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When you are free please do try
and update
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Part 1
Nice concept
The bond between father and daughter is so admirable she wants her mother but Maan has no picture of her bcoz she left with him she had leave him in the toughest times and Avita told some lady came and told as she is her mother and she will take avita with her.. Maan is very angry as his wife betrayed him and now wants to claim his daughter.
Let’s see who is Maan wife and why she betrayed him and why she left her kid.
Thanks for the update
Waiting for next update
Part 2
A Dynamic Update
Maan and Geet were married but she left him and her baby
just for her career
surely she could her career still having her husband and baby
now what she is really up to ?
does she truly want her daughter or she wants to enter Maan’s life now
that he has reached great heights in his career
Geet was more concerned about her career than her family and left to make that happen. How could she leave a four month old child? If she didn't care about her daughter then, where is the mothering feeling coming from now? Does she really care about Avi? Where was she all these years? She never bothered about her before. Why is she back now? Did she build her career to the level she wanted? Has she achieved what she set out to do? Now she wants to come back to claim her child. Or is there more to it than that?
Part,-2
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Geet left a little baby pf four months and she is back to claim her rights on baby she left behind to build her career what a selfish women, Maan begged her to stay but she choose to leave, Maan restricted her from meeting their daughter so she is planning to get her by hook or crook she has not changed a bit,, she will strike back hope Maan stays strong
Hi, nice chapter dear, Maan get angry on the principal to let someone meet his daughter, but principal said that he didn't let any stranger to meet avita but her mother meet her daughter with authorization of his signature, Maan halut for some time and think that he change his signature, this is his old signature, Maan threat the principal, ask him to not let anyone meet with his daughter, Maan call his detective ask him to searched the stranger who meet his daughter, he thought about his wife how she left him with his daughter when she was four months old, he is very disturb why she is come back now. The stranger once again want to meet avita but principal not let her meet avita.
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maan threaten principal to let avi’s mother meet her
maan remembering geet as she left him for her career n her father’s wish
I don’t think geet is mother of avita
maan put spy on avita’s mother to know her motive to come back in their life in the name of avita
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Lovely part ❤️
Read both chapters ❤️,who is Maan's wife?
And why now after many years she wanted her daughter 😡😳 waiting for next part ❤️
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