Teri Meri love story/th#2 added

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welcome in maaneet musical journey 

this is simple love story... where u see maaneet cute nok zhok, ruthna manana, both love, breakup...

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index

part 1 (hum tum OS)/ on page 1

part 2 (pyaar mein takraar) 

part 3 (breakup) on page 12

part 4 (lets play game) on page 20 

part 5 on page 29

part 6 on page 40

PART 7(A) ON PAGE 51

Part 7(b) & 7(C) on page 54

Part 8 on page 67

PART 9 ON PAGE 77

part 10 on page 88

part 11 on page 98

part 12 on page 108

PART 13 ON PAGE 115

part 14 on page 124

part 15 on page 130

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Dam


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Dam

First day of your job, and you absolutely reach late

Stupid bus

Usse bhi aaj hi  kharab hona tha

.

Relax geet

Bs 5 minute more

Tu puch jaayengi

.

In this between, one car passed out near her, and dirty water fall 

on her dress...

.

Donkey

Monkey

Just stop your car

Nowww

She picks the stone and threw behind the car...

.

Car stopped, she run towards car...

 

.

Came out

.

Driver gives some money to her and said sorry...

Go to hell with your sorry

Ye apne sahib ko dedo unke paise

And you

Tumhe toh mein

Driver : madam

Maine jaan buzkar thode kiya hai

Wo hole tha waha

.

Tumhari wajh se mein aur late ho gyi

.

He knock on glass and said "miss ydi aap mere driver se yuhi ladti 

rhi

Toh aur late hi hongi"

.

(Think) :Geet ye kh toh shi hi raha hai

.

You Driver

Is baar chod rhi hu

Next time asa kuch kiya na

Toh mujhse koi bura nhi honga

  .

           *********

After going her, he thinks about her, what a crazy girl her.

Bolna shuru krti hai

To chup hi nhi hoti

.

I missed to see her face

.

I don't know why, my heart stop me shout on her ...she waste my 

time, but I said nothing ...maan leave this topic...

Waise bhi we never going meet again...

            *********

 

Lift

Stoppp

.

.

She runs, and enters in lift...

Thank you

She notices his gaze own...

.

Mr. Why you staring me

Isse phle kbhi khubsurat ladki nhi dekhi

.

Are you out of mind Miss

.

What you say

Am out of mind

.

Ek help kya krdi choti si

Tum toh shuru hi ho gye

.

Miss

Mind your tongue

Am not interested talking with you

.

Ha

Ha

Mein toh meri jaari hu

Tum mujhse baat kro

.

Chup

Bilkul chup

Are you same crazy girl na

Jo abhi thode der phle KC ke bahar tamasha kr rhi thi

.

Tumne geet handa ko crazy girl kaha

How dare you

.

He stops the lift in mid and came close to her...

Now what happen Crazy girl

Bolti bnd ho gyi

.

Geet : durr raho mujhse

Nhi toh mein

.

Nhi toh kya Miss

Chilana hai

Chilayo

No one came here hear your voice...

Ye private lift hai

Without my permission

Here no one entered

Geet : fir tumne mujhe kyun aane diya

.

Good question

.

By mistake

.

Geet : please move aside

.

Dekho

Mein apne boss se tumahri complain kr dungi

Wo bhut hi danger admi hai

.

You know him

Kbhi milli bhi ho tum boss se

Tumahre expression kh rhe hai

Nhi milli

Aur itna sb jaan gyi

.

Geet : toh

Mein unki secretary hu

Toh mujhe toh jaanana hi padenga

.

He take step back and fold his hand on chest...

So disaster Queen

New Secretary hai

.

Geet : you

.

Sshhh

Listen me carefully

15 minutes mein conference me meeting hai

Came fast ...

.

He left...

She not realizes when he starts the lift...

.

She is so angry on him, how dare he, he order her...

.

