Maaneet os ****HUMSAFAR*** 13/3/2014

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                                                   Humsafar
Is int that he never saw a any beautiful girl in his life. Even more then her,but there is something spl in her which attracts him towards her. In the mob of hypocrats where all love to pretends,she is very eye catching with her simplicity. Like she is not the part of this society. Eternity creates her in their own sweet time. He feel attraction on just one glimpse. This high society parties never liked by him what being a social animal he cant even avoid. Today he met with her by chance.

Maan an eye candy of his society. Everybody loves to be with him. Not because he is a good human being or have extra ordinary features,but for his name and money. All wants to become his closeone just for their own benefits. He too awares of it but he avoid and moved on his life as it was. He accept the selfish nature of his surroundings. Today he was invited in the ring ceromony of his best friend Aayan. He went but as usual feels alone,till one angelic beauty grab his all attention. She was so simple and adorable. No efffort for making her self a show piece like all other girls in the party. Maan went on stage to congrat his friend and his fiancee,and the same time that girl come up on stage. She is a best frind of his fiancee Shruti. Aayan introduced Maan with Shruti's best friend Geet. His dream come true. He was seeking for a chance and here he get it. Maan raised his hand and simply said 'HI' to her. She hesitated first but then she too respond by raising her hand.

This was their first intraction. Afterwards all engrossd in party atmosphere. Geet too not felt comfortable her. She wont belong to this society and never like its rules. She was to sitting alone in a corner. Maan saw her alone and went to her. He start talking,thought he himself was a reserved person but with her he feels strage comfortable in his behaviour. In begining she is not comfortable as he is completely unkonwn to her. But his soft spoke and skills to attract others make her comfortable with him. She too start opening to him.

Starts with a casual talk they share their lies and dislikes which unknowningly match exact with each other. She was from hosiyarpur and belongs to rich family there. Here she is coming to complete her studies. Maan obsereve restlessness in her body language so he wont force her for anything. They talk and talk more.

After that night Maan only thought about her. He chrish those moments in his mind which he spend with her. He wont know wheather he met her again or not but destiney decided it already. On the ocassion of Aayan's marriage he meet with her again. He cancel his all meeting just in hope to met her again. And yes his efforts is fruitful. She is coming for Shruti's marraige. Maan's heart is jumping in rejoice. His gleamed eyes reflecting his happiness. He start taliking with Geet and this time she aint uncomfortable as she was in their first meet. Gradually she start opening with him. Both enjoy the ceromony and at the time of Bidaai when Shruti start crying Geet'e eyes too welled up. Maan glance and chuckled at her innosence. She was standing next to him and try every possible way not to show her tears as other make mock of her. Maan secreatly raised his henky to her.

'have it and wiped off your tears. Abi koi nahi dekh ra.' Maan said softly with a smile.

Geet glance at him with her teary eyes. She scared may he too taunts her,but his smile told her that he really concern for her,not making mock of her emotions like other do. Hesitatingly she pick up and wiped off her tears.

Maan went inside a bring glass of water for her. He passed it but she denied. 'i am ok.' she confirmed him.

All leave the venue one by one. Its too late now and no local transport is presenting for her. Maan offers her lift. Her heart thumped badly as she wont know him. Geet denied taking his help. Maan understands her fear so he sat with her on bus stop.

'aap yaha kya kar rae hai?' Geet asked confusingly.

'aap mere sath chalna nahi chahti or akele main apko yaha chhod nahi skta. Its not safe. So wait karunga apke sath jab tak public transport shuru nahi ho jata.' Maan replied simply. No fake words no sugar coating. Clearly told his intentions without any hidden meaning.

Automatically a smile crept on her lucious lips. 'aap kyu pareshan ho rae hai wo bhi ek stranger k liye?' Geet asked curiously.

'first of all to main pareshan nahi ho ra hu. Secondly you are not a stranger completely. Or agr apko aitraaz na ho to hum dost b bann skte hai?' maan stretech his arm towrds her. This time e really wants to be her friend. He want someone in his life who cares for his emotions. Geet glance in his eyes. His dark eyes assurig her and unknowingly she too get attracted towrds him. Geet held his hand and accept his friendship.

'see ab hum friends hai. Ab to apko koi takleef nahi hogi mere yaha baithne se.' Maan said casually to lightened her mood. Ek baat puchhu? Aap roi kyu thi us time?' Maan start intracting with her.
main aisi hi hu. Jab bidai ka muka aata hai. I start crying.' she told him in a flow.

