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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhura..


You got confused. Check pg 1. I have edited and just put first page so you get a rough idea.

It's of this thread, so readers come and just put page no and navigate to the page of this thread.πŸ˜ƒ

Yeah... I actually got confused. Was slightly distracted and I realised it later when it had been some time after I posted the reply.

Shall we divide the pages amongst us? 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhura..


Yes, that was a different one. True. 

Thanks for telling handcuffs one.

Nushy - yes that scene yaar🀣

Yes, that panic mode was a different one.

πŸ€—

And both the scenes were definitely epic...

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Posted: 4 years ago

Yeah I checked. πŸ˜Š 

Thanks for the initiative dear! But I was thinking, why don't we copy the link of the specific post and add it? 


Like this - 

A Second Chance by nushy and nikki


Chapter 01 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/152972482


Chapter 02 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/152984731


Chapter 03(A) - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/152999876


Chapter 03(B) - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153023538


Chapter 04 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153055165


Chapter 05 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153067702


Chapter 06 (Last Chapter) - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153077278

Edited by nushy1995 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Nikki- No problem, glad you understood. Not now, let me do morrow

Nushy -  No,cos it looks a bit messy. We have many stories here..Am considering to put up a table. 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhura..

Nikki- No problem, glad you understood. Not now, let me do morrow

Nushy -  No,cos it looks a bit messy. We have many stories here..Am considering to put up a table. 

Okay! πŸ‘πŸΌ


Let me know which pages I should cover. BTW I noticed my first OS didn't have any title so added one. Please edit it when you make the index. πŸ˜Š

Edited by nushy1995 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Okay! πŸ‘πŸΌ


Let me know which pages I should cover. BTW I noticed my first OS didn't have any title so added one. Please edit it when you make the index. πŸ˜Š


πŸ˜ƒ

Sure, will tell you morrow.

Noted, will be doing it

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Done! I have include all the FFs in another thread (Hopefully) πŸ˜Š


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5159098

There is one more OS to be added... 

'The Interrogation' written by me.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

There is one more OS to be added... 

'The Interrogation' written by me.

I have updated the index. πŸ˜Š

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Posted: 4 years ago

Baithe baithe kya kare, karna tha kuch kaam

To likh diya ye chapter, leke prabhu ka naam


Okay, since I was bored and felt like writing something, I took the liberty of continuing Nushy's story. And I wrote this...

Khaali baithe-baithe flow flow main likh diya...

I hope it is not totally bakwas.

PS. I haven't proof read it. So, please ignore any mistakes that you find...

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Previous part: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153083374

                    Home Alone (contd)

β€œGet ready for my surprise Mr. Rathod! You don’t know what’s coming in your way.” 

Pia smirked... She knew exactly what she had to do to give a nice surprise to her husband.

She went inside to prepare for Ansh's welcome...


A few hours later, a cab stopped in front of their building and Ansh got out of it. He entered the lift and pushed the button for his floor.

On reaching his house, he put his bag down and called out to Pia.

When she didn't respond, he went around searching for her. After a few minutes, he heard the tinkling sound of Pia's earrings from the terrace...

"So, that's where she is!!" Thought Ansh.

He went to the terrace to meet Pia. But a surprise awaited him there...

The terrace was full of plants of defferent species. The walls were covered with creepers... It looked more or less like a small botanical garden. 

"The last time I saw so many plants was when Pia was possessed by Visharika..." 

Ansh was surprised. He started looking for Pia and finally found her sitting in the centre on a small seat, talking to a small plant and making it grow bigger by her powers.

"Pia..." He called out to her. 

But she did not respond. He called her again and finally she got up and turned around.

"Ansh... You are back!!" She exclaimed joyfully.

"Yeah... But what is all this?" He said, pointing at all those plants and creepers all around.

"These?" Pointing towards the creepers, she said "These are snakes, pythons and anacondas. And these..." She pointed towards the potted plants. "These are some small wild animals which I brought from the jungle."

"Come on Pia!!! I am serious..."

"So am I Ansh... So am I!!" Pia said in a calm voice. "When you can clearly see that these are plants then why are you asking such silly questions?"

"Okay... Okay fine!! But what are all these plants doing here?"

"They are practising salsa here!!" 

"Pia..." Ansh began to say something.

"Oh come on Ansh!! What would the plants do here? I have brought them here..."

"But why?"

"You know how much I love plants, don't you?"

"So?" "So, I brought them here." Pia said, nonchalantly.

"But..." Ansh stopped mid-sentence because he saw a read streak on Pia's hair. He was instantly reminded of Visharika.

"Pia... Did you get your hair coloured?"

"No... I didn't. You know I don't like all this, don't you?"

Ansh turned around, his back facing Pia. He was trying to join all the dots together. 

"All these plants here in the terrace... Pia's hair slowly turning red... Does this mean that Pia is again possessed by Visharika? No..no...no... This can't happen. Papa had said that Visharika is gone forever. How can she be back?"

If he would have turned around at that moment, he would have got the answer about Visharika being back because all this while, Pia was silently laughing behind his back.

"Ansh..." She called out softly, in an innocent voice.

Ansh turned around.

"Pia... Are you okay?"

"Of course I am okay Ansh... Why? Was something supposed to be wrong with me?"

"No... Nothing like that."

"Then what Ansh?"

Ansh did not know from where to begin. He was about to say something when Pia put her arma around his neck and he saw a blue scratch mark on her neck. 

He was shocked to the core... All the pieces of the puzzle fell in place. That blue scratch was the same as before. Pia had again brought all those plants to the terrace. Her hair were again turning red. She was again possessed by Visharika!!

This realisation hit him like a lightening bolt... He was stunned.

Seeing his shocked face, Pia could not control herself. She burst out laughing...

Seeing her laugh, Ansh was even more confused. "What? Why are you laughing?"

"I never thought that you would be so easy to fool..." 

"Means?" 

In response, Pia did not say anything but pulled out the false red coloured hair extensions from her hair. She then removed the fake scratch mark from her neck. 

"So, how was the surprise Mr. Rathod?"

"Surprise? You call it a surprise?" Said Ansh. "It is not called a surprise... It is called a heart attack."

Pia burst out laughing yet again... 

Seeing her laughing, Ansh started tickling her as a revenge.

"Stop... Ansh..."

Saying this, she ran away from there. Ansh followed her and soon, the house was echoing with the sound of their laughter...

Edited by Nikki_srk - 3 years ago


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Posted: 4 years ago

Nikki, this was HILARIOUS to the core, could actually imagine their interaction.

Way Pia planned and Ansh got shocked so easily, and was right cos for him, this was a heart attack and Pia had great fun.

Liked the ending a lot!!