BECHAIN DILL a maaneet ff update on pg 51 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
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updating
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#93
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#94
no way to stop writing
now coming to that
Geet got a HC
while maan has a KC
interesting
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hi guys thanks alot for liking the update😃
a big thanks to mayapari😳
 chapter 3
BECHAIN DILL

In flight from delhi to london the maan sing
khurana was sitting in his usual style thinking deeply

maan to himself

maan-
        pata nahi aaj aisa kyu lag raha hai ki mai USSE milu ga...
 par wo yaha kaise ho sakti hai????
 pata nahi use mai yad hu bhi ya nahi...
nahi maan tujhe is bechain dill ko kabo main rakha na hoga
 isme koi emotion ki jagha nahi hai
and again the face of MAAN is covered into the face of  the gr8 MSK 
who does not have any emotions...

as the flight landed in london airport and the maan sing khurana steped
out only to be welcomed by a sweet and a pleasurable air
it felt  as if the air was also welcoming him

adi-
   sir the media is wating for u

and they moved towards the exit of the airport to be surronded by
media,bodygaurds tried to save maan form media

media person- 
mr. khurana what do u think "wil this time also the project
wil be given to kc"

another media person- 
       mr. khurana what is ur option for handa construction

till the time maan would have reacted and would ve been stopped by the media 
he was stopped by a melodious laughter!!!!!
he turned to look at her but couldnt...
it seemed as if she was laughin on a joke wch her frnd would ve said
once inside the car...
he again turned to look at her...
but the car was already on its way to hotel
maan was now also was looking back and thinking about some thing
 may be about the voice he heard 
 but he came out of his thought as the car stopped in front of the most
 famous hotel of london and the staff of the
hotel opens the gate to welcome the maan sing khurana in the hotel

adi-
    sir the meeting is after 1 hr till then u can freshen up

maan just nods and went toward his suit which was ready for him
as maan entered, he straight away went to the washroom and took out his
coat,shirt and vest and stood under the shower 
As the water was flowing from his handsome face to the broad chest
only to be touched by his well built abs 
it was like the water was blessed that it could touch his perfect greek god body


maan pushed his hair with his hand in frustration
it was like the water was also not helping him to calm his 
BECHAIN DILL



he came out of the shower the white towel was hanging through his
perfect neck line toching his well tone chest (me thinking... haat dhak dhak...dreamy)
maan-ya kya hua hai mujhe
kyu aj yeh dil itna bechain ho raha hai,
nahi yeh sab mera waham hai
wo yaha nahi ho sakti aur agar hogi bhi to ab
mujhe koi farak nahi parta 
i just need to work and my every illusion wil be vanished
and i wil go back to india 
ya i wil return to india day after tmrw

and maan calls adi

maan- 
     adi we r going to india day after tmrw

adi - 
    sir we ve meetings lined up!!!!!!!

maan -
         i dont want to listen any thing arrange the meeting back to back
but we r going to india day after tmrw
did u understand

adi-
     ye..s.s..s  s..s..sir

adi to himself

adi-
        pata nahi maan sir ko achanak kya hua par ita na pata hai ki jarur
kuch honewala hai kuch joPHIR SE sab kuch badal dega


precap-dont know but the tofan is coming soon

author note -i hope this much long update wil satisfy u all

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puja😳

next part - pg 20


Edited by anvashakhurana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
loved it ðŸ˜Š
awesome!!!!!
maan in shower...
woah...
m dreaming!!!!!!!
who is she!!!!
m getting more curious...
update soon😊
ll be waiting😃
Edited by mayapari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
nice ff
loving the flow of the story
want to read more
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
awsome update
loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
Loved it puja !!! aaahhh... am not able to handle the mystery building up in the story !!!! Lovely !!!
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Very Lovely Update...