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maaneet0887

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Posted: 12 years ago

GUYS,I'VE STARTED A NEW FF AS I'VE NOTED PREVIOUSLY TO U.DON'T YOU THINK THAT IF WE MAKE MAAN & GEET AS JADUGAR,MAGICIAN LIKE HARRY POTTER & GINNY WEASELY.AM TRYING TO GET THAT IDEA FROM SOME DAYS.PLS GIVE ME UR OPINION.

PROLOGUE

A man came to street of Janakpuri in Delhi & lighted a cigarette lighter like object holding a small bundle.The lighter sucked the lights of all the street lights leaving the street as dark.That man came near no.4 house & saw a tabby cat sitting on the wall which had strange marks around her eyes.That man chuckled,"Gddo to see you here Professor Mittal."The tabby cat had turned into a 40 aged woman who frowned at the man but said with respect,"Professor Dayashankar,aap yahan kya kar rahen hai?"Prof.Dayashankar said smiling,"Mein yahan nilemma ki mishani uske behen ke ghar pahunchane aaya hoon."Prof.Mittal said nervously,"Meine sunah ki kaale jaadu ka baadshah Kaalbhairav ne Khurana's ko maar diya aur Maan ko bhi.Kya yeh sach hai professor."Prof.Dayashankar gave a grim expression & Prof.Mittal whimpered,"Ab Maan Singh Khurana ka kya hoga?"Prof.Dayashankar didn't say anything & kept that bundle near the door which revealed a baby boy who was fat asleep in the bundle.He had a cut in the forehead which was the shaped as lightening bolt.Profs.Mittal & Dayashankar whispered to the boy,"Good luck Maan."And they vanished into thin air.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hQwtcnYK9JM[/YOUTUBE]

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Part 17-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2866960?pn=22
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Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 12 years ago

i love harry potter and obviously maneet. please remove cho's character if possible.. i can't see anybody else with maan. lol

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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

prologue
nice...
remembering HP days...
cont soon...

PS - add the links too in the pm dear...coz u are writing more than one FF at a time...

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maaneet0887

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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 1

Mr & Mrs Juneja,of no.4,Janakpuri,were proud to say that they were perfectly normal,thank you very much.They were the last people who are expected to be involved in anything strange & mysterious,becoz,they just didn't hold with such nonsense.Mr.Prabath Juneja was the director of a firm called Malhothra & co.,which was expert in the marketing business.He was big beefy man with hardly any neck,although he did have a very large moustache.Mrs.Pummy Juneja was thin & blonde & had nearly twice the usual amt of neck,which came in very useful as she spent so much of her time craning over garden fences,spying on the neighbours.The Junejas had a small son called Dhruv & in their opinion there was no finer boy anywhere.

The Junejas had everything they wanted but they also had a secret & their greatest fear was that somebody would discover it.They didn't think they could bear it if anyone found out abt the Khuranas.Mrs Khurana was Mrs.Juneja's sister,but they hadn't met for several yrs;in fact,Mrs Juneja pretended she didn't have a sister,becoz her sister & her good for nothing husband were as Un-Junejayish as it was possible to be.The Junejas shuddered to think what the neighbours would say if the Khuranas arrived in the street.The Junejas knew that the Khuranas had a small son too,but they had never seen him.This boy was another good reason for keeping the Khuranas away,they didn't want Dhruv mixing with a child like that.

When Mr & Mrs Juneja woke up in the dull grey tuesday that our story starts,there was nothing abt the cloudy sky outside to suggest that strange & mysterious things would soon be happening all over the country.Mr.Juneja hummed as he picked out his most boring tie for work & Mrs Juneja gossiped away happily as she wrestled a screaming Dhruv into his high chair.None of them noticed a large tawny owl flutter past the window..At half past eight,Mr.Juneja picked up his briefcase,pecked Mrs.Juneja on the cheek & tried to kiss Dhruv but missed,becoz Dhruv was now having tantrums & throwing his cereal at the walls.'Little tyke(badmaash bachcha),"chortled Mr.Juneja as he left the house.He got into his car & backed out of no.4 house.

Precap-An old man smiled at Mr.Juneja & said,"Don't be sorry,my dear sir,for nothing could upset me today!rejoice for you-know-who has gone at last!even the Muggles like yourself should be celebrating this happy day!"

GUYS AM TRYING TO START THE STORY FROM CHILDHOOD.i'LL SHOW YOU HOW MAAN SINGH KHURANA CAME TO MR.JUNEJA'S HOUSE & THEN ONLY I'LL FRAME GEET'S STORY.JUST YOU'VE TO KEEP PATIENCE.
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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

part 1
nice...
cont soon...

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Dona

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Posted: 12 years ago

loved the update

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Neer Kataria

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Posted: 12 years ago

I luv Harry potter nd excited to read maaneet in this frame of story gud luck

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maaneet0887

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Posted: 12 years ago

PART-2

When he drove the car from his home,it was on the corner of the street that he noticed the first sign of something peculiar-a cat reading a map.For a second,Prabath didn't realise what he had seen-then he jerked his head around to look again.There was a tabby cat standing on the corner of his street,but there wasn't a map in sight.Waht could he have been thinking of?It must have been the trick of light.Prabath blinked & stared at the cat.It stared back.As Prabath drove around the corner & up the road,he watched the cat in his mirror.It was now reading the sign that said no.4 Janakpuri-no,looking at the sign;cats couldn't read maps or signs.Prabath gave himself a little shake & put the cat out of his mind.As he drove towards town he thought of nothing except a large order of projects he was hoping to get the day.

