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pt:pg1 pt2:pg6
Birds with broken wings.
Niranjan's assets are his 2 daughters;Shagun and Geet.He gifted the same kind of saree to both of them.Same design with different colour.Shagun in her favourite blue colour and Geet in her favourite red colour.
Niranjan:I am so happy that my eldest daughter Shagun is getting married.But I wish my Geet too gets married on the same day.So I found a man for Geet.
Shagun was surprised.Geet was nervous.
She thought:Hey babaji...what is papa doing?
N:He is none other than Shagun's fianc Dev's younger brother Maan.
They were surprised.Geet blossomed with the surprise.
G:Papa...
Geet hugged Niranjan.
N:Geet beta...you like Maan?I will conduct the wedding only if you say yes.
Geet blushed nodding.
S:Me and Geet in the same house...wow!There we won't be just sisters but jethani and Devrani too.Thank you papa.
Shagun and Geet hugged each other.
The engagement day of Maan-Geet...
Dev was bowled over by Shagun's beauty.
Geet blushed seeing Maan.
Maan was staring at her.
They exchanged rings.
During the party Maan just disappeared.Geet went in search of Maan and found him at the terrace.
G:Maan...you are here?Come down.All are waiting there.
M:Don't think you have any right to order me.
Geet was stunned:Maan...
M:We are a couple only in front of others.
Geet was shocked.
M:I agreed for this alliance only for my bro Dev.His marriage should not be broken because of me.Otherwise I hate you.
Geet was shocked.Her heart was pierced.
Her lips shivered:Why do you hate me?
M:Because you insulted Dev and broke his heart.
Geet was shocked:How did I?
M:Dev had come to your house to see you.He had liked you in the photogaphs.But you told that you did not like him.So he opted Shagun as he didn't want Niranjan uncle to get upset.How will I marry an arrogant girl like you happily?
Geet burst into tears.
M:Tell me why you ditched Dev?Why did your dad chose me for you?
G:Dad wanted me and Shagun di in the same house.That's why he chose you.
M:Or is it because you asked your dad to choose me as you preferred to marry me?Is it because of that you ditched Dev?
G:It's true that when you and Dev jeeju came to see me I got attracted to you.But I never thought of hurting your brother to get you.
M:You are so shameless.
Geet cried bitterly:No Maan.You are misunderstanding me.
M:I don't want to hear anything.Just get lost.I hate to see you.
Geet ran to her room crying.Seeing that Dev and Shagun were shocked.
Sh:Geet...what happened?
G:Di..
Geet hugged her and cried.
Geet told them everything.They were shocked.
Shagun cried:Because of me,my little sister is shattered.
Dev:Such a big misunderstanding!
Dev walked to the terrace.
D:Maan...you hurt Geet.How could you?She is so innocent.
M:Innocent?She...
D:It's not Geet,but I am the one who rejected Geet.
Maan was shocked:What?
Shagun also came.
D:I and Shagun were seeing each other.
Maan was again shocked.
D:But Shagun and I were shocked when our families tried to get me hooked to Shagun's younger sister Geet.
S:To avoid that only Geet said she is not interested in Dev as she knew about our relationship.
D:I took a clever step later.Since Geet rejected me I opted Shagun in front of others.
Maan was shocked:Bro!
S:Please don't hurt Geet.She is innocent.
Maan felt guilty.He remembered Geet telling that she was attracted to him when they came to see her.
M:I want to apologize to Geet.
Shagun and Dev were relieved.
They all searched for Geet everywhere.
Geet walked on the lone street like a bird whose wings were broken.
She was broken completely.
She was haunted by Maan's hurtful words.
G:Why Maan?Why?Why don't you try to understand me?
Maan:Where is Geet?
Shag:Dev...I doubt if she went out in distress..
M:Then we will go out.
They ran out searching for Geet.
They were relieved when they saw Geet walking slowly on the other side.
Maan smiled.
Suddenly a lorry passed by and when the careless Geet crossed the road she got hit by it.
Maan screamed:Geettt!
Shagun fainted in Dev's arms.
Maan ran towards Geet.She was lying lifeless in blood.
Maan placed her head on his lap and cried.
M:Geet...before I could apologize to you and open my heart to you itself you left me.You could have at least listened to me before leaving me.I hurt you.But for that your punishment was too cruel.
A paper piece flew around Maan.Maan held it.
With his blooded hand he wrote ''Sorry Geet.I love you a lot".
He looked at the sky weeping.
M:Geet...if you are in heaven...listen to me...I am sorry.Please forgive me dear.And in a few seconds I fell in love with you.I love you Geet.Hope the paper which contains my message reaches you.
Maan's imagination:
Geet got the paper in heaven.She read his note and shed tears.
She smiled through the tears hugging the paper.
G:Maan...wish I could hear this before my death.Why did you delay your confession?You could have said this just one second before my death.
Suddenly Maan saw Geet near her.
He couldn't believe his eyes:Geet!
G:If you love me so much why did you hurt me Maan?Why didn't you confess your love when I was around you?
Her eyes got welled up with tears.
M:Geet!
G:Now it's too late.I can't be with you.I have to go.
M:Geet...Don't go...
Suddenly Geet vanished shattering Maan.
