<<<ANJANA RISHTA>>> Part 1-4 new 5

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Anjana Rishta
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In Sanjeevani Hospital

Dr. Shashank :Dean
Dr. Keerti : Cardiologist
Armann : Doctor
Muskan : Doctor n Armann's Fiancee
Atul : Doctor
Rahul : Doctor
Anjali :Doctor n Shashank's daughter
Padma : Head Nurse
Ridhima

n many more yet not decided

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Part 1

Night 2:30

Armann's House, mobile ringin, sm1 under d blanket
One hand frm blanket

Person : kaun hai itni rat ko disturb kar raha hai
Voice : Hello Hello plz. mujhse bat kijiye

Person frm blanket : who's there
Voice :Dekhiye plz. meri madad kijiye, mein yahan gandhi road par telephone booth se bat kar rahi hoon, mere peeche kuch gunde pade hai, meri plz. madad kijiye.

Person came out of blanket, it's Armann

Armi: dekhiye aap ghabraiye nahi, mein pahunch raha hoon, aap wahan se

nikaliyega nahi.
Voice : aaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa plz. mujhe bacha lijiiiiiiiii ye

Armi came out running n starts d car. On gandhi road he has checked all d booths but he found no 1

Suddendly frm a narrow street
1 girl came running n hugs Armi.
Armi confused wants 2 check

Girl: meri plz. madad kkkkaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrroooooooo
n faints

Armi saw few men watchin evrythg but dey ran

Armi: eyy kaun ho tum, yahan par itni rat ko aur .......

Girl opens her eyes saw Armi n faints again
Armi took her 2 his home

Servant opens d door
Servant : yeh kaun hai
Armi : pata nahi
n took her 2 his room, checks her pulse n whole night he was taking care of

her.

Next Morning wen he got up d girl has already left

Armi came out n asked servant "woh ladki kahan gayi"
Servant "woh to subah hi chali gayi sahab aur aapke liye yeh chiddhi de gayi

hai"

Armi opens d letter

Letter

" Hamara aapka koi rishta nahi par phir bhi aapne meri madad ki, is ke liye shukriya kah kar mein aapke ahsano ko chota nahi karoongi. Aapke khyal mein yeh zaroor aa raha hoga ki mein kaun hoon aur mein aapko hi kyun madad ke liye bulaya, bus yun samajh lijiye ki na jane kyun mere hath telephone booth par inhi numberon par gaye, shayad yahi bhagwan ki marzi thi ki aap meri madad kare aur hamare beech koi rishta na hote hue bhi ek Anjana Rishta bane. Mein aapko aur is anjane rishton ko salam karti hoon. Agar zindagi mein kabhie bhi meri zaroorat pade to bus mujhe dil se yad kijiyega ------- anjani sathi"

 

 

 

 

Part 2

Next Day
D backdrop is of hospital n one lady Dr. sitting on chair, d name plate is of Dr. Muskan Chopra, Paediatrician

Suddendly Armi enters "Hi Muskan"
Muskan "Oh ! hi Armann. Kaise ho tum"
Armi " Kyun mujhe kya hua"
Muskan "Are nahi subah yar meine phone kiya tha to tum so rahe the. Tum itni late tak sote nahi ho na tabhie mujhe laga ki tumhari tabiyat....."

Armi "Kuch nahi hua meri tabiyat ko."

Muskan "Accha hi hai nahi to tum mujhse seva karvate aur mein bechari ek abla nari kya karti, seva karti aakhir tum mere hone wale pati jo ho"

Armi smiles "Muskan tum bhi na din mein bees bar mujhe yeh yad dilati ho"

Muskan "Kya karoo janu tum ho hi aise na jane kitni choodailo ki nazar lagi hai tum par"

Armi just smiles "Accha mein is liye aaya tha ki woh jo patient hai hamari

Minnie uska case file chahiye tha"

Muskan "Magar woh to aaj subah hi discharge ho gayi"

Armi angry "Discharge ho gayi, kaise discharge ho gayi, kisne karwaya use, mein poochta hoon ki jab mein head hoon is case ka to tumne mujhse bagair pooche use jane kaise diya, aakhir mein paediatric head hoon sanjjevani ka"