But on the edge of town,work were driven out of his mind by something else.As he sat in the usual morning traffic jam,he couldn't help noticing that there seened to be a lot of strangely dressed people about,people in cloaks.Prabath couldn't bear people whi dressed in funny clothes-the get-ups you saw on young people!He supposed this was some stupid new fashion.He drummed his fingers on the steering wheel & his eyes fell on a huddle of these weirdos standing quite close by.They were whispering excitedly together.Prabath was enraged to see that a couple of them weren't young at all;why,that man had to be older than he was,& wearing an emerald green cloak!The nerve of him!But then it struck Prabath that this was probably some silly stunt-these people were obviously collecting for something ...yes,that would be it.The traffice moved on, & a few minutes later,Prabath arrived in the Malhothra &co. car park,his mind on work.

Prabath always sat with his back to the window in his office on the ninth floor.If he hadn't.he might have found it harder to concentrate on drills that morning.He didn't see the owls swooping past in broad day light,though people down in the street did;they pointed & gazed open-mouthed as owl after owl sped overhead.Most of them had never seen an owl even at the night time.Prabath,however,had a perfectly normal,owl-free morning.He yelled at five different people.He made several important telephone calls & shouted a bit more.He was in a very good mood until lunch time,when he thought he'd stretch his legs & walk across the road to buy himself a bun from the baker's opposite.

He'd forgotten all abt the people in cloaks until he passed a group of them next to the baker's.He eyed them angrily as he passed.He didn't know why,but they made him uneasy.This lot were whispering excitedly,too, & he couldn't see a singly tin.It was on his way past them,clutching a large berger in a bag,that caught a few words of what they were saying.

Mein Khuranas ki baat kar raha hoon-'
'-yes,unka beta,Maan-'

Prabath stopped dead.Fear flooded him.He looked back at the whisperers as if he wanted to say something to them,but thought better of it.He dashed back across the road,hurried up to his office,snapped at his secretary not to disturb him,siezed his telephone & had almost finished dialling the home number when he changed his mind.He put the reciever back down & stroked his moustache,thinking...no,he was being stupid.Khurana wasn't such an unusual name.He was sure there were lots of people called Khurana who had a son called Maan.Come to think of it,he wasn't even sure his nephew was called Maan.He'd never even seen the boy.It might have been Maanav or other name.There was no point in worrying Pammi,she always got so upset at any mention of her sister.He didn't blame her-if he'd had a sister like that...but all the same,those people in cloaks...
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Dona

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Posted: 12 years ago

awsome

loved d desi verson of harry potter

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maaneet0887

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Posted: 12 years ago

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PART-3

Prabath found it a lot harder to concentrate on work that afternoon, & when he left the building at 5o'clock,he was still so worried that he walked straight into someone just ouside the door.

'Sorry,'he grunted,as the tiny old man stumbled & almost fell.It was a few seconds before Prabath realised that the man was wearing a voilet cloak.He didn't seem at all upset at being almost knocked to the ground.On the contrary,his face split into a wide smile & he said in squeaky voice that made passers-by stare:'Are bura manane ki koi baat nahi sir,kyunki aaj mujhe kuch bhi bura nahi lagtha kyunki aaj tyohaar ka din hai kyunki that you-know-who has gone at last! Even muggles like urself should be celebrating,this happy,happy day!'And the old man hugged Prabath around the middle & walked off.Prabath stood rooted to the spot.He had been hugged by a complete stranger.He also thought he had been called a muggle,whatever that was.He was rattled.He hurried to his car & set off home,hoping he was imagining thing,which ha had never hoped before,becoz he didn't approve of imagination.

As he pulled into the driveway of number 4,the first thing saw- and it improve his mood-was the tabby cat he'd spotted that morning.It was now sitting on his garden wall.He sure it was the same one;it had the same markings around its eyes.'Shoo!'said Prabath loudly.

The cat didn't move,It just gave a stern look.Was this normal cat behaviour,Prabath wondered.Trying to pull himself together,he let himself into his house.He was still determined not to mention anything to Pammi.

Pammi had had a nice,normal day.She tole him over dinner all abt Mrs.Next door's problems with her daughter & how Dhruv had learnt a new word ('Shan't!').Prabath tried to act normally.When Dhruv had been put up to bed,he went into the living-room in time to catch the last report on the evening news:

'And finally,bird-watchers everywhere have reported that the nation's owls have been behaving very unusually today.Although owls normally hunt at night & are hardly ever seen in daylight,there have been hundreds of sightings of these birds flying in every direction since sunrise.Experts are unable to explain why the owls have suddenly changed their sleeping pattern."The news reader allowed himself a grin.'Most mysterious.And now,over to Palash with the weather.Going to be any more showers of owls tonight,Palash?"

Well, John,"said the weatherman,"I don't know abt that, but it's not only the owls that have been acting oddly today.Viewers as fast apart as,Noida,Gurgaon & Ghaziabad have been phoning into tell me that instaed of the rain I promised yesterday,they've had a downpour of shooting stars!Perhaps people have been celebrating Diwali early-it's not till six months,folks! but I can promise a wet night tonight."

Prabath then turned to Hindi news channel then the channel also said the same news & local news also.He sat forzen in armchair.Shooting stars all over Delhi?Owls flying by daylight?And a whisper abt the Khuranas...
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