Mehr......Sujal&Kashish.....last-part....8/10

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Mehr

Kashish Singhania : Main ....is kahani ki Dulhan .......main yeh to nahi janti ki main kiski Dulhan banugi........lekin bachpan se hi muje mere sapno me kisi ki parchai dikhai deti hai.......ek aawaz jo mere saansoin me gunjti rehti hai......mera yeh vishwas hai ki upperwale ne sare dil ke ristey pehle se hi jud diye hai....bas uska milna humpe chod diya hai.......shyad mere liye bhi koi jeevansathi banaya gaya hai.........kehte hai jo hota hai woh sab upperwale ki marzi hoti hai.............muje apni zinadi se koi shikayat nahi hai..................

Sujal Garewal: jab hum is duniya me aate hai to upperwala hume sabko dikhata hai....Mama...Papa....Bhai....Behen......Bas ek wahi chehra woh hume nahi dikhata.....pata nahi kyun wahi chehra woh humse chupake rakhta hai.......wahi chehra jise hume ek din pyaar ho jata hai.....is liye to usne hume ek dil diya hai ....jisme dhadkan bajti hai lekin abhi bhi koi naam sunai nahi deta.......jisme aaj bhi kisi ka intzaar rehta hai......kaun hai woh jo mere sapno me aake muje satati hai......lekin kya pata zindagi ke kis mod pe woh muje mil jaye...........

Harsh Singhania: Maine zindagi se jo manga usne muje diya hai......aaj Shimla me bahot bada naam hai karobar hai.....lekin muje isi baat ka afsoos hai ki main meri pehli patni Nandini ko nahi bacha saka........Nandini joki Kashish ki maa hai aur wahi Kashish ki waje se maine apni Nandini ko kho diya......pata nahi lekin jab bhi main use dekhta hoon muje woh Nandini ki maut ki jimedar lagti hai.......maine hamesha se Kashish ko apne aap se dur rakha lekin Maine Kashish ki zindagi me kabhi Maa ki kami puri nahi hone dii.........

Maya Singhania: Main kehla ne ko to Harsh ki dusri biwi hoon lekin Harsh ne muje kabhi yeh ehsaas nahi hone diya.......Maine Kashish aur apne bete me kabhi koi matbhed nahi kiya........Kashish hai hi itni pyaari.......shayad isi liye bhagwan ne muje beti nahi dii.......pichle 25 saal se me Harsh ko samjati aa rahi hoon lekin aaj tak uske dil se yeh baat nikalti hi nahi ki........woh yeh nahi jante ki Kashish ko ek baap ki zaroor hai...ek beti ko jitni zaroor maa ki hai utni hi pita ke pyar ki.....

Neev Singhania: Muje kaun nahi janta.......main is ghar ka sabse chota handsom beta jo hoon........abhi to main college main hoon lekin maine abhi se thodi bahot Papa ki madad karna shuru kar diya hai........Kyunki Kashishdii aisa chahti hai......aur aap sab to jante hai ki Main Dii ko kaise mana kar sakta hoon........Dii mere liye sab kuch hai.......woh meri behen....meri dost.....meri guru.......sab kuch.......shyad Maa ke bad main sabse jyada kisi se pyaar karta hoon to Dii se.........

Rishab Garewal: Waise main kuch hi saal pehle London se yaha Shimla me rehne ke liye aaya hoon........apne parivar ko apne desh ki sanskriti se milvana chahta tha.......waise maine kaam ke saath apne parivar ko bahot hi ahem mana hai.......kyunki mera manna hai ki hum jo kuch bhi hai woh sab hamara parivar hai........hum to pichle paanch saal se yaha reh rahe hai lekin mera beta aaj bhi London me apni padhai kar raha hai.....bahot hi jald woh wapas aa raha hai.......

Prerna Garewal: main aisi hoon jaisi ek maa ko hona chahiye......aaj se 27 saal pehle Rishab ke saath apna desh chod ke gaye the......lekin aaj main bahot khush hoon apne ghar wapas aake.......muje mere bacho se bahot pyaar hai...........waise meri beti ko to jo chahiye woh apne papa se keh deti hai lekin mera Sujal.....kabhi kisi se kuch nahi kehta.......lekin muje yakeen hai ki ek din woh apne sapnowali se zaroor milega.......

