Coffee X Thunder ☕⚡* Maaneet Short Story * ✅ COMPLETED @ Page 1 - Page 4

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Posted: 1 months ago
#31

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Terrific update... wonderfully written

Geet's question was reasonable

liked Maan's response

Geet's thoughts well portrayed

she is already falling for Maan

wow Geet invited Maan for coffee as a thank you

oh she feels that he may be taken 

she was so sad that they may never ever meet again

at least they met again when she was getting the restraining order

of cos Geet misses Maan and is sad

hmm now Geet drinks coffee

as expected she still waiting for Maan to come to the café for coffee

sad that he did not

now six months passed

she finally admitted to herself that she has fallen in love with him

glad that they met again

and that too when it rained

the rain has clearly connected them

she was so happy seeing him

enjoyed their banter

aww he called her Mishty

Maan's question was justified

as expected she invited to her place for coffee

pleased that he agreed

well her mom revealed she talks about him all the time

Maan was amazed yet happy

adore Maan drooling on Geet

nice that she gave him the painting 

Maan was certainly astounded

ahh she also had a note

wonderful that he called

loved that hug that portrayed their feelings

he teased Geet

finally they confessed

beautiful moments


P.S any chance of an epilogue?

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Posted: 1 months ago
#32

What a beautiful story and narration

    Geet has been wronged by Dhiraj in past. She is an artist and teacher by professio. She came to heal herself in nature. Maan is rude but actually very kind. He put a boy in Geet's school. Geet remembered Maan and spilled paint on him. 

     Very interesting encounter. The thunders rain everything i can feel. This was like happening before my eyes. Very beautiful moments. It's nice to see Maan open up. He knows a lot about mountain area. Geet said sorry and offered him tea. 

    Dhiraj is actually so sick. Why he came after Geet? His ego is pathetic. He wanted to kill Maan omg. Geet tried to save Maan in right time. Both were safe because Dhiraj missed. But he is for blood. Liked how both Maan Geet were smart and they escaped in time. 

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Posted: 1 months ago
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Maan understood Geet more in these few encounters than that stupid Dhiraj. That's sign of soul mate right there. Geet broke down. The way Maan consoled her is so beautiful. He is right. Dhiraj never deserved Geet. She is thankful to Maan. The cave moments are beautiful. So they departed. Geet invited Maan for a coffee to say thanks. She discovered they had a lot in common.

     Months passed but Maan didn't show up. Geet has fallen in love with Maan and likes coffee now. Loved Maan's side. So he has been watching her but didn't approch. He wanted her to heal. That's so amazing. It starts raining and Maan finally goes to Geet to give lift. Glad that she invited him. 

    Cozy sweet moments in Geet house. Maan had tea ha ha. Geet gifted him the painting she made on mountain. Maan is overwhelmed and decided to confess. So beautiful moments. Miss coffee and mr thunder. Rain will always be special in their life. Very beautiful ending. One of the best writings i read. Thanks for sharing. Enjoyed every bit.

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Posted: 1 months ago
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Maaneet seems to have nice time in rain. Flashback is sad. Geet is being abused by Dhiraj. Is that her husband or boyfriend?

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Posted: 1 months ago
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Geet is out in mountains to draw. She bangs with Maan. Apt lyrics. Love the gifs. It's like watching a movie. I can feel the rain. They met in Geet's school. She has felt something with Maan which she didn't feel with Dhiraj

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Posted: 1 months ago
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Maan looks arrogant. He is rich. But he took effort to admit a homeless ajay. He is more than what eyes meet. He is impressed by Geet's ethics. Their banter was interesting as always

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Posted: 1 months ago
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Geet spilled paint on Maan's shirt. Also ruined his coffee. He is bound to be annoyed. Wow he protected her from rain by taking shelter under his tent. He knows lot about that place and Geet is amazed. She painted him

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Posted: 1 months ago
#38

Dhiraj is out of his mind. He couldn't take rejection. So egoistic. He stalked Geet and thinks Maan is Geet's boyfriend. Dhiraj should be in jail. He didn't even think before firing his gun

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Posted: 1 months ago
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Their escape was thrilling. Maan sure knows the ways. Maan Geet bonded naturally. Geet knows she can trust him. They are made for each. Loved how Geet opened up to Maan. His views about love and changing the world is so deep. Much needed talk

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Posted: 1 months ago
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Lovely just lovely. Cloudy has fallen in love with her thunder. So nice of Maan to give her some time to heal. He finally met her. This was so cute and epic