Originally posted by: Viswasruti
If you’re a creative of any kind, then you’ve experienced the intense desire to express your thoughts about a specific character in your own way to hook up your readers with the content of the story.
While roaming listlessly in an unknown forum lane, saw this OS, stopped for a while to peep into its content. For my surprise, found a gem full of ardours!
The brief notes type description of places, and passions, the psychoanalytical type narrative while telling the state of mind of Prerna, esp in stressful circumstances… wah…loved this powerful writing style in these sentences.👏
‘… the unnamed, unsaid fears are gripping her, the restlessness is setting in what looks like worry, concern, fear ..’
‘standing near the window, hugs herself tight[ this phrase is worth to ponder for a while] and closes her eyes .. with only one wish, to see him safely back home ...’
‘her right hand in a fist and clings on to her mangal sutra with her left fist ..recollecting…’ the reader connects with that character instantaneously while reading these lines.😊
‘they both understood what they did here and acknowledge it with a smile .....’ --the entire scene, playing caroms and making their daughter win, with simple words you simply make your reader connect with that bonding, normally in every house, parents do such small things to please their offsprings! Her emotional expressions when he appears in front of her …--- when reading, I felt like --In your own words – 'like a kid in a candy store!’ 😊
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