I posted a comment to the Comments section in the chapter but adding it here as well, because IF is so clunky like that!
I love the date and the proposal! So very ShiVi that it starts off a certain way but they make it their own! I loved that Shiva tried SO SO SO hard to pull off the perfect date, watched youtube videos, and show her how much thought he was willing to put in to make her happy! I love a caring man, and Shiva is all that and some more.
My favorite part has to be the shift in the air, when ShiVi just started play-fighting and ran into the waters, getting themselves wet in the process! Something about that is so *them* its beautiful.
Now, please can they get, um... going and we get faster updates? *puppy dog eyes*
THANK-YOU for updating and picking up this beautiful story!
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