'apne bare me soch k.' he said with a smile.

Geet gulp. She stare him as he caught her red handed. How he knows the exact reason? She thinking. Geet nooded yes. 'but all start making mock of me.' she told him. 'par aap aise nahi ho.' suddenly she assume something about him. Yes he is not like others. He cares for her and her emotions too. The last line of her spark many new emotions in both. Both lost in each other eyes for a moment,and suddnly a sharp beep sound of car distract them. Both removed their gaze. Maan asked one more time and this time she agreed with him. Maan drop her at her place and also gave his number to her.

'Geet ye mera no hai. Kabi b zarurat pade,just gave me a call.' He handover the slip and went away. Geet went inside with a smile. Two months passed and they intract with each other on phone. Whenever both feels alone they share their feelings with each other.

One day Maan suggest her to do part time job in his office. He wants her to be close with him. Geet also agreed with his proposal and joined his office. This is a complete new atmosphere for her. Moreover Maan's extra care towards her wont tolrated by his staff member. Sply for Sasha,who was very close to him.

Geet start working with him and Maan make her understand each and everything by himself. Sasha is burning in rage. She wont loose any chance to make mock of her or insult her. But Maan's support couraged Geet to face her. She too snap back her. Geet now becoming more confident then before. Their friendship and pure bond connect them on both mental and emotional level. He feels alive in her presence. Even after office he connects with her on phone. The person who hate talking become talktive after her enterance in his life. Both starts feeling for each other but no one told to another one.

Sasha wants revenge and to kick out her from Maan's life. Pammi,Maan's step mother,who was only looking for a chance to destroy him,now get a opportunity to destroy Maan. She knows Maan trust on Sasha blindly and when she himself go against of him then no need to do much.

Pammi spoiled her rageful mind easily and involved her in her mischevious plan. Slowly slowly with the help of Sasha Pammi get control over all the property. She assured Sasha if he get poor then Geet will leave on the same day. It was just her plan to use Sasha's skill. Pammi overtake the KC and KM both and kicked him off the mansion. Maan was shattred completely. He broked off,not because of loosing his property but his own people chated him. His heart broken. Maan leave everything but still the tease he have,was piercing his soul. The family he loved more then his life left him like this. His life had no meaning for him at the moment but one soft hand strengthen him in his toughest face of life. Geet hold him. She took him to her place for food and shelter and to gave moral support to him.

Dark night was long but not as much which can hide the shine of sun for foreve. Geet boost him to fight again and for that she gave him a new start.

'Maan ye noida wale office k papers hai jo apke naam pe hai. Ye KC ki property nahi hai. Isliye ispe Pammi aunt ka koi bas nahi hai.' Geet handover the papers to him.

'par Geet ye sab kaise?' Maan turn astonished.

'Maan us dinn jab apne ye property khareedi thi to ye papers mujhe diye the k main ise company k naam pe transfer kar du. Or main aisa karne b wali thi,par tabi maine Sasha or Pammi aunt ki baat suni. Mujhe sab kuchh to samjh nahi aaya bas itna sunai diya ki wo property ki bate kar rai thi. Pammi aunt use thanx keh rai thi. Mujhe kuchh samjh nahi ki kya baate ho rai hai. Par mujhe laga kuchh gadbad to ho rai hai. Tab maine ye papers jo sololy apke naam pe the rehne diye. Pata nahi kyu par mera dil nahi mana. Or dekhiye achha hua ki maine ye transfer nahi kiye the. Maan ye office sirf or sirf apka hai. Or yahi se aap apni nayi shuruat keejiye.' Geet explain him and cleared his all doubts. Maan glance her lovingly and hugged her in anticipation.

Due to her now he had something to do a fresh start. Maan set up his office there and Geet helps him. Gradually it took times but soon he start gaining everything again. Maan engrossed too much in creating,and he wont even get time for Geet. Gradually their convo to effected by this. Geet even leave the job because of her examz and Maan also allowed her to concentrated on her examz. Due to both's busy schedule both get parted. Even their talk time is getting less day by day.