Geett

Geet : adi sir

Adi : geet what is this

Aaj tumhara phla din hai

Aur tum half an hour late aayi ho

Geet : sorry sir

Wo

Adi : geet now I have no time

To listen your talk

Aaj ka din tumhara koi acha tha

Jo maan sir bhi abhi aaye hai

Nhi toh tum first day hi yaha se out ho jaati

Geet : sorry sir

Next time asa nhi honge

Adi : I hope

.

First clear this mess

He pointed towards her dress...

Then take notepad and pen, and go directly to conference room...

You have 10 minutes

             ***********

She opened the door and bumped with him...

Geet : sorry

She stop sees him here...

Geet : what are you doing here

.

I think you forget miss handa

I call you here

.

Before she says, Adi come...

Adi : sir client aa gye hai

Maan : hmm

Adi : sir

Meet with Miss geet

She is your new secretary

Maan : adi

I already meet with her

.

Miss handa

Fastly arrange the papers in this file

Geet : yes

            **********

Oh god

 Geet ye tune kya kr diya

Boss se panga le liya

.

Geet ye meeting khatam hote hi

Sbse phle sorry bol dena hai

                ********

After meeting, she tries to talk with him, but he not gives chance to 

her, giving work upon work...

Dust

Danav

Hai pure

.

Dekha aapne babaji

Mujhpe gussa kaise nikal rhe hai

Aaj mera phla din hai

Aur itna saara kaam krwaya mujhse

.

If you complain completed

So can I say?

.

Geet : phle mein kahu

.

Sorry

Maine jo lift mein kaha

Sorry

Aaj mein late ho gyi

Schi mein time pe puchti

Wo idiot car

.

Maan : wo car meri thi

Geet : maine

Maan : sshh

Galati driver ki thi

Tumhai nhi

Usse dhyan se chalani chaiye thi

.

She smiles...

Maan : now you go to home

Geet : par ye file

Maan : kal kr lena

Geet : pakka

Aap gussa nhi karonge

Maan : nhi

Driver tumhe chod denga

Geet : aapko ghar nhi jaana

Maan : abhi mujhe kaam krna hai

You must go

Geet : thanks

          *********

One month passed, maan and geet happily work together...but 

some emotions changed, but both not realized. Or running from 

this change...He likes her smile, her antics, everything about her, 

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and she also start liking his attitude, his style, his nature...

 

Maan : geet

Ye project hume kal hu submit krna hai

Aur abhi iska kaam pendin hai

Geet : ok sir

I have no problem

Maan : hmm

Both start understanding each other words without saying...

           ************

Location: conference hall

From past two hours both lost into work, in this mid, power cut 

off...

Geet : ye lo

Isne bhi abhi jaana tha

Maan : geet abhi aa jaayengi

.

She stand from chair and goes towards window... She opened the 

window...and cool wind touch her face... seeing her lost, maan also 

came near to her and see her smiley face...

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What happen geet

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Where you lost

When wind blows through trees
I pause to listen and in its passing
I hear the tenderness of your voice
that fills the spectrum of my soul.

.

Nothing sir

Bs hawa ki awaaz sun rhi hu

.

Feeling so peace

.

Raat ke sanaate mein

Saanti hote huye bhi

Kuch awaaz hai aaj

.

His hand automatically moved towards her cheek, he tucked curl 

behind her ear...

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She closed her eyes; his simple touch doing magic...the voice of 

thunder awakens from beautiful dream...

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The gentle music flows

from every drop of rain,

as it just lightly taps

Against, my window pane.

 

The wind begins to whistle

It's own melodious song,

While the wind-chimes

dance and play along.

 

She turn to go , but he stop her by placing hand on her shoulder, 

and came closer to her...

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The curtains blow inward

the breeze itself is warm,

my mind is so peaceful

in the calm before the storm.

.

He bends and kissed on her collarbone...

The gray clouds are parting

and a bright rainbow forms,

proving that something beautiful

can come from such dangerous storms.

.

She came out from his embrace...

Maan : geet stop

I want to say something

.

She turns and gives smiles to him & left...he runs behind to her up to terrace...