Prachi Garewal: kya batau main apne bare me.......Shayad mama ne meri shaitani ke bare me to aap sabko bata hi diya hoga.......mama hamesha kehti rehti hai ki bhai ne hi muje bigad ke rakha hai........lekin mama nahi janti ki main Bhai se kitna pyaar karti hoon.....main kabhi uski baat tal nahi sakti.........uski ke kehne pe to main yaha pe aai hoon.......lekin jante ho yaha aake muje laga ki yeh jagah kitni khubsurat hai.......aur khas karke mere dost jo college me mere saath hai........

Kavya Nanda; maine kuch hi saal pehle ek accident me apne parents ko kho diya lekin Prernamasi ne muje kabhi Maa ki kami mehsoos nahi hone di.....Rishabmasa kehte hai ki bahot hi kam umar maine bahot kuch pa liye lekin darsal yeh sab mere Papa ka sapna tha.......waise ladkiyaan mujpe marti hai lekin main Shaadisuda hoon aur agar meri biwi ne muje yeh sab kehte sun liya to mera khoon kar degi........

Anjali Nanda; college ke zamane se main Kavya ko janti hoon........waise mazak karna uski aadat hai lekin mere alawa aaj tak kisi aur ke bare me usne socha bhi nahi........hum dono ek dusre se bahot pyar karte hai.......kyunki hum dono hi is duniya me akele hai.......hum dono ko hi ek dusre ka sahara banna tha.......waise prernamasi bahot khayal rakhti hai hamara......

 

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hey gr8 intro do cont soon,me eagerly waiting....
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Hey nice part.....continue soon!! 😳
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hey great intro yaar, i was sad that the sea of love ended but i am vry glad you started this one.

Don't make me wait long and continue soon.
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hey a beautiful intro cont all ur ff soon
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Wow I just read it and it sounds amazing
Continue soon
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Part-1

Singhania Mension puri tarah se roshni se sajaya gaya hai...........Singhania Mension me se shahenai ki gunj sunai de rahi hai........sare ghar me chahel pahel machal di hai.......Aisa lag raha hai jaise zameen pe janant utar aai ho........Jab ghar ke samne ek car khadi hoti hai aur jis me se ek parivar utharke ghar ke andar jate hai.........jab woh andar jate hai to sari taiyariyaan dekhte hi reh jate hai.......

Maya: Suniye aap........aap jaldi se paghdi bandh dijiye........kisi bhi waqt barat aa sakti hai.....

Harsh: abhi bas thode log se mil loon phir..........woh dekho.........Rishab bhi apne parivar ke saath aa gaye......chalo bhi.....uska swagat karte hai......

Maya: chaliye....

Harsh: Namaste Rishab.........aaiye .........

Rishab: beti ki shaadi bahot bahot mubarak ho.......

Maya: kaisi ho Prerna......andar aao........

Rishab: yun to hum kayi bar business meeting me aur party me milte rahe lekin aaj is tarah ghar ki shaadi me bulakar aapne hume apna bana liya......

Prerna: Maya.......inse milo yeh hai meri beti....Prachi.....

Prachi jake Maya aur Harsh ke pair chuti hai..........

Harsh: Rishab.......itne saal videsh me rehkar bhi jo sanskar aur sanskrit tune apne bacho ko diye hai......sach me ek hindustani ke liye garv ki baat hai.......

Prerna: nahi.....yeh sab to hamare dil me hota hai............lekin aapka beta.......

Maya: yaheen hoga........Neev..........

jab Neev sidiyon se apne haath me pholon ki tokri leke aata hai......

Neev: jee Mama.....

Harsh: beta.......yeh hamare Dost Rishab Garewal aur unki patni Prerna hai.......

Neev: Namaste....

Neev jake pair chuta hai.....

Maya: aur yeh inki beti......