Muskan "maf karna yaar par uski badi bahan aayi thi kah rahi thi ab uska ghar par ilaz karegi woh phir Dr. Shashank ka permission tha uske pas, mere pas aur koi chara nahi tha, aur case file bhi wohi le gayi hai"

Armi "Damn uski badi behan, magar woh to delhi mein thi medical ki padai kar rahi thi, mujhe minnie ne bataya tha, uska no. dena, uski to mein khair leta hoon mujhse pooche bina........." bangs d table

Muskan little scared "dddddd deti hoon. Tum naraz mat ho" seachin "kahan

rakha, yahin to rakha tha, yeh lo"

Armi connects d phone frm Sanjeevani
Voice frm dere "Hello"
Armi finds d voice familiar
Armi "mein sanjeevani se bol raha hoon, minnie ka dr"
Voice "woh ab sanjeevani mein nahi rahegi, mere pas rahegi"
Armi "dekheyiye uska yahan rahna bahut zaroori hai"
Voice "nahi woh mere sath rahegi aur mein uska ilaz karoongi"
Armi "y don't u understand she needs special care n ne time she can need oxyzen n all"
Voice "dat's my problem, not ur's goodbye" she disconnects
Armi in tension "yeh awaz suni si lag rahi thi"

Later at home Armi sittin alone n thinkin abt d girl whom he saved.
He thinks of her long hairs, scared but beutiful eyes, her face n her huggin Armi.
Suddendly servant frm bhind "aapka khna lag gaya hai"
Armi as if woke up frm a dream "aa ha tum chalo mein aata hoon"
2 himself "yeh kya ho raha mujhe, us ladki ka khyal mere dil se jata hi nahin"
getz up "sudhar ja Armann sudhar ja Muskan ko pata chalega to mar dalegi magar woh............. I can't stop thinkin of her" n starts dreaming again.

 

 

 

Part 3

Armi at d dinner table. Suddenly he saw his dream girl comes from d front door n sits on d chair just bside him n looking at him.
"Sahab Sahab " suddendly once again he got up frm his dream irritated "kya hai"
Servant  "sahab aap pani khane mein dal rahe hai"
Armi shocked 2 see dat n went 2 his room.

Next morning Armi sittin in his cabin, Muskan enters

Muskan "hi Armann"
Armi "hi"
Muskan "kya bat hai bade sad sad ho"
Armi "kuch nahi"
Muskan "nahi kuch to hai"
Armi little irritated but hiding "kaha na kuch nahi hai"
Muskan "theek hai baba mat batlao, par aaj tum mujhe dinner kara rahe ho"
Armi "Muskan mera man nahi hai"
Muskan "plz. yar mein kabhie kabhie hi to bolti hoon"
Armi "OK"
Muskan "dat's my Armann" n hugs him
Armi still thinkin

In d restaurant

Muskan "Armann kab se itne shant baide ho kuch bolo na"
Armi "kya boloo"
Muskan "hmmmmmmm accha chalo meri tarif karo"
Armi "Muskan plz. mood nahi hai"
Muskan "Armann lagta hai ab tum mujhe pyar nahi karte" n annoyed
Armi "are aisa nahi hai Muskan, accha tumhari bal ........"
suddendly he saw d same girl outside d window
Muskan "hmmmmmmmm main sun rahi hoon"
Armi "tumhare bal kitne reshami hai jo tumhare kamar tak lahrate hai"
Muskan found weird coz her hair is till shoulders
Armi contd. " Tumhare neeli aankhon ne meri neend uda di hai"
Muskan again shocked coz her eye color is brown
Armi "aur tum is dress mein bilkul dulhan lag rahi ho"
Muskan getz an heart attack coz she is small top n jeans
Muskan finally cudn't resist "mujhe chidane ka koi naya tarika nikala hai"
Armi closes his eyes "aur tumhare honth....."
Muskan tigtly slapped on his hand "Armann kaha ho tum, mein aisi bilkul bhi nahi"
Armi getz up n found no 1 outside window.
Muskan "tumne to mera poora mood bigad diya, mujhe nahi khana"
n goes out n crossed d road.Armi confused n thinkin

