MG FF - The Burnt -Chapter 11 Pg 70 May 17 - Page 67

Originally posted by: aparna3011

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doctor ask to shift geet in hospital for her recovery

maan understand his presence push geet in this condition

geet last words clear geet’s mental condition to maan so he decide to stay away from her sight

both daadi n geet are happy to meet after long both are asking sorry

maan need to have great patience to have geet back in his life wit advy

thanks for pm n pw

Thanks so much for always being in my stories 

Both are confused and surprised with eo new ways, completely unexpected to them

Originally posted by: Arijitsing

Thanks for password

Awesome update

Geet fainted again seeing advay with maan

Finally dadima and geet met with each other 

Thank-you foryour comment always

Originally posted by: pulvi16

Hi Dear,

Password plzzzz

Hi Pulvi,

I remember, during her complete submission days, you so actively commented. You used to be so upset with Maan.

Miss that participation form you.

Originally posted by: metromasti

Awesomeeee update..... commented on blog 

Responded on blog 

Originally posted by: MA1970

Nice update. Maan was such a devil and the torture and the hot on her self respect she had to face is not forgiveable. Geet thinking she will be separated from her son faints. Still she allows her don to meet Maan as he is his father and according to her he will be a good father. Geet condition is very delicate and since seeing Maan she fainted he decides not to come in front of her. Waiting for the next.

Thank you for your comment always and participation 

Originally posted by: babelicious

Lovely update. Made me cry right from the beginning 😰. So painful Geet’s condition now and more the past. Horrible what Maan did to her… he fell so low .. 

Geet faints coz she took too much stress. Maan initially didn’t understand why but her painful requesting not to take her son away from him, how is he still not able to cry for his sin! Glad atleast he had the shame to recollect what all he did to her and why she fainted again. He understood that she feels he will take him away, going by the number of times he threatened her in the past. He should pay for his sin. What torture and insult. He used her in the name or marriage and child. He acted obsessed with Geet bearing a child, and kept reminding her of how he is going to snatch it from her. He couldn’t relate her going away to her pregnancy, because some other kaand seems to have happened in between their attempts for kid and her escape. She is so stressed now, poor poor girl. How will he make her know what he is repenting now? It’s going to be so difficult ahead what with him not even wanting to try because he thinks he deserves to stay away from her. Very eager for next… also waiting for other ff updates 

Thank you for your heartfelt comment once again. Always eagerly wait for your comment because it's so full of heart.

@Pink - a big question because he decided to stay away from her for her. you answered in @blue.

This is the story of pain, regrets, penance, forgiveness and love. This will mostly me emotional ride story. Physical part of Maaneet is far away for now. But stay tuned

I read, you are busy on personal front.  Yes personal life is above these fictions so take care of that.

Thanks for letting know  No worries, take your time to comment. i will always enjoy whenever you post.

Originally posted by: maanshi

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Thanks for update 

Thank you dear for your awesome comment 

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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hello Anu, hope you had a wonderful weekend

thanks for the pm and update

Chapter 10

Agonising update…majestically written

Thank God Geet gained her consciousness

Geet's fears were reasonable

after all Maan sowed this fear in her

sad seeing her plead to Maan not take her Advay away

Gosh she fainted again

Maan's concerned for Geet was justified

oh no she needed to be admitted to hospital

well her condition is serious

at least Arjun and dadima were with Maan

SD's thoughts were justified

of cos Maan thinks about what Geet said before she fainted

great that Maan realised that he is responsible for Geet's condition

so Maan berated himself

hate that he hurt Geet so much

now he understood Geet's fears 

Past.....

angry how Maan behaved with Geet

he was so harsh with her

oh she knew he fell in love with her

as expected he denied

just to hide his feelings, he hurt Geet 

upset that he insulted her

admire that Geet was determined to win his love

but Maan did not want Geet to win

he then broke her by saying that he going to spend the night with Sameera

Geet was naturally shattered

sad that he assumed that Geet tricked him to marry him

disgusting Sameera

she had no right to taunt Geet

pleased that Maan put Sameera in her place

at least Maan did not touch her

Maan's behavior with Geet was horrendous

feeling for Geet

not surprised that despite Dev's protests, Geet went to take care of Maan

hmm Geet tried to make Maan understand to no avail

truly hate Maan for what he did to Geet

he broke Geet to such an extent 

Present

liked that Maan told Advay to meet Geet

he knows Geet's fears will again surface

ahh Advay feels safe with Maan

finally Geet and dadima meet

emotional moments

hmm dadima apologised to Geet

appreciate that Geet will not keep Maan away from Advay

cannot blame for her thoughts

her confusion was understandable

she does know that Maan has changed and is repenting for his deeds

loved Maan's care for Geet

pleased that Maan knows that he the cause for Geet's condition

oh he will not come in front of Geet

it will be hard

however Maan needs to earn Geet's love and trust

he needs to erase every pain he caused her

aww Advay is so cute

adore Maan and Advay's bond

nice that Maan asked Advay to seek his mom's permission to be with his ice clean uncle

alas she agreed

update soon 

Thanks as always Chetna

@ blue - There was a very strong reason for him to think like that and for Geet to work relentlessly to prove him, her love for him.

@brown - 

@green - yes, that the important piece.

Originally posted by: janu2006

great part 

Geet is so afraid if Maan will take Advay 

hope family is able to make her see the changes in Maan even if Maan has long way to make himself clear to Geet 

Geet’s love for Maan is still there somewhere in corner of her heart Maan just needs to go there and make his place again

cont soon 

Thank -you Janvi 

Yes love is there in corner deep within hidden behind a mother of her son

Let's see how they move forward... long long way to go 

Originally posted by: maangeet.gmmg

Wonderful wonderful update love to see maaneet together but geet have d fear of maan taking away his son and due to that she fainted it was all a shock for .aan and he decided not to come between them waiting for next 

That-you dear 

Yes, long way to see them in one frame.. but stay tuned