Neev: Prachi Garewal........hum log college me saath padhte hai......

Prachi: haa aauntie......hum log pehle mil chuke hai.....

Maya: Neev.....jake Prachi ko apne dosto ke pass le jao....

Neev: aao Prachi.....

Neev aur Prachi chale jate hai.........

Harsh: Rishab........apne bete ko saath nahi laye......

Prerna: are hamare saath hi to aaya tha........kal hi London se lauta hai.......

Rishab: Lagta hai........Kavya aur Anjali ka intzaar kar raha hoga.........shayad use hi phone kar raha hoga......

Harsh: lagta hai barat aa gayi.......chalo Maya.......

Maya: hum log aate hai..........

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Hum log dekhte hai ki ek ladka bahar garden me kisi ko phone laga raha hota hai.........

Ladka: kaha ho bhaiyaa........kab se aapka intzaar kar raha hoon.......

Kavya: Main abhi pahonch hi raha hoon........yeh Anjali bhi na hamesha dair karti rehti hai.....lekin tum anadar to jao.....

Ladka: main yaha kisi ko nahi janta.....main aapka intzaar kar raha hoon..........bye......

Anjali: kya kaha.....maine dair ki........yeh kyun nahi kehte ki tumhe mujse jyada waqt lagta hai....

Kavya: galti ho gayi.......mafi.....

Anjali: thik hai........lekin kya hua.....

Kavya: yeh ladka bhi ajeeb hai.......logo se milega nahi to rishtey kaise banayega..........pata nahi iska kya hoga......

Anjali: mera ek hi Devar hai aur use tumne kuch bura kaha to........

Kavya: achcha nahi kahunga.........

Anjali; Jante ho........woh dil ka bahot hi bhola hai.........kisi pe bhi yakeen kar leta hai......muje darr hai ki kahi kisi din jaldbazi me aake woh koi galat kadam na utha le..........

Kavya: nahi.......woh hai mujse chota lekin bahot hi samjdar hai........

Anjali: woh to hai.....

Kavya: matlab main nahi hoon.....

Anjali: haa......

Kavya; kya kaha.......

Anjali: I love you.......

Kavya: I love you too.......

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Ladka garden me khada aasman me chand ko dekh raha tha jab woh kisi ke choodiyon ki aawaz sunta hai.........woh us ladki ke pass jata hai.......

Ladka: hi......taare dekh rahi ho.......

Ladki: inme apni maa ko dhundh rahi ho......kehte hai her ek maa ka sapna hota hai apni beti ko dulhan ke jode me dekhne ka........

Ladka: woh to hai.......lekin tum kuch pareshan lag rahi ho......

Ladki; muje kuch waqt ke liye akela rehna hai....

Ladka: iska matlab tumhe zaroor koi pareshani hai......waise maine suna hai ki khushi batne se badhti hai aut dukh batne se kum hota hai.......

Ladka uske pass beth jaya hai......

ladka :waise hum hai to ajnabee.....na main tumhe janta hoon......na tum muje...... lekin kabhi kabhi hum kuch baatein apno ke saath nahi kar pate....... lekin kisi ajnabee ke saath kar lete hai kyunki hum jante hai ki kuch pal baad woh ajnabee apni zindagee me wapas laut jayenge.......na mere tumhara is mulaqat se koi wasta na uske bad..........lekin yahi ek pal hai jaha tum apne dil ki baat muj ajnabee se kar sakti ho......tum mujpe yakeen kar sakti ho kyunki main mud ke kabhi tumhari zindagi me nahi dekhunga......ab tum muje apni pareshani bataogi,.....main tumhe sahi rasta dikhaunga aur phir apne raste chala jaunga..........ab aage tumhari marzi........lekin woh rai ek aise insaan ki hogi jise na tumse koi rista na tumhare apno se.......yeh rasta sirf tumhe ek ajnabee hi bata sakta hai........barat ghar me aa chuki hai........aur is andheri jagah me ek ladki aur woh bhi dulhan ke jode me..........apne akelepan ko apni palko me saja ke.....apne hoth se apni adhuri kahani batane ki koshish .........yeh dulhan aise saji hai jiske khud ke pass uske sawaal ka jawaab nahi.......tumne yeh Dulhan ka joda jo pehna hai yeh pyaar ka rang hai lekin tumhe dekhakar aisa lagta hai ki tumpe yeh rang abhi chada hi nahi......aisi kaun si baat hai jo tumhare hoth pe aake ruk jati hai.......kya yeh ajnabee tumhari koi sawaal ke jawaab de sakta hai.......

