Fun Poem: Ek teddy ki dastaan

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hello forumwasis ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
I'm here with my first poem which I'm dedicating to Saru who encouraged me to write something on this๐Ÿ˜›
I hope you find it worth reading... Saru hope you like it dear๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿค—
Here it goes...


Aao sunaaun tumhe apni main kahani

Badi hi dukhbhari hai doston suno meri zubaani

Ek din mein kya se kya ho gaya 

Kya tha main aur ab kya ban gaya

Maze se guzar rahi thi meri bhi zindagi 

Har aane wali ladki ki nazar thi mujhpar padti

Mere jaisa na tha koi doosra wahan

Le aayi meri kismat mujhe jaane kahan

Aayi ek khubsoorat pari mere nagar mein

Dekh use dil chaha kaash chale hum saath ek dagar mein

Chahti thi woh koi aur jeete mujhe uske liye

Dil tha dhadakta uska jiske liye

Ek sajeele rajkumar ne chalaya apna jaadu

Khushi se mera bhi dil ho gaya bekaabu 

Main khushi se foola nahi samaya

Jab main us pari ki baahon mein aaya

Usne rakha mujhe apne dil ke paas

Main... haanji main hi tha uske liye sabse khaas

Aap ka to pata nahi par usne mujhe jannat dikhayi 

Mere akelepan se mujhe mil gayi thi rihayee 

Kya pata tha yeh jannat hogi do pal ki mehmaan

Ban jaaunga main fir sirf ek saamaan 

Dil uska kya toota pahaad mujhpar gir gaya

Dukh ke andhere mein mera bhi dil ghir gaya

Bhala ho uski saheli ka jo woh mujhe saath le gayi

Socha dekh lunga saath unke main bhi koi jagah nayi 

Par woh to mujhe bhool chali jaise mera koi wajood nahi

Laga mujhe uska meri taraf dekhne ka koi mood nahi 

Bhala ho us insaan ka jisne use yaad dilaya 

Par uske liye auron ke vichaar main kuchh samajh na paaya 

Khair chhodo uske baare mein main kyun bataaun

Meri kahani mein main use hero kyun banaaun 

Kahan tha main... haan us pari ke ghar mein

Huhh...aakhir pahunch hi gaya main uske nagar mein 

Kya pata tha mujhe hoga mera aisa bura haal

Noche jayenge alag alag tareeke se mere baal

Koi mujhe gale lagata to koi thappad lagata

Koi paas bulata to koi door bhagata 

Ghar aaye mehmaan ke saath aise koi karta hai

Koi mujhe dekhke rota hai to koi hasta hai

Kisi ne na poochha mujh bechare ka haal

Mera rang sab udh gaya badal gayi meri chaal 

Socha tha kya aur kya ho gaya 

Pyar ki ummeed mein mera sab kuchh kho gaya

Isse to main wahan par hi achha tha

Main akela hi sahi mera akelapan to sachha tha

Ab to hai bas us din ka intezaar

Us pari ke dil mein jagah bana le fir wo rajkumar 

Shayad meri bhi zindagi kuchh badal jaye

Hey Bhagwan meri dua in dono ko lag jaye 

Kaash wo rajkumar uske liye ek aur teddy le aaye

Mujhe bhi apna kehne ko koi dost mil jaye

Tab tak rahega mujhe us din ka intezaar 

Sehna hi padega uske badalte moods ka vaar 

Karo dua mere liye bhi mere yaaron 

Aap sab to mujhe yaad karo yu na mujhe bisaaro 


The end... sorry it's too long... hope you enjoyed๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Edited by braveheartdoc - 6 years ago

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Manu๐Ÿค—
Pehli baar kisine mereliye iss forum pe kuch dedicate kiya hai...๐Ÿ˜ญ (Khushi ke aasu๐Ÿ˜ณ)

Finally I m soo happy that Teddy Poem ka Janam hua...๐Ÿฅณ 

Aeeyyy Teddy Party dena math bhoolna Wokay...๐Ÿคฃ

Back to the Kavita...๐Ÿ˜‰

Mujhe bahut bahut bahut bahut zyada pasand aayaโค๏ธ

Manu, I m quoting some lines jo mere Dil ko choo liaaa

@Pink I am totally in Awwwโค๏ธ So beautifully u wrote how the teddy was won by Sameer for his Naina๐Ÿ‘ Loved it...๐Ÿค—

Aayi ek khubsoorat pari mere nagar mein

Dekh use dil chaha kaash chale hum saath ek dagar mein

Chahti thi woh koi aur jeete mujhe uske liye

Dil tha dhadakta uska jiske liye

@Violet How wonderfully u explained in two lines just liked teddy's dreams are shattered in a flash of min Naina's dreams are also shattered...๐Ÿ‘ Can totally relate both situations...๐Ÿ‘Wow...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ


Kya pata tha yeh jannat hogi do pal ki mehmaan

Ban jaaunga main fir sirf ek saamaan 

@Red Lol Manu๐Ÿ˜† I was reading so serious n this line cracked me ๐ŸคฃSuperb๐Ÿ˜†

Khair chhodo uske baare mein main kyun bataaun

Meri kahani mein main use hero kyun banaaun 

@Green Such meaningful lines...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ Patha nahi q Teddy apni kahani bata raha hai but I m relating it to Naina's situation...๐Ÿค” Sameer se milne se pehle voh jaisi thi waise ab voh kabhi wapas nahi jaa sakthi... Woh chirpiness aur happinesss uspe wapas nahi aa sakthe... Pyaar ki umeed mein she also lost everything...๐Ÿ’” Awww...๐Ÿ˜ต

Socha tha kya aur kya ho gaya 

Pyar ki ummeed mein mera sab kuchh kho gaya

Isse to main wahan par hi achha tha

Main akela hi sahi mera akelapan to sachha tha

@Rose Yes its our wish... And Just like Teddy We are also waiting...โค๏ธ Waiting for SAMAINA MILANโค๏ธ

Ab to hai bas us din ka intezaar

Us pari ke dil mein jagah bana le fir wo rajkumar 

Shayad meri bhi zindagi kuchh badal jaye

Hey Bhagwan meri dua in dono ko lag jaye 

Kaash wo rajkumar uske liye ek aur teddy le aaye

Mujhe bhi apna kehne ko koi dost mil jaye


Once again Manu Wonderful Poem dear...๐Ÿ‘

Keep writing like this q ki Dil Maange More...โค๏ธ

PS: Hope I Used all colours my in reply๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by SaruSenan - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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RES I will read next year! ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sab happy new year bolne ke liye tayaar ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Tumhe achha laga yeh sabse important hai... hopefully others like this too๐Ÿ˜‰
Detailed reply kal dungi ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Unres ed ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Happy new year in advance everyone๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 6 years ago
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WOOOWWW   Manisha 

It's wonderful

Tumare andhar ek wonderful poet chupa hein...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Loved reading entire post ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ



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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow! Manisha, too good ๐Ÿ‘
Teddy ki journey perfectly described who bhi feelings ke Saath๐Ÿ‘ 

Rajkumar getting the teddy a partner ๐Ÿ˜† was hilarious 
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Lovely poem Manisha!..Really talented MashaAllah...so beautifully described ...!๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 6 years ago
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It's so wonderful...
Happy new year to u