Mg OneShot- ~Chori-Chori..Chupke-Chupke~ (season#2 link-pg36)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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He stood leaning on the tree..looking at the building in front across the road..waiting for the last bell to ring. After 10minutes of wait, the bell rang. He immediatly straighten himself..and started searching for that one person, for whom he was here. And soon enough he spoted her..who has been the reason of his restlessness for past few days. He saw her coming towards the main gate, she lookd cute in her uniform. She was busy with her friends..didnt even noticed him..who's eyes were stuck on her only. He wished that she would look at him at least for once.. But she was totally obivous of his presence around her!

She byed bye to others..but one of her friend..may be close friend was with her. As both started walking.. he too followd..but with a safe distance. It has become his routine nowadays. She & her friend stoped to eat "gola". He hided behind a nearby tree. She chosed "kala-khutta". He smiled when he saw her making faces while suking & liking that sour syrup..just like a kid. He chukld when she asked that "golawala" for extra syrup.

After that she stopd at a garden. She ran inside drraging her friend along with her. Her payal made a beautiful shann-shann sound as she ran towards the swings. Both the girls took one swing each & it seems that they were having a comptition that who can go higher. She was laughing & gigling..while he was lost in her. Then she collected her fav flowers like always.

"bye geet" her friend said..as they reached near her colony..nd both went in diffrent directions. She, geet turned at the left & he too followd. Sometimes.. She was moving that water bottle in her hand or sometimes she was kicking the stones on the empty road..without knowing that some one was watching her carfree acts.

When she reached near her house..she pushed opend the gates & ran inside. He stood there..watching her..who disappeard in the main door. He was about to go when he noticed something shiny near the gates of her house. He checkd around once..and went near to take a closer look. He smiled seeing that thing..recognaising it. He bend down & pick it up. It was her payal(anklet). He again looked around to check if anyone saw him. He brought it near his lips..n kissed it.. before keeping it securely in his pockets..and then he left..smiling to himself.     

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice 😊
Will love to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesum OS !Well written 😊
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lovely OS πŸ‘
can we expect some more parts to it ? 😳
would definitely love to read more of it πŸ˜ƒ
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nice dear😊

sweet osπŸ‘
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very nice ! one shot...? would love to read more...
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lovely os
thanks for the pm

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very nice cannot wait for more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful dear
loved it
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww
it will have more parts???????????