After a while he came out n saw Muskan talkin 2 a girl
OMG wat a coincidence, there she is talkin 2 Muskan
Armi crosses d road as fast as he can but d girl went off
Muskan "aa gaye tum, mujhe tumse bat nahi karni"
Armi although wanted 2 ask abt. her, he said "ha tum mujhse kaha ab to tum ajnabiyon se hi bat karogi"
Muskan "kaun woh she is not stranger 2 me, mein use janati hoon, woh minnie ki badi sister hai"
Armi "woh hai" slowly "OMG isi liye woh awaz mujhe jani pehchani si lagi thi"
Muskan "kya badbada rahe ho"
Armi "thairo uski to mein abhi khabar leta hoon"
Muskan "woh tum bad mein le lena, yahi rahti hai us bunglow mein, abhi tum mere sath chalo, bahut bhookh lagi hai yar"
Armi "ha chalo" but his eyes r still on dat girl who is goin.

Next morning
 Armi rings dat bunglow door bell
 She opens, she looks so beutiful in dat Red gown. Her hairs r all carelessly scattered onto her shoulders n she is half sleep.
 Girl "aaj badi jaldi aa gaye, layiye doodh dijiye"
 Armi holds her hand, she was awake "TUM mera matlab hai aap"
 Armi although knowing "yahi to mein tumse poochna chah raha tha"
 Girl "yeh mera ghar hai, sorry meine aapko doodhwala samjha"
 Suddenly minnie came running "Di Di are doctor aap"
 Girl astonished Minnie "ha yehi to mere doctor mere hero. Aayiye na doctor andar aayiye"
 Girl "Oh aur meine samjha aap mere liya aaye hai"
 Armi "to kya tum chahti thi ki mein tumhare liye aaoon"
 Girl "aa hha aa aayiye na, andar aayiye"
 Minnie "aap inti subah mein to abhi so rahi thi di ke sath"
 Armi slowly "aur tumhare di se milne ke bad mein so nahi paya" but loudly "aaj hospital jaldi jana hai toh meine socha tum logon se milta chaloo, dekh loo tum kaisi ho"
 Minnie "hmmmmmm are mein aapko apni di se milana hi bhool gayi , Yeh hai Ridhima meri di. Pata hai aapko meri di bhi doctor hai"
 Armi slowly "aur meri jaan" loudly "nice meeting u"
 Ridhima "same here kch lenge aap"
 Armi "nahi mein chaloonga"
 Ridhima "accha"
 Minnie "doctor aap aayenge phir"
 Armi lookin at Ridhima "ab to aana hi padega"

 

 

 

Part 4


 In sanjeevani Muskan running after a doctor
 Finally Muskan grab him by his arms. D doctor turned.
 Muskan braethin heavily"Rahul , mein tumhe kabse bula rahi hoon"
 Rahul "Muskan mein sun nahi paya"
 Muskan "tum kaise best friend ho mere ki meri awaz bhi nahi sun paye"
 Rahul "are bap re tum to kha jaogi mujhe, tumhara mood kharab hai, lemme guess, Armann se phir jhagada hua"
 Muskan "nahi yar"
 Rahul "phir badle badle se tewar nazar aate hai sarkar ke, kyun"
 Muskan "pata nahi Rahul, kabhi kabhi lagta hai hum dono ek doosre ke liye bane hi nahi"
 Rahul "are bap re smthg really serious"
 Muskan "nahi yar bas kabhi kabhi aisa lagta hai"
 Rahul "hmmmmmm tumhe kabhi kabhi aisa nahi lagta ki hum dono ek doosre ke liye bane hai"
 Muskan angrily"phir se wahi mazak"
 Rahul "mein aur mazak aur woh bhi tumse kabhi nahi, batao na Muskan"
 Muskan "Rahul, chodo mein bhi na jab udas hoti hoon to pata nahi kyun tumhare pass aati hoon"
 Rahul "hey Muskan plz. plz. plz. yar us Armann ko chodo na, chalo bhag chalte hai"
 Muskan "Rahul mein mazak ke mood mein nahi hoon"
 Rahul "aur mein bhi nahi yar, chal na shadi kar lete hai"
 Muskan "chodo tum kabhi nahi sudhrogo" n started goin
 Rahul "are bap re tum to naraz ho gayi, accha baba nahi chidata batao kya bat hai"
 Muskan told him abt. yesterday's incident in restaurant
 Rahul "kuch nahi yar uska mood accha nahi hoga,kabhi kabhi aisa hota hai, aur hum ladke na mood ko sambhal nahi sakte, chill, chal coffe pite hai"
 Muskan "nahi yar phir kabhi, abhi kam hai.Dekho na tumhe bol kar mein kaisi shant ho gayi,  jab tak tumse bat nahi karti chan hi nahi milta, chalo bye"
 Rahul "bye" Muskan went Rahul watchin her goin, tears in his eyes "Kash Muskan tum mujhe samajh pati"
 D pain is very clear in his eyes, d pain of his lady love "MUSKAN".
 
