Love, Unrequited [Thread 2 : Pg 140] - Page 103

Originally posted by: Ginnosuke_Nohar

Hello guys, 

Loved reading the discussion here. I have two chapters ready but I am not posting them because I am aiming at writing more chapters and posting all of it together. Give me some more time, please and I will post the subsequent chapters. Maybe the entire Part Two together. 

Or I can update one by one, what do you think?

Also, we were discussing songs and as I was going through my old posts. Came across a fun one shot I had written for a serial after being inspired by a song. I have posted it with fresh names. If you have time, you can read it here. 😊

One Shot

Thank you for the note GN.

It is really your decision about posting updates.

But as a reader, I would like to read one chapter at a time or one chapter a day.

It gives me time to think about the chapter and the story. 

I listened to the below song last night and made me think about LU.

Ajeeb dastaan hai yeh,
Kahan shuru kahan khatam,
Ye manzilein hai kaunsi,
Na woh samajh sake na hum

I thought it fits so well for Kirti and Nishit. 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AU-hut9lGQ4

Originally posted by: canapoem

I listened to the below song last night and made me think about LU.

Ajeeb dastaan hai yeh,
Kahan shuru kahan khatam,
Ye manzilein hai kaunsi,
Na woh samajh sake na hum

I thought it fits so well for Kirti and Nishit. 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AU-hut9lGQ4

I love this song, kavi!! One of my all-time favorites!!

Originally posted by: Ginnosuke_Nohar

Thank you so much for being so thoughtful! 😆 And welcoming! 🤗

I'd surely do my best to be here whenever I can! 😊

In fact, I'm not going anywhere until you give me a happy ending!! 😳

As for dramas, I rarely watch any. I just read like a dog.. I mean, books and online toh theek hai. I regularly stop to read articles and snippets from newspapers and magazines that folks would use to cover shelves and windows in hostels and homes. Or those the street vendors would use to wrap food. Or the ones that come inside ironed clothes. 🙈

Umm.. I guess it wouldn't hurt diversifying my entertainment. And I like you a lot. So maybe you could suggest me something?

Sanam Bewafa

Baba re.. Kirti is so intense, even as a kid! Particularly, because she's a kid!! To burn away the certificate!! 😲 She feels in extremes and reacts just the same.. 

TV antennas, tussle with cable operators and DD1's NRI cousins. You reminded me of simpler times ♥️

Looks like the young Sana took perverse pleasure in embarrassing Kirti!! Sometimes, kids can be so cruel, so casually.. 🤔

Kirti's awakening to reality is so heart breaking but also so real! 😭

Thank God for Tejas in school.. I guess he's the only person who made her feel accepted among her classmates!

And ofcourse.. fangirling over TV shows 😆

Loved the bit when Manisha asked Sana to shut up! 😛

Buta's Bhaiya

When did the sweet kid Tejas turn into this insensitive jerk?

He cares enough to drag his best friend to be involved in his wedding, cares to feed her when she says she's hungry, but doesn't care to appreciate her priorities or her reservations?

Particularly after what he did with Prasanna that Sunday? Does he do these things intentionally?

Bhaiya's gaze landed on Didi too. 😆

And Bhaiya is now ready to have a double lunch! 🤣

Kirti's comment and Buta's defense of his bhaiya's height ♥️

Long serving househelps have a way of becoming a part of family, sometimes! I wish we see more of Buta 😊

The ending.. uff! Talk about adding fuel to fire! 🤦🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️

Two Left Feet

Tejas pagal hai? Bipolar? The way he goes.. they don't matter, only I do.. 😲

I feel like he's a lonely kid when he explains why he's pushing Kirti to be involved with his wedding, but otherwise he's coming across as a crazy jerk!

What did Nishit do to offend the two of them so much? 😒

Even so, this is the first time I feel something other than dislike from Kirti towards Nishit. She's observing that couple, not Sana and Tejas! She's more worried about his disappointment than her best friend's? 😳

The convo with Navyam.. that escalated too bad, too soon! I wish Nishit buries him 6 feet under, somewhere in his yard 😡

Kirti, the darling, was savage 👏♥️

And she was a sweetheart with Prasanna! Soothing all her ruffled feathers 🤗

Why does Prasanna want her to be friends with Nishit?

Kirti is really hypersensitive! One uffoh and she draws her sword 😲

The last bit of their convo 😆

Loved it! ♥️

Deliverance

Loved the analysis of the snake/hare bite by the group.. I went back to read it again and again!

Pyaar se nip karta hai 🤣

Nishit said Mithila and him were dating.. I really doubt that! 😆

When Mithila says Good for you, Kirti. You... I feel she's implying something deeper. Even her parting words and actions seem to be intentional.. for Kirti's benefit? Strange words for a girlfriend to say, nhi? I'd bet she knows about Nishit's interest in Kirti!! 

The following conversation too.. when Kirti says unpardonable, was it for Tejas or was it for the kiss? 😆

I think I'm getting desperate to get them together! 🙈

Loved their convo! ♥️ Re read that bit repeatedly as well!!

 Their tiff isn't something one could settle easily.. no one's completely right or wrong!

He seems mighty jealous of the privileges she allows Tejas!! 😳 He believes the scales are not in his favour?

But if Kirti is guilty of misunderstanding Nishit, he is too!

Anyway, Dadi was so real.. something one would totally expect from a mother! 🤗

Hey ! Your reader from gf....as you have warned I am not going to ask to post it there but its awesome g.nohar...I liked.

Just read the two chapters and know I am certainly going to follow it...

Loved kirti...her care for her dadi...and 

Kirti and Tejas interaction ...

❤️

Whisper on the Pillow

Their texting is heady! I found myself waiting for their replies as much as they did..

Loved the way she extends an olive branch with Ekadashi and the way he grabs it with both hands! 😆

Loved the way he waited for Ekadashi to come and how she waited for Ekadashi to be over to let loose her rant on him! 👏

Loved his word of caution to her! 😛

Panna ki tamanna is an all time favourite of mine! ♥️

The way he writes the lyrics to her.. uff!! ♥️ 

Wrong source. All you've been fed is misinformation. 

Is this about Tejas? Because who else is the point of contact between the two of them?

I feel terrible for the hardships and disappointments Kirti has had to face in such a young life!! 😒 Wish things start looking up for her in the future! 🤞🏻