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Posted: 17 years ago
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"Dher Na Ho Jaye"

Starting from the part where Jai had his cast......and where Bani wanted to claim alimony.....

Also the parts to come...... u will see the similar things but the outcome of them will be different!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Enjoy and please do comment!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 1

Jai is shocked!!!!!!

HE cant believe what he has just heard!!!!

Bani wants a divorce and she wants all of his property!!!!!!!!!

And he's more embarrassed.. cuz it was announced in front of everyone!!!!!

Everyone slowly leaves!!!!!!!!

Ranveer is looking on

And walks off….

In the middle

Its only Bani and Jai!!!!!

HE's looking at her

And he's hurt like anything!!!!

Jai: Bani……

Bani puts her hand up!!!!!

Bani: I don't want to listen to anything!!!!….. I have said what I have to!! And we wont discuss anything about it!!!……. I will still remain in this house!!!!… But u just keep away from me!!

And she walks off!!!

Jai is looking on

He's sad!!!!

Sad version of JDD is going on!!!…

He goes inside the room……

And sits on the bed!!

He cant believe it

All the good moments are coming back to him

And then Bani's attitude today!!!!!!!!!!!

Jai is thinking

Then everything is literally over!!!!!

But he tells himself

Whatever Bani wants..

She can have it!!!!

And he will give her more!!!!

And then he's all sad

Becuz that means..

That he wont be part of his child's life!!!!!

The day he was waiting for was shattered in moments!!!!!!!!!

Then there's a knock on the door
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 2

Jai gets up

And gets it

And Bani is standing there

Jai is surprised!!!

Bani has a mean face

And gives him some papers!!!!!!

Bani: I want to end this relationship as soon as possible!!! The sooner I do it.. the faster I can get out of here!!!!!

He's looking hurt!!!

Bani: After all… u killed my mother!! And I will never forget that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U have ruined my life!!!!!………. And u watch what I do to you!!!!!!!!!

And he keeps staring!!!!!!!!

Bani leaves!!!!!!!

Jai is sad!!

He closes his eyes!

Bani goes to find a lawyer

But no one wants to take her case!!!!

Its becuz its against Jai Walia!!!!

Bani begs and what not

But still nothing!!

She's like man!

She's walking

And is thinking

What will happen!!!!

She looks and looks

And gives up!!

She is sitting in a caf!!

Looking through newspapers……..

And then

Someone walks up….

She looks up

Person: Hi! I hear you are looking for a lawyer…….

She looks up!!!!

And the person is none other than Tarun!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bani stands up!!!

Tarun says…..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 3

I will take up ur case!!!

Bani says really?

He says yes!!!!!

Bani is happy!!

And she says thanks!!

They both and talk and wat not

And they shake hands!!!

She gets up!

Jai is talking to his lawyer

But u cant hear anything!!!!!!!

Jai: U know what to do right??? Good!!!

And he hangs up!

Jai is sitting in the living room….

Tony: Sir.. there's someone here to see you!!!

Jai: send them in!!!

Tony brings the person

And its Tarun!!!

Jai stands up

Jai: Did it work?

Tarun: Yes it did!!

Jai smiles

And says thanks!!!

He tells T to sit!!!

T: But I still don't understand why u want me to take her case!

Jai: I want to lose!!!! I want her to win!!

T: What??

Jai: yes!!! She wants everything that's mine!! And she will get it!!!!.. I will lose this case on purpose!!!!….

T: But….

Jai: listen!! Just win the case… and she shouldn't find out that we are best friends!!!!!

T: Okay!!!

He's looking at Jai!!!!

Jai: Today I may have everything!!!! But I don't!!!!.. I have nothing!!! Without Bani.. my life has no meaning or value to it!!!!!

T: U love her??

Jai: More than anything!!!.. if this is what will make her happy then I will do anything for her happiness!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 4

T is looking down!!!!

They keep talking

And then he leaves!!!!

Bani and Tarun meet each other on regular circumstances!!!!!

T: U know.. ur case is still very weak!!!!!!!!…..i don't know whether…

Bani: Look I have to win this case no matter what!!!!!

T: I know!! U want all of his property!!!!! But it wont be easy getting it!

Bani: well I have to!!!!!!…….

T: I will try but cant promise you anything!

Bani goes home..

She comes in

Everyone looks at her!!!!!

They aren't very happy!!!

They look at her and walk off

Rano is standing there..

Rano: U know.. U are like my mother!!…. but today I found out that my mother only cares about herself! And no one else!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bani is looking at her!!

Rano: She became selfish!!!!!!!!….. And if this is kind of mother that you are….. then I don't want one!!!!!

And she walks off!!!

Bani is looking on!!!!!!

Masi: Bahu… what has gotten over you?? I would never think u would do something like this???

Bani: Look I have done it… now just leave me alone!!!!!!.. This is between me and him…..

And she walks off!!!!!

Masi cant believe it!!!

Bani was soo rude!!

Masi is looking at her!

Bani goes inside the room

And closes the door!

She has an angry face!!

But slowly

That face

Turns into a sad one!!

She goes on the bed!!!

And cries a little

And says to herself…… I am sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


The End!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Preview for tomorrow:

Everyone cant believe Bani's attitude!!!!

She's soo rude!!!…!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow 👏 awesome like your others. i thing jai send tarun to bani..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#8
Wow that was good hun!!!!!

I hope your ff Bani has some sense.

and i hope that Jai finds out the truth before anyone in this ff(well i guess tarun can find out but who cares).

Can't wait to read more!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG!!! i want more!! public demand, you must fufill our wishes 😆 Man, how many FFs can u get me addicted to 😆 Well, great job, just like all the other ones 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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WOW! di... u make me addicted to ur ffs!! wow!

di..

looking forward to the next part!!

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