 He went into his cabin "DR. Rahul, orthopediologist"
 Suddenly 1 patient enters "Doctor sahab dekhiye na mujhe, mere seene mein dard ho raha hai"
 Rahul "sorry mein cardiologist nahi hoon, Dr. Subhankar hai, aap unke pass jayiye"
 Patient "woh kaha baidhte hai"
 Rahul "yahan se right turn lekar seetha chale jayiye"
 Patient  "mein itna door nahi ja paoonga"
 Rahul "offo accha rukiye" rings d bell one fat nurse enters
 Rahul "sis. lovely inhe Dr. subhankar ke pass le jayiye"
 Sis. lovely lookin at him
 Rahul "sis. lovely, sis. lovely" angrily n loudly "sis. Lovely"
 Lovely "aa ha ji doctor" rudely 2  patient "chalo"
 Patient "thank u dr. Sahab"
 Rahul noded his head.
 
Suddenly 1 announcement frm speaker
"sare doctors cnference hall mein 5 min mein pahunch jaye"
 
 Rahul gets up. In a conference hall.
 Evry doctor is there in conference hall. Rahul went n sit bside Muskan. Muskan smiles. He can see         &am p;nb sp; Amann sittin bside Muskan n smiles at him. Armann too smiles. Rahul can't bear it. He gets up n sat bside 1 doctor.
 Rahul "hello Dr, Shubhankar"
 Shubhankar "hi Rahul, kaise ho"
 Rahul "theek hoon, dr. keerti nazar nahi aa rahi"
 Shubhankar "aa rahi hogi, lo wo rahi"
 1 lady doctor enters "Shubhankar , kyun bulaya hai hum logo ko yahan, hi Rahul"
 Rahul "hello Dr, keerti, aaj aap acchi lag rahi hai"
 Keerti "thanx, tum bhi"
 Shubhankar "kuch bhi nahi pata"
 
1 person(Dr. Shashank) on mike.
Shashank "welcome doctors. I hv got a gr8 news 4 u all. Hamara hospital is zone ka best hospital ghoshit kiya gaya hai aur mein Dr. Shashbnk Gupta, is Hospital ka dean hone ke nate aap sabko badhai deta hoon. Aap sabke bagair yeh nahi ho sakta tha. Congratulations. aur ha ek aur zaroori announcement aaj se do aur doctors aap logon ko join kar rahe hai,  Dr. Atul n Dr. Anjali."
D two doctors came on stage.
 
"Halaki yeh dono hi medicine mein specialized hai, dono hi behatreen doctors hai aur is sabse badi bat yeh dono ek doosre ke jeevan sathi hai, so doctors plz. welcome dem."

Evry1 claps n dey both said "thank u"


 

😛NEW PART BEGINS HERE😛

Part 5

At Minnie's home
Ridz thinkin abt. Armi.Suddenly Minnie came "Di, kya soch rahi ho"
Ridz "woh Dr. Armann..... kuch nahi"
Minnie "acche hai na woh. Di tum nahi thi na to woh mera bahut khayal rakhte the, mujhse bahut pyar karte the"
Ridz "hmmmmmmmmm woh bahut acche insan hai"
Minnie "aur Dr."
Ridz "dr. bhi kamal ke hai"
Minnie sits in her lap "pata hai aapko unki fiance bhi mere liye roz choclate lati thi"
Ridz shocked  "fiance????????"
Minnie "ha woh Dr. Muskan hai na. bahut acchi hai woh bhi aur Dr. Armann ko pyar bhi bahut karti hai"
Ridz shocked