             *********

He held her wrist and pulls her, she fall on his chest...

Maan : geet meri aankho mein dekho na

Look into my eyes

Follow me into a world of ecstasy

There and only there

Will you find the peace to unwind?

.

.

She sees in his eyes , only love for her...

 

I Share--I take

I LOVE--I HATE

Into my arms

I am the charm

Around your neck

Around your wrist

Listen to the voice from my beating heart

It yearns

The freedom of touch

The freedom of speech.

Of love,

Of purity

Like the wind

I'll find my way

Into your heart

 

Rain drenching the both, and both lost into love world... no one 

saying anything, heartbeats increasing with the passing time...

I am here
tracing the hair
under your chin 
watching your eyes
get moved
by the blowing 
of the wind
and the pattering
of the rain.

.

Stop looking another side

Geet : hmm

.

Aap kuch khehna chahte the

Maan : jaise tum nhi khehna chahti

.

I love you

.

I love you geet

.

Kuch bolo na

She hugged him tightly...

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As we embrace each other and indulge in a kiss, 
The warm raindrops fall as we touch lips.
Each drops signifies the passion we share, 
Running down your cheeks and gliding through my hair.
Underneath the moon in the sky, 
This is one of them moments that could never die.

.

.

Slow strokes, kissing and caressing then the whispers of our names.
So sensual and passionate this time we are sharing, 
Love making outside in the rain and not even caring.
This moment right I do not want it to stop, 
Intimacy being shared under the raindrops.

The way we do this is as if we have no shame, 
Nevertheless, I love being with you making love in the rain... 


Edited by priya_21 - 8 years ago
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congrats on the new story! loved hum tum! waiting 4 next part!
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That's Just Awesome !!!
Will Be Waiting
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Congrats on this thread
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Congrats for new thread...👏👏👏...waiting 4 the next part......thank u 4 pm...😃...pls continue soon...😊... Edited by Jayeeta_06 - 8 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm! commented already! waiting 4 Part 2~
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Nice Start Priya

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Pyaar mein takraar

.

Pyaar huya

Ikraar huya

Aur pyaar ki phli takraar bhi ho gyi

.

Maine apna introduction toh krwaya hi nhi

Hey I am geet handa

Aur jiss insaan se mujhe pyaar huya hai na

Wo koi aur nhi mera khadoos boss hai

Actually he is not only khadoos, ravan bhi hai...but he is so 

naughty too some time...

.

Wo phli baar

Jb hum mile

Milte hi maine inhe diya suna

.

Actually his driver spoiled my dress...

Delhi mein sadke kam

Khadde jyada hai

.

Mulaqaqtein hoti gyi

He became my boss and is his secretary...

.

.

Fir kya tha

Hote- hote pyaar ho gya

.

.

One night we working on some project and light gone...he 

confesses own love towards me...

.

Aaj bhi jb aankh bnd krti hu na

I feel am living the same moment again

         **********

He held her wrist and pulls her, she fall on his chest...

Maan : geet meri aankho mein dekho na

Look into my eyes

Follow me into a world of ecstasy

There and only there

Will you find the peace to unwind?

.

.

She sees in his eyes , only love for her...

 

I Share--I take

I LOVE--I HATE

Into my arms

I am the charm

Around your neck

Around your wrist

Listen to the voice from my beating heart

It yearns

The freedom of touch

The freedom of speech.

Of love,

Of purity

Like the wind

I'll find my way

Into your heart

 

Rain drenching the both, and both lost into love world... no one 

saying anything, heartbeats increasing with the passing time...

I am here
tracing the hair
under your chin 
watching your eyes
get moved
by the blowing 
of the wind
and the pattering
of the rain.

.

Stop looking another side

Geet : hmm

.

Aap kuch khehna chahte the

Maan : jaise tum nhi khehna chahti

.

I love you

.

I love you geet

.

         *******

Aur ab dekho ye bilkul badal gye

Ladki ne ha kya kaha

.

