say, I spent quite a bit of time understanding how SEBI operates. Like if they can arrest and stuff. ๐คฃ
I'm so thrilled you liked the Hades and Persephone allusions. It was a defining moment in the story.
Again, thank you for your kind words.
- Sohaa
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