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Just another small fiction.. shall post in short parts.. thanks a lot for all the love to my other works
GUROOR
(like pride in hindi)
Maan had already tried 4 of his only decent formal shirts since morning but none was making him feel the way he was supposed to feel. He removed his tie & threw it on the ground in frustration.
Pooja his mom came from behind & caressed his back lovingly.
Pooja - beta itna kyun paresan ho raha hain
Maan shied & looked at her
pooja - abhi bhi der nahi huin hain, if u want hum sab chalten hain formally unse milne
Maan hugged her lovingly. She never failed to give the support he always wanted. His mom, his daadi, his bro Dev & his princess anni. Always the right words at the right time.
Maan shied & looked at her
pooja - abhi bhi der nahi huin hain, if u want hum sab chalten hain formally unse milne
Maan hugged her lovingly. She never failed to give the support he always wanted. His mom, his daadi, his bro Dev & his princess anni. Always the right words at the right time.
Even though they belonged to a middle class family they were happy & contented. His dad was a respectable bank officer. After his death, the bank had offered the job to the family. Maan was in 2nd yr MBA then & Dev had just completed his graduation. Seeing Maan's interest in his studies his mom had suggested that Dev to take up the offer.
Dev had been very supportive & taking care of his family since then.
Its been 2yrs now. Maan had very successfully completed his studies even had good offers in his hand but he always wanted to do something of his own. Even then his family supported him. Its been a year he has been working on his business. Dev had openly told him to ask for any loan from the bank & he will personally work on getting it approved.
Its been 2yrs now. Maan had very successfully completed his studies even had good offers in his hand but he always wanted to do something of his own. Even then his family supported him. Its been a year he has been working on his business. Dev had openly told him to ask for any loan from the bank & he will personally work on getting it approved.
But things got a little complicated yesterday when he was dropping the love of his life back from her office yesterday. Her dad caught them on the bike at the signal. Not that he was scared but he didn't want all this now. Not when he is not settled. He didn't have an option when Geet had spend the whole night crying over the phone. She had pleaded him to speak to her dad just once.
He was supposed to meet her dad in some up class restaurant. He was not sure what to say but one thing was clear Geet was his life & he would do anything for her.
Pooja tucked his collar neatly & looked at him lovingly. Kissi ke nazar na lagen mere beta ko.
Maan took her blessing & rushed out. Dev came in rushing just then & handed him few thousand rupees.
Maan - itne pasien kyun dev?
Dev - bro I had found out that place is really expensive. It won't look good if u don't have money
pooja heard them curiously
Maan - but thats the truth na Dev. I don't have anything right now
dev - thats why main itne subha subha bank se draw karke aaya. Merian ATM main tho itna withdrawl limit bhi nahi hain
Maan looked at this little brother in respect but refused to take any.
Maan - I don't want to show them any wrong picture here.
Agar hoten tho bhi tum he bolo Dev hum kya itne pasien hotel main udda denge.
Maan took her blessing & rushed out. Dev came in rushing just then & handed him few thousand rupees.
Maan - itne pasien kyun dev?
Dev - bro I had found out that place is really expensive. It won't look good if u don't have money
pooja heard them curiously
Maan - but thats the truth na Dev. I don't have anything right now
dev - thats why main itne subha subha bank se draw karke aaya. Merian ATM main tho itna withdrawl limit bhi nahi hain
Maan looked at this little brother in respect but refused to take any.
Maan - I don't want to show them any wrong picture here.
Agar hoten tho bhi tum he bolo Dev hum kya itne pasien hotel main udda denge.
He very confidently drove to the hotel. What more does a man wants in his life, a loving family, his jaan & the desire to excel. He parked his bike at the parking area & walked in without bothering to notice the looks he was getting from the hotel staff.
He directly went into the restaurant area where he was supposed to meet Mr Mohinder Handa. He looked confidently into the peering pair of eyes. Geet sat there timidly.
Maans eyes softened instantly seeing her. His heart cried out seeing her eyes all red screaming out her plight last night which was not unknown to him. His fingers clinched in anger at the person who had led all that to happen.
Geet got little worried seeing Maan like that. She knew it would be nothing less than the 'clash of Titans'
Both of them with strong personalities & a temperament to match.
Both of them with strong personalities & a temperament to match.
thanks a lot
muskan
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