Shaadi se phle ye haal hai

Na jaane baad mein kya - kya honga

She threw one more file on floor...now this file straightly goes 

near to maan feet...

.

Maine toh suna tha babaji

Ladke shaadi ke baad badalte hai

Inka toh abhi se ye haal hai

.

Geettt

.

She scared and one more thing fall down on floor...

She placed her hand on heart and take deep breath...

Geet : kitni baar maine aapse kaha hai

Mujhse araam se baat kiya kro

.

Maan : ye kya halaat bna rakhi hai tumne cabin ki

Asa lag raha hai

Jaise yaha koi abhi tufaan aaya tha

.

Geet : tufan hi aaya tha

Sukar manaiye

Aap yaha nhi the

Nhi toh sbse phle aapko hi pata chalta

Maan : geet apna bchpana bnd kro

Fatafat jo tumne bekhera hai na

Usse sameto

Geet : bs yhi problem hai aapki

Ek toh phle mujhpe bina baat chilayo

Jbki meri koi galati nhi thi

Tb bhi aapne mujhe sbke saamne data

Apni girl friend ko data

Maan : maine apni secretary ko data tha

Jiska dhyan kaam pe bilkul nhi hai

Geet : ohhh

Aapki secretary koi aur ladki hai

.

Nhi na

Mein hi hoon na

.

Aur galati bhi meri nhi thi

Maan singh khurana ki thi

Apne hi mujhe galat file di thi

Fir bhi aapne sbse ye kaha

Meri galati hai

.

Maan : geet us time mujhe pata nhi tha

File maine tumhe galat dedi hai

.

Wo mujhe baad mein pata chala

.

Geet : ab pata chal gya hai

Toh sorry kya padosi aanke bolenga

.

Maan : sorry

Geet : mujhe kuch sunayi nhi diya

.

Maan : geet maine abhi bola tumhe

Geet : whi maine pucha

Kya bola

Maan : mein dobara nhi khehne wala

Geet : gussa krte waqt toh awaaz itni tej hoti hai

Aur apni galati maante waqt saamne wale ko sunayi bhi nhi deti

Great Maan khurana

.

Maan : you really want to hear

Geet : yes

Maan pulls her by wrist and kissed both cheek one by one...

Geet : leave me mein naraaz hu

Aur aap ye sb kr rhe ho

Mujhe manane ke bjaye

Maan : ye mera style hai manane ka geet

Let continue

He cupped her face and kissed on her forehead, her eyes, her 

nose, her chin, then come close to her lips , his breath falling on 

her lips...

Sorry jaan

Some time I angry so much na

Geet : humesha asa krte ho

His lips brushed her making her shiver, he took her lips very 

softly...before he continue ...knock on door parted the both...

Adi : geet

Ye sb kya hai

Maan : adi tum yaha kissi kaam se aaye the

Adi : wo file lene

Maan : take it and go

Adi : yes sir

.

.

             ******

Maan : sham ko ready rhehna

We going for dinner

Geet : mujhe nhi jaana

Aapke wo high class restaurant mein

Jaha sb smile bhi ase krte hai

Jaise uspe bhi tax lagenga

Maan : geet don't start again

Jaha tum chlna chayongi

Waha challenge

Geet : promise

Fir mt khehna

Maan : promise baba

Geet : thik hai

Mein aapko pick kr lungi

Casual wear krna

Maan : mein pick kr raha hu na

Geet : ye kaunsi book mein likha hai

Ladka hi ladki ko pick kr sakta hai

Ladki nhi

Maan : thik hai

Tum pick kr lena

Bs

Geet : hmm

Hum meri scooty pe chalenge

Maan : geet

Geet : maan itni si baat nhi maan sakte meri

Maan : thik hai

              *********

Maan : great choice of place geet

Geet : aapko pasand nhi aaya

Maan : bilkul nhi

Ye koi jagah hai

Geet : maan dabba toh asa hi hota hai

.

