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Originally posted by: Breezi11197
Oh seriously man how can you sleep knowing people are waiting for your marvellous story
😆
Originally posted by: Breezi11197
Oh seriously man how can you sleep knowing people are waiting for your marvellous story
😆
Beautifully written☺️
This is what I expected from writers.
Thank you very much for writing this.
Please cont soon
Originally posted by: Mishti_Dahi
Harshu ka SS
Yippeeeee! So mera asar ho hi gaya😎
Khoob bhalo!
Okay so I love this as usual. No one's ready to back off. I can totally feel the intensity of the situation so just BRING IT ON!
I particularly loved Prerna's lines, she has nothing to lose as she has already lost everything she had. Such people are very dangerous actually 😆
I can feel a very intense and competitive story here with both of them getting the nerve of other. About time Mr. Bajaj finds a competitor in Prerna.
Jamke game on
Update SOON!
Mahi ka comment. 🤪
Indeed. This is all your effect.😆 Haha. Thanks a ton. Glad you enjoyed reading. I badly wanted Pre to speak up. Anybody comes, blames her, calls her what not and all she does is listen to all that bullshit. Agreed that she is at fault but is she alone at fault? Friday's episode infuriated me.
Originally posted by: najma123
For once, this isn't exactly like the beaten down path. Prerna is trying to pull a fight. Glad she's trying to give comebacks. Her lack of comebacks and dumbfounded Ness on the show irritates me 😆
Truly. She gives up so soon in the show. This is the same girl who had this brilliant presence of mind to deal with all the dacoits by using that electric wire and look at her now. Sigh.
I suppose it irritates almost every second person. Writers are biased to Bajaj. Give him such good lines. 🤣
Originally posted by: Mishti_Dahi
Present ma'am
When you'll let me know about your stories idk
Cause I am really busy in weekdays and I'm sure gonna miss it someday 🤔
From next time. I promise. ❤️
Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues
Okay, I can not wait for more.The gauntlet has been thrown, let the games begin.
Loved the beginning Harshada. I can not wait to read more.
Thank you very much, Blues.🤗
Originally posted by: Moushumi
Amazing start.and I like the symbolic ending part.their verbal spat is so endearing to read.update soon plz .
I think I read your story in ishqbaaz forum 🤔.
Thank you. I am glad you liked that bit. 😳
You must have. I have written quite some stuff in IB forum.
Beautifully written☺️
This is what I expected from writers.
Thank you very much for writing this.
Please cont soon
Thank you. ❤️
Yeah his lines 😆Originally posted by: IAdoreYou
Truly. She gives up so soon in the show. This is the same girl who had this brilliant presence of mind to deal with all the dacoits by using that electric wire and look at her now. Sigh.
I suppose it irritates almost every second person. Writers are biased to Bajaj. Give him such good lines. 🤣
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