Here in Sanjeevani
Armann is thinkin of Ridz suddendly one hand frm bhind, Armi turns its Atul n Anjali
Atul "kya ho raha hai mere dost"
Armi "nahi kuch nahi, hi I am Dr. Armann" n he shake hands wid Atul n Anji
Atul "ek bat poocho mere dost"
Armi "ha ha poocho"
Atul "yar sach batao kaun hai woh jiske bare mein tum soch rahe the"
Armi little irritated "nahi aisi koi bat nahi"
Anji "bat to hai yar, hame pata hai, tumhe nahi batana hai to mat batao"
Armi "wo......."
Suddendly Muskan comes "are mere bare mein yeh soch raha tha"
Atul "ohhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!! aap???????"
Muskan "mein Dr. Muskan aur iski fiance"
Atul n Anji little amused "OK"
Armi "aa ha, mein iski ke bare mein soch raha tha"
Atul "par tumhari shakal par to kuch aur likha hai"
Rahul frm bhind "likha hai ki yeh Muskan ko chod raha hai mere liye, Hi I am Dr. Rahul"
Armi "Rahul............Oh! mein bhi socha is tarah ka mazak mere sath sanjeevani mein sirf tum kar sakte ho"
Muskan "sudhar ja Rahul sudhar ja"
Rahul "lo ab tum dono phir se shuru mat ho jana"
Atul "mein kuch samajh nahi paya"
Rahul "are yar kuch nahi, mein isse kah raha hoon ki mujhe Muskan de de, yeh deta hi nahi, woh kya hai na ki apni setting hai Muskan ke sath" n winks his eyes
Muskan "jao mein tumse ab kabhie bat nahi karoongi" n leaves angrily
Armi laughs "tu bhi na Rahul, kuch nahi Atul, yeh Muskan ko aisi hi chedta hai phir woh naraz ho jati hai, phir yeh manata hai, dono best friends hai na"
Anji "oh!!!!!!! friends mein toh bahut confused ho gayi thi....."
Rahul "ab yar mujhe use phir manana padaga, chalo mein use mana ke aata hoon"
Armi "is bar nahi manegi"
Rahul "zaroor manegi, mujhse nahi to kya tujhse manegi, mein mana kar aata hoon" n leaves
Armi "toh Dr. Atul sanjeevani dekh li"
Anji "kahan yar mein kah rahi hoon chalo dekh aate hai, yeh kah raha ki pehle sab dr. se mil lete hai"
Armi "chalo mein dono kam kar deta hoon, tum logon ko dr. se milwa doonga aur sanjeevani bhi dikhala deta hoon"
Anji "hey thanx"
Atul "thanx yar"
Armi "ur welcome"

At Minnie's home
Ridz back 2 home "Minnie kaha ho tum"
Minie "d...........i................"
Ridz ran inside, Minnie lying on d floor, trying 2 say smthg
Ridz cudn't understand

In sanjeevani
Minnie on stretcher, Armi came running
Armi "kya hua"
Ridz "mein jab ghar aayi to yeh .........." n started crying
Armi "Muskan tum inhe sambhalo" 2 d ward boy "take her 2 d operation theatre"
 

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Guys plz. comment whether i sud continue wid dis or not.
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sounds very nce
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dis is reallly gud....nw plz. cont. sooon!!

Marisha!
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u r best......................nice story..........continue soon.............................................
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Rushi..it's really gud..do continue..im waiting!!😃
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sunds cool!!!!!! bt in ure intro fink its ritten muskaan has armaan's finance! i hpe dey dnt gt engaged or dey r nt already engeded! 😃
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sunds cool!!!!!! bt in ure intro fink its ritten muskaan has armaan's finance! i hpe dey dnt gt engaged or dey r nt already engeded! 😃
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hi there..wow rushshri nice ff..very mysterious....pls continue soon...wanna know what happen..the gal who alway been posting funny topics in dmg forum has become a FF writer.. 😆 👏 very creative storyline...
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nice story...sounds kool....interesting start.....do continue soon