M:Geettt!
Maan cried embracing her hoping that at least Geet's soul heard his confession.
He felt he was a weak bird with broken wings.
Niranjan:I am so happy that my eldest daughter Shagun is getting married.But I wish my Geet too gets married on the same day.So I found a man for Geet.
Shagun was surprised.Geet was nervous.
She thought:Hey babaji...what is papa doing?
N:He is none other than Shagun's fianc Dev's younger brother Maan.
They were surprised.Geet blossomed with the surprise.
G:Papa...
Geet hugged Niranjan.
N:Geet beta...you like Maan?I will conduct the wedding only if you say yes.
Geet blushed nodding.
S:Me and Geet in the same house...wow!There we won't be just sisters but jethani and Devrani too.Thank you papa.
Shagun and Geet hugged each other.
The engagement day of Maan-Geet...
Dev was bowled over by Shagun's beauty.
Geet blushed seeing Maan.
They exchanged rings.
During the party Maan just disappeared.Geet went in search of Maan and found him at the terrace.
G:Maan...you are here?Come down.All are waiting there.
M:Don't think you have any right to order me.
Geet was stunned:Maan...
M:We are a couple only in front of others.
Geet was shocked.
M:I agreed for this alliance only for my bro Dev.His marriage should not be broken because of me.Otherwise I hate you.
Geet was shocked.Her heart was pierced.
Her lips shivered:Why do you hate me?
M:Because you insulted Dev and broke his heart.
Geet was shocked:How did I?
M:Dev had come to your house to see you.He had liked you in the photogaphs.But you told that you did not like him.So he opted Shagun as he didn't want Niranjan uncle to get upset.How will I marry an arrogant girl like you happily?
Geet burst into tears.
M:Tell me why you ditched Dev?Why did your dad chose me for you?
G:Dad wanted me and Shagun di in the same house.That's why he chose you.
M:Or is it because you asked your dad to choose me as you preferred to marry me?Is it because of that you ditched Dev?
G:It's true that when you and Dev jeeju came to see me I got attracted to you.But I never thought of hurting your brother to get you.
M:You are so shameless.
Geet cried bitterly:No Maan.You are misunderstanding me.
M:I don't want to hear anything.Just get lost.I hate to see you.
Geet ran to her room crying.Seeing that Dev and Shagun were shocked.
Sh:Geet...what happened?
G:Di..
Geet hugged her and cried.
Geet told them everything.They were shocked.
Shagun cried:Because of me,my little sister is shattered.
Dev:Such a big misunderstanding!
Dev walked to the terrace.
D:Maan...you hurt Geet.How could you?She is so innocent.
M:Innocent?She...
D:It's not Geet,but I am the one who rejected Geet.
Maan was shocked:What?
Shagun also came.
D:I and Shagun were seeing each other.
Maan was again shocked.
D:But Shagun and I were shocked when our families tried to get me hooked to Shagun's younger sister Geet.
S:To avoid that only Geet said she is not interested in Dev as she knew about our relationship.
D:I took a clever step later.Since Geet rejected me I opted Shagun in front of others.
Maan was shocked:Bro!
S:Please don't hurt Geet.She is innocent.
Maan felt guilty.He remembered Geet telling that she was attracted to him when they came to see her.
M:I want to apologize to Geet.
Shagun and Dev were relieved.
They all searched for Geet everywhere.
Geet walked on the lone street like a bird whose wings were broken.
She was broken completely.
She was haunted by Maan's hurtful words.
G:Why Maan?Why?Why don't you try to understand me?
Maan:Where is Geet?
Shag:Dev...I doubt if she went out in distress..
M:Then we will go out.
They ran out searching for Geet.
They were relieved when they saw Geet walking slowly on the other side.
Maan smiled.
Suddenly a lorry passed by and when the careless Geet crossed the road she got hit by it.
Maan screamed:Geettt!
Shagun fainted in Dev's arms.
Maan ran towards Geet.She was lying lifeless in blood.
Maan placed her head on his lap and cried.
M:Geet...before I could apologize to you and open my heart to you itself you left me.You could have at least listened to me before leaving me.I hurt you.But for that your punishment was too cruel.
A paper piece flew around Maan.Maan held it.
With his blooded hand he wrote ''Sorry Geet.I love you a lot".
He looked at the sky weeping.
M:Geet...if you are in heaven...listen to me...I am sorry.Please forgive me dear.And in a few seconds I fell in love with you.I love you Geet.Hope the paper which contains my message reaches you.
Maan's imagination:
Geet got the paper in heaven.She read his note and shed tears.
She smiled through the tears hugging the paper.
G:Maan...wish I could hear this before my death.Why did you delay your confession?You could have said this just one second before my death.
Suddenly Maan saw Geet near her.
He couldn't believe his eyes:Geet!
G:If you love me so much why did you hurt me Maan?Why didn't you confess your love when I was around you?
Her eyes got welled up with tears.
M:Geet!
G:Now it's too late.I can't be with you.I have to go.
M:Geet...Don't go...
Suddenly Geet vanished shattering Maan.
M:Geettt!
Maan cried embracing her hoping that at least Geet's soul heard his confession.
He felt he was a weak bird with broken wings.
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