Jab us ladki aankhoin me ruke huye aanshu behne lagte hai.....

Ladka: mere ek sawaal ka jawaab do.......andar mandap me jo betha hai kya woh tumhara pyaar hai.......

Ladki apni beegi huyi aankh se use dekhti hai.....

Ladka: haa ya naa.....

Ladki: Pata nahi......

Ladka: iska matlab tum use pyaar nahi karti.......

Ladki: aisa nahi hai.....Swayam achcha ladka hai.......papa ke dost ka beta hai..........papa ne use mere liye chuna hai.......kuch achcha sochke hi unhone yeh faisla liya hoga......

Ladka: yeh to mere sawaal ka jawaab nahi hua........

Ladki: pyaar ....pyaar ka kya woh to kisi se hi ho jata hai.......lekin Mohabbat.....jo hum kisi ek se karte hai.......jise hum hamesha apne khwaboin me sajate hai....jiske liye humne apne dil me us mahobbat ki jagah bana di hai...Mahobaat ke ek lamhe me jine ke liye log apni puri zindagi uska intzaar karte hai.....maine bhi aaj tak wahi kiya.....intzaar......aur shayad zindagi bhar karti rahungi...lekin ek darr lagta hai ki kahi meri Mohabbat sach me muje shaadi ke baad mil gayi to......

Ladka: dhundhogi to milegi.....hum apni mohabbat ka intzaar puri zindagi to nahi kar sakte na......shayad hamare haath me kuch bhi nahi jo hota hai woh sab in haath ki lakeero me......apni is mahobbat ki khoj ka anth mat samjana kya pata yahi se hi iski shuruaat ho....kya pata yeh tumhara honewala pati hi tumhari mahobbat ho...........ab andar jao.......shaadi karo aur......hamesha apne pati ke saath khush raho......

Ladki: aapka bahot bahot sukhriya..........waise main Kashish Singhania......

Ladka: Sujal..........Sujal Garewal........

Sujal aur Kashish dono ek dusre ki aankhoin me khoye huye hota hai jab.....

Neev: Dii.......aap yaha kya kar rahi hai.........chaliye....Papa aapko bula rahe hai.......

Kashish Neev ke saath jane lagti hai.........jab Kashish phir se piche mudti hai....

Kashish: aap se milke achcha laga.......

Sujal: muje bhi.........

Neev Kashish ka haath pakad ke use Mandap tak le jata hai................Sujal bas use dekhte hi rehta hai.........

Edited by goodkashish - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey awesome part kashish, awesome concept it's different from the other's!!!!!!!.....kashish aur sujal mile tho par kashish kie shadie par .......!!!!!!  i have the same question as kashish.....agar usko uska pyaar shaddi key baad mila to kya hoga???????.........the love intro....kavya n anjali part was cute !!!!!!!!........why doesn't her dad forgive her? it wasn't her fault that her mother died ! .........but good 2 know that maya love's her like her own child !!!!........continue soon plzzzzzzzzzz......can't wait for the next part........waitting eagerly!!!!!!!111 
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow......mujhe KANK ka srk-rani dialogue yaad agaya 😆
Nice part!!
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hey nice fan fic-- sounds interesting--
par mujhe bhi KANK ki jhalak dikh rahi hai--
pls dont tell me ke yeh KANK with kashish and sujal hai-- coz i dont want them to be separated !!-- altho in KANK i liked the guy rani married- ie abhishek-- but swayam's character-- not so much so even if she leaves him i dont tink i'll really mind--
newez-- cant wait to see wats gonna happen nxt ! :D