FF: Mein Tumhari Dost.. Tum Mere Pyar

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hello Folks!!!!! Yes..... Queen of Fanfics is Back....

With her 11th Fanfic..........Called......



Mein Tumhari Dost.. Tum Mere Pyar




In this one... Jai and Bani are almost the same age!!.. Jai's 23 Bani's 21...........  They are best friends!!!!!.... Bani loves him!!!!!.... but he only considers her his best friend!!!!!...... Jai gets a mental shock.. how he gets it.. you guyz will read!!!!!......

Basically just read it.. and everything will come out!!!!!!


**i can see nibble fainting right now**šŸ˜†šŸ˜† Nibble..... u should know... that my mind never stops working!!!!!......  If Ekta can be the queen of soaps.. i can be the queen of FF!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 1

Jai is entering Walia House in a wheel chairā€¦

Everyone is looking at him!!!!!

They are all sad!!

He's in a state of mental shock!!!!!!!!!

And he's not saying anything!

Or he isnt moving!!!!

Doc is likeā€¦

Someone needs to get him out of this!!!..

Meanwhileā€¦ā€¦..

In another part of townā€¦..

The phone is ringingā€¦.

Someone picks up the phone

And they are like WHAT?????

I will be there!!!!!!!!

Everyone at Walia House

Is trying to get Jai out of his shock!!!

But its no use!!!!

Masi is trying her best!!!!

But nothing is wrong!

In the late eveningā€¦..

the person that was on the phone

Comes to Walia House

Masi looks

Masi: Bani????

Bani is crying!!!!!

She comes to Masi

And hugs her!!!!!!!!!!

Bani: Masiā€¦.

Bani comes to Jai

Bani: Jai.. its me Bani!!!!ā€¦.. Jaiā€¦ its me Bani! Ur best friend!!!!!!!!!!!! Jai!! Answer me!!!!!

She's soo sad!!!!!

Jai and Bani are best friends!!!!!!!!

They are good child hood friends!!!!!

Bani goes my Krisha (Jai's mom) photo!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 2

There's a garland around there!!!!

Bani wants to know what happened after she left!!ā€¦

Masi is like lots of things happened after you left!!!

And now

Look at him!!!!!

Masi: We have to bring him back!!!!

Masi tells her to sit downā€¦.

And Masi tells Bani what happened

Bani is shocked!!!!!!!!!!

And nowā€¦

He's in this state!!

Bani cant believe it!!!

Bani is like u don't worry masi

I will help get my best friend back I promise you!!!!!

Masi smiles

And looks at her!

Bani goes into the guest room!!!

Cuz now

She's determined to get Jai back on his feet

And back to normal!

She goes into his room!

And she sits next to him

He's just lying thereā€¦ā€¦

She puts her hand on his forehead

And she's just looking at him

She cant believe

That he's in this state today!!!!!!

Bani is crying!!!

You hear noisesā€¦

Like 2 little children laughingā€¦ā€¦..

And talking!!!!!

And then..

Bani goes back in timeā€¦ā€¦ā€¦ā€¦ā€¦

(this flashback will take lots of partsā€¦ā€¦ so then you guyz will know how jai and bani know each other and how he's in this stateā€¦.. so basically sinceā€¦ its night time.. lets just say it takes the whole night for this flashbackā€¦ā€¦ā€¦ā€¦. I don't know how many partsā€¦ but I will go with the flow)


The End!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Preview for tomorrow:

Flashback Begins
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Posted: 17 years ago
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whoa dude 11th fanfic.....haila how much free time do you have.....i am procastinating my homework by reading all these fanfics.....
keep up the good work...

CKā¤ļø
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Posted: 17 years ago
#6
Dudeeee...11th?

**Nibu...join me in fainting..cuz i know u r gnna faint once u c this**
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hailaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa im so happy right now šŸ˜ƒ .. this is a DIFFERENT one.. i like i like.. can't wait fo d nxt part šŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
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11th ff congrats
i think jaanu is goint to have 12th one before october ends just to make it dozen
wow Jai is in a mental shock something interesting, i hope its not to do with pia aur roshini
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Posted: 17 years ago
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If Ekta can be the queen of soaps.. i can be the queen of FF!!!
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Jaanu you are already the queen of FFs on I-F better then the ekta
Know you are the queen of KS fan fictions for JB
First it was TD,  then Sinndoor, Kusum, and KYPH
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey,
WOW!!!!
11 Fanfics!!!!
This one seem to be different and interesting!!!
Pls continue soon,
Cannot wait for the next part,

Keep Smiling,
Happiness Always,
Manish

P.S. I have 6 right now. I am planning to put 4 more ff since I had some unique ideas myself. So, be on the lookout for 4 more. Do not worry I am catching up to u!!!! šŸ˜†
Hope u do not mind!!!