Maan : geet mujhe shanti se khana pasand hai

Ase nhi

Jaha itna crowd ho

Geet : ye delhi ka famous dabba hai na maan

Islye crowd hai

Aur upar se aaj Saturday bhi toh hai

Log apni family ke sath enjoy krne nikal pade

Kal kaunsa office jaana hai

Ydi late ho gye

Boss ase dekhenga

Na jaane kya jurm kr diya humne

Maan : you pointing me

Geet : meri itni mjal mein aapko kuch kahu

Bilkul nhi

.

Maan mujhe bhook lagi hai

Please chalo na

Maan : hmm

         ********

Maan (think) oh god issi se pyaar hona tha mujhe

Aur koi nhi milli

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Geet : maan meri burai baad mein krna

Phle order krte hai

.

bhaiya

Chotu : ji

Geet : aap ek kaam kijiye

Ek daal makhni

Ek saahi paneer

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Ek butter chicken

2 lasiya

Aur ha

Lache paranthe leke aaiye

Aur sath mein pyaaj katkar

Maan : itna khana

Hum dono ke liye

Geet : kyun

Km hai

Baad mein aur mgwa lenge

Wo kya hai na maan

Mujhe khana waste krna bilkul acha nhi lagta

Maan(think) ye isse km lagta hai

Acha hai maan

Achi ladki pale pd hai tere

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                       **********

Geet : maan khana khaiye na

Maan : hmm

.

Geet : Chlo mein khilatu hu aapko

Maan : mein khud kha lunga

Geet : kyun mein nhi khila sakti aapko

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Maan : khila sakti ho

She take piece of parantha , placed small piece of hari mirch

Maan : geet mein hari mirch nhi khata

Geet : kya aap hari mirch nhi khata

Maan : toh kaunsi bdi baat ho gyi

Mujhe mirch pasand nhi hai

Geet : maan aap Punjabi munde hoke mirch nhi khate

.

Now am understanding

Maan : kya smjh rhi ho tum

Mujhe bhi smjhayo zara

Geet : yhi aap mirchi nhi kha paayonge

Hey babaji

Kisse mere boy friend bna diya

Meri friend ko pata chala

Ye mirch tk nhi kha sakte

Mere baare mein kya sochenge wo

Socha tha ye diler type honge

Par ye toh

Maan : geet stoppp

Tumhe kya lagta hai mein mirchi nhi kha sakta

Geet : isme lagna kya hai

Nhi kha sakte toh nhi kha sakte

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Maan pick mirchi and start eating...

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Geet : maan mein mjak kr rhi thi

Please stop


.

.

2nd mirch

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.

.

Geet : maan stop it

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She held his hand & forward lassi glass to his lips...and make 

drink to him...

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Geet : maan mein bs mjak kr rhi thi

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Ye sb krne ki koi jaroorat nhi thi

.

Am sorry

She comes near to her and wipes his lips...

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Pagal khurana

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maan : geet

geet : khana khayo aap toh

bs ab

                           ************

Maan : bs ab issi ki kmi thi geet

Ydi hum car late toh atleast ase nhi faste

Geet : maan baarish ko kaha pata tha

Maan singh khurana aaj raat bina car ke nikalne wale hai

Maan : geettt

Geet : maan lets enjoy rain

Maan : no way

Geet : thik aap yuhi dabbe wale bhaiye ke pass baithye

Mein toh chali

Maan : geett

                    *************

She takes water in hand and splashing own self...

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Maan common

Yaha aayo na

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Maan : thanks geet

Am not interested

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She opens the arm and round around self...

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But seeing her happy face, cute faces, he can't stop own self...his feet automatically forward in her direction...

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He held her wrist and pulls her ...

Geet : maan

Maan : sshhh

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Phle toh tum mujhe apne pass bulati ho

Aur ab khud dur jaa rhi ho

Geet :nhi

Asa nhi hai

He come near to her and kissed on her eyes, she hugged him 

tightly...

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This is not ending of this story ...am come back soon with next part 😉😉


Edited by priya_21 - 8 years ago