Two months passed and they hardly talk with each other. Maan was on tour so wont able to takl to her for more then 20 days. One day she able to connect with him. Geet informed him that her parents forcily took her to england for skae of her marraige. Maan's world shaken again. He felt as someone snatch his life from him.
She wont even able to told him everything. Suddenly phone cuts and Maan shattred down. His heartbeat rosed badly. Many bad thoughts clutching his mind. Maan leave his all work and moved to England in her search. He used his all power to search her. He already brokened and then one more bad news. With the help of local police he get to know that an one accidental case of Indian girl is registered last night. Maan went with then to hospital. He is just praying that she wont his Geet. But his fear comes true. Geet was met with an accident and her condition was serious. Geet's pulse is sinking and due to heavyblood loss it become hard for docs to revive her. Maan glance her and he cursed himself. Maan went inside and sat near her. He just held her limp hand in his hands and kissed softly. His tears rolled over his cheek and wet her hand.

'i am sorry Geet i am so sorry. Fault is all mine. Agr maine pehle hi btaya hota that how much i love you to ye sab nahi hota. Geet you are my soul,my life. My only source of breathing. Please wont go leaving me behind.' Maan's eyes turn blank. He turn silent,just sitting near her holding her henad for hours. His touch create magic. She too feels him even in her uncounciousness. Geet's hands and feet shows movements. Maan shout and called doc. They came and attend her. Maan is praying for her and god ans back to his true love. Doc come out and told him about her condition.

'dont worry. Now she is out of danger.'He confirmed seeing his panicked eyes.

Maan sighed and falls on his knees. He clenched his eyes and gave thanx to god. Maan went inside and caressed her head lovingly. He bend on her forehead and kissed softly. Then he took her hand and kissed there too. Meantime her family arrived there but Maan wont allowed them to go near to her. With the help of police he threw them out. He also told them that her family is hell responcible for her bad condition as they are forcing her for marriage against her will. Police dragged them to jail and start interrogating them,where her father confess that due to his pride and ego he is forcing her for marraige and when she denied they beat her and locked her in room without any food for three days. Geet couraged and get a chance to escape in mid night and met with an accident. Maan wants to kills them all for tourtring his life,but Police wont allowed him. They assured him for taking strict actions against them all.

Geet get full concious and found Maan near her. She wants to utter but Maan make her shut. 'shh... Sab theek hai Geet. Main aa gaya hu na. Ab koi tume nuksaan nahi pahuncha skta.' Maan assured her to vanish the fear he noticed in her hazled eyes.

'Maan..' she cried and Maan wiped off her tears.

Maan held her hand and kissed on her eyes. 'bas ab or aansu nahi. Maine kaha na main hu tumhare sath. Geet i love you and wanna spend my life with you. Will you marry me?' he confessed his feelings towards her.

Geet nodded and he filled her in his embrace. 'now know one parted us. Or Geet aaj k baad na mera koi hai tumhare siva na tumhara koi hai mere siva.' Maan told her everything. Geet cried silently for her parents but soon she calmed in the warmth of his love. She knew her parents never loved her and taking her as burden only,but finally she have someone who love her and care for her. Geet kissed him back and buried herself in him.

Maan taking full care of her and after she getting discharged both flew back to India,where Maan get married with her with full rituals. He make every moemnt of her life spl just to see her smile. Geet finally get all happiness and both get true Humsafar in form of each other.

Maan filled her life with happiness and she bacome his biggest support. Everytime when he felt low,Geet support him alot and strengthen his courage. After two years both bless with twins. One cute princess and one sweety little princes. Their remaining emptness is now fulfilled with the arrivals of these little souls. With two kids their bond grew stronger and stronger and by the every passing sec their love for each other turn more deeper and pure.
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lovely os
loved it!!!!!
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lovely...
the best line was: na mera koi hai tumhare siva and na tumhara koi hai mere siwa...
truely humsafar...!!!!!!!!
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Awesome especially bus stop tum mere saath aa nahi rahi ho aur akela tumhe chod nahi sakta not safe for u to good i loved itEdited by sangeeta33 - 10 years ago
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beautiful one

truly they were made for each other as they knew wat they feel
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sweet & awesome story . loved it 😊
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superb os. very touching and beautiful story. maneet's had no one who cares about them. but after getting each other they got whole world. how can someone be so much low that they were torturing their own daughter  on the name of family's honor. i loved that os. maneet supported each other in their bad time. these are the best humsufer. 
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Just awesome how they became humsafar was really mindblowing
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wonderful story...

kehte hain apno ki pehchaan musibat mein hi hoti hai...

Sasha although claimed to love him but became pawn for his destruction... but Geet supported him and thank God she didn't transfer that Noida property...it solely belongs to Maan and he started his new life...

Geet accident but his love bring her back to life and then they are nwo married happily...whole story in one-shot...