Amends

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Chapter 2 - Yaariyaan

Published On Saturday,Apr 27, 2024 13:44 PM GMT-06:00

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Taanirey2101
Taanirey2101 @Taanirey2101 13 days ago Uffff!!!!!!!!
The rehearsal hall fight scene of REYAM,how can one forget. The only time i was confused back in time who was correct Rey or swayam
Coming to update amazingly described the scene yaar, you know i could visualise every line seriously and kya place pe TAANI ki re entry karvai kyaaaa maza aagya. It just blended of well with the scrne like it was actually there since forever 😃😃😃😃
In all loved the update…as always


Waiting for the stor ahead and keeping fibgers crossed 🤞🏻🤞🏻🤞🏻
Jasmine_ash
Jasmine_ash @Jasmine_ash 15 days ago Taani back yupieee waiting to see how Taani going to move this
atulaya_taarey
Niketha @atulaya_taarey 16 days ago What an update.the dialogues were so intense and the anger and the emotions.very well written 🔥
Nupurjaishwal
Nupurjaishwal @Nupurjaishwal 18 days ago Woow nice par aisa lag raha tha jaise mai D3 dekh rahi hu.... Taani's entry was awesome continue soon as possible
ShifaD07
Shifa @ShifaD07 19 days ago Awesome part
Taani is back, eagerly waiting for next part, Update soon...💞
princess_ishu
Ishani @princess_ishu 21 days ago Why so short???? Aghhh i wanted to read more. But ufff the drama ughhh i used to be soo mad at Rey during these episodes and i am having the same feelings now he was so delusional and dumb that he was completely out of character. Poor Swayam he was trying so hard to be a good friend but what more could he do. Love Taani's entry... She should have given Rey a piece of her mind but we know she doesn't speak much when she is angry... Smart girl. I hope the next chapter has some much needed conversation and also would love to see some Taani and Swayam scenes
foreverlazy
Diya @foreverlazy 22 days ago Last thing, I promise!!! Please don't take this the wrong way, but the two intro paragraphs just felt a little too exposition-heavy. I understand wanting to explain the situation and was going in the show at the moment, but I think it would've just flowed better if it was maybe broken some of the dialogue. For example, that one line about Swaron's date that you inserted mid-paragraph felt awkward and random because of its placement. If you'd had just Rey and Sharon talking and then added in some of the expository bits, it would've felt less like a summary and more like a part of the story.
foreverlazy
Diya @foreverlazy 22 days ago My heart absolutely broke for Sharon though! You wrote desperation to try and keep things together really well and it's hard to see a character like Sharon who is so no-nonsense and has this 'take no BS' sort of attitude be pushed to a point where she's just vulnerable. I think the contrast between her and Taani is so interesting because while Sharon learned to open up her heart, Taani became more and more closed off. It's made her a lot stronger and in her eyes, more like Sharon (who I think she's always looked up to and this is just never discussed), but at what cost you know? In my delusional mind, they're gonna help each other get through this but what do I know? 🤷🏽
foreverlazy
Diya @foreverlazy 22 days ago I personally think Swayam's more upset about Rey not realizing that what Adi's doing is making Sharon uncomfortable like, I remember in the Goa episodes with Taani, Rey was trying to get Sharon in the water and she was visibly upset and holding onto Swayam. Him making Rey let go of her was less out of jealousy and more out of concern for Sharon (at least that's how I understood that scene, and how Swayam comes off in this chapter to me). Neither of them are acting on logic despite what Rey says. Rey's loneliness and his pride are absolutely clouding his judgement. He can't see beyond his own opinions, what said to Taani just proved it.
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