Added Chapter 23: All The King's Men: PreRish - Page 90 - Page 67

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Posted: 4 years ago

I had no hope for this chapter at all but here you are one fine day making all our lives slightly better with this supremely hot update! I suddenly have all these visuals of KSG in my head and gosh am I melting or what...........

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Posted: 4 years ago

Res res res..

Sohaa... You're back and how! This was some hot shit. And man I'm so excited to read more of this FF.

I'll leave you a detailed fan letter as soon as I'm done studying.

Love,

Aparna

Unres..

Man.. First things first. I missed you Sohaa. I missed reading your prose. Man how you invoke images in my head. And the way you describe the thought process of the characters. I'm right there with these fictional people. And then there's the dialogues. The banter, the insults, the taunts are all so perfect. And please take a bow for your absolutely awesome description of Rishabh Bajaj. You planted KSG in my head and I couldn't shake the image of him.

Nivedita and Bajaj interaction was so well done.. The grudging admiration between them, the exchange of words.. This is so well done. And I love how you incorporate these technical bits. Makes the characters and the plot all the more enriching.

But of course the cake was taken by the PreRish scene. They kissed. Be still my heart! I loved the tension you built here and the sort of tug of war they had going between them. I can't wait to see how their romance will unfold.

I will wait for your updates betaabi se. Tab tak ke liye.. my warmest regards and love.

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Posted: 4 years ago

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Posted: 4 years ago

Re-read. 😆

I totally love this one. ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Soha❤️

This is what they mean by saying back with a bang😎

I need a little time for the update to soak in and will be back😃

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hi!


What an update!! Uff! Loved it.

And please please do continue your updates. I love your Rishabh and Prerna. You have them so clearly etched, it's a pleasure to read.

I can't wait to read what's going to happen next

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

LOOK WHO IS BACK WHO IS BACK WHO IS BACK

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I had lost all hopes of you updating and felt

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And this one is so


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Pls pls pls be regular with updates henceforth

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Hope all is well at your end take care ❤️

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Your reactions 🤣

Thank you for such an expressive message. I am have an idea for the next update so atleast I should be able to get that written. Uske baad ka toh pata nahi.


Hope you're doing great and keeping safe!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: aryapdane

Res res res..

Sohaa... You're back and how! This was some hot shit. And man I'm so excited to read more of this FF.

I'll leave you a detailed fan letter as soon as I'm done studying.

Love,

Aparna

Unres..

Man.. First things first. I missed you Sohaa. I missed reading your prose. Man how you invoke images in my head. And the way you describe the thought process of the characters. I'm right there with these fictional people. And then there's the dialogues. The banter, the insults, the taunts are all so perfect. And please take a bow for your absolutely awesome description of Rishabh Bajaj. You planted KSG in my head and I couldn't shake the image of him.

Nivedita and Bajaj interaction was so well done.. The grudging admiration between them, the exchange of words.. This is so well done. And I love how you incorporate these technical bits. Makes the characters and the plot all the more enriching.

But of course the cake was taken by the PreRish scene. They kissed. Be still my heart! I loved the tension you built here and the sort of tug of war they had going between them. I can't wait to see how their romance will unfold.

I will wait for your updates betaabi se. Tab tak ke liye.. my warmest regards and love.


Aparna!


I know. I've been AWOL forever. Hopefully you'll also follow suit and continue your story. You know I'm your biggest taker.


I'm thrilled you liked the update. I was hoping that the tension I was creating in my head would translate. Pheww.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Sohali19


Your reactions 🤣

Thank you for such an expressive message. I am have an idea for the next update so atleast I should be able to get that written. Uske baad ka toh pata nahi.


Hope you're doing great and keeping safe!

There's so much to do. You can't say I have about the next and uske baad pata nahi 🥺🥺🥺🥺

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