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Posted: 1 months ago

This is a thread for writing stories, on Nazar characters. Taking a creative way, you can write anything from Spin a Yarn to Head canons 


Spin a yarn : Short stories can be continued by other members.  A person can start and write a few stanzas, and the other person continues the story from where it's left. This adds twists and turns to the story.


Head canons - It's a story you write in around 5 lines


One Shots


So let's start!smiley4


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One Shots


Untitled by Nushy - Pg 1

The Irritating Trip by Nikki - Pg 1

Edited by Madhura.. - 3 days ago
Posted: 1 months ago

Warmth


Ansh was working on his laptop when Adi knocked at the door. “Yes Adi!” “Papa can you help me 

with these words?” “Sure beta!” “What’s the difference between hotness and warmth? I mean, both 

means rise in the temperature, right? But in this book, at certain sentences the poet has used warmth 

and otherwise he has used hotness. Why?” Ansh smiled at Adi and tried to explain. “Well, by hot, we 

mean something that has more temperature compared to the surrounding. It’s like the summer sun at 

midday, not comfortable at all. But warmth it’s......” Ansh looked at the balcony and caught a sight 

of Piya who was watering the plants. “Warmth - it’s more like a feeling, when you feel comfortable 

like when it’s raining or snowing outside and you are sitting next to a fireplace. That time the fire would 

makes you comfy. It’s not hot but warm.” “Okay! Thanks papa!” Adi left the room while Ansh kept 

looking at Piya. Warmth!!! Unknowingly a smile crept into his lips. That woman right there, 

was the personification of this word in his life. In every step of the way, where he felt 

miserable, she held his hand and assuaged his fear, giving him the assurance that everything 

was going to be fine. In his ice-cold, dark world, she brought light and warmth. Piya turned 

around and got surprised looking at the way Ansh was gazing at her. “But yes! Definitely hot!!!” 

Ansh laughed in his mind and concentrated on his work. 

Edited by nushy1995 - 3 days ago
Posted: 1 months ago

Wow!!! Sooo beautiful... smiley27

You have described Ansh's feelings so perfectly and so beautifully... smiley32 smiley32

I just loved it... smiley27

I must say, you are an expert when it comes to writing soft and emotional scenes... smiley32 

I am still in awe of your skills...

Can I get tution classes from you? smiley36

PS. After Adi left, you have written "Ansh kept looking at Ansh"... Shouldn't it have been Pia instead?

Edited by Nikki_srk - 1 months ago
Posted: 1 months ago

Nushy, the story is beautiful.

Firstly, I love Adi, and Adi and Ansh scene was written amazingly. Like the way Ansh explained so well in detail, was great.

Plus again way he looked at Piya and remembered her journey, was penned down amazingly.

Agree with Nikki you are pro in writing soft and emotional scenes.

Keep writing more.

Posted: 1 months ago

Nikki & Madhura!!!


Thanks for your kind words. smiley1 To be honest, my mom would have a heart attack if she found out that I wrote something romantic and other people actually appreciated it. smiley36


Neither bragging nor being modest here. I write from emotional outbursts. smiley24 Like you people have so many ideas but everything I have written so far, they do have personal touch.


I would say, today was a good yet gloomy day and I came up with this. Your encouragement means a lot to me.....


Can't wait to read your stories... smiley1

Edited by nushy1995 - 1 months ago
Posted: 1 months ago

Okay, this is a totally random one... Am writing such a short story for the first time so don't kill me please for this smiley36


It is on the bus scene during the college trip...

               The Irritating Trip


Ansh was really irritated...

He did not want to go to this stupid college trip but he was forced by his cousins to accompany them. 

Then, Neha made Pia sit next to him and both the girls were chatting non-stop as if there was some radio fitted inside their throats without any pause/stop button.

"How can anyone talk this much?" Was the first thought that came to Ansh's mind.

He was getting really frustrated... He wanted to tape the mouths of both Pia and Neha shut. How he wished he had never agreed to come!! 

And to top it all, he was getting distracted by the sound of Pia's earrings...

"What I wouldn't give to just shut the mouths of these two!!" thought Ansh.

He plugged in his ear pods to avoid the useless talks of those two girls... Whom was he kidding?? He was actually trying to escape the tinkling sound of Pia's earrings...

He turned the music volume to its full... Still, the sound was audible!!

"This is just impossible!!!" He burst out. 

Both Pia and Neha jumped in their seats as a result of his outburst. Ansh was laughing in his mind...

"Serves them right" he thought "for disturbing me." 

All the students in the bus were staring at him... He just shut his eyes to avoid their stares.

He turned off the music as it was not helping him... 

And as soon as he did that, the sound of Pia's earrings was audible, louder than before... He felt as if someone had placed a loudspeaker next to his ears.

He gripped the iron rail of the window to steady himself.

With each passing minute, he unconsciously tightened his grip... He only let go off the rail when the bus stopped and the students prepared to deboard the bus.

When he turned around, he was shocked... 

Because the iron rail had been totally bent out of shape when he had gripped it 'lightly'...


PS. Pehli baar likha hai to please thoda pyaar se gaaliyan dena... smiley36

Edited by Nikki_srk - 1 months ago
Posted: 1 months ago

Originally posted by nushy1995


Nikki & Madhura!!!


Thanks for your kind words. smiley1 To be honest, my mom would have an heart attack if she found out that I wrote something romantic and other people actually appreciated it. smiley36


Neither bragging nor being modest here. I write from emotional outbursts. smiley24 Like you people have so many ideas but everything I have written so far, they do have personal touch.


I would say, today was a good yet gloomy day and I came up with this. Your encouragement means a lot to me.....


Can't wait to read your stories... smiley1


You are welcome Nushy! Well why not? Family has different perception in a few things.


Ohh! This happens, it's channelising your energy. Take care though and we should experience, talk it out, so it helps.


Ohh! Take care, and we are glad it does.


smiley4 I did post the one I mentioned on Pg 73 in the other thread, would like to know your views.

Posted: 1 months ago

Yeah, I have read and commented there. smiley36 smiley36 smiley36 It's hilarious!!! smiley37 smiley37 smiley37


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