Hearttouching real luv story that would Make u cry

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Posted: 12 years ago
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A true sad love story that would make your heart cry... Jo meine likha hai... Woh real mein kisi ke saath hua hai



Mk:" hey sheetal where are you... Der ho rahi hai" Maan said to his best friend sheetal who is a doctor...just friend nothing else
S:" haa baba aayi" sheetal came and smiled at maan.. Maan smiled back
Mk:" late as alaways"
S:" Tum kabhi nahin sudhroge... Aab chalo... Warna hospital keliye late hojayun ge"
Maan laughed and said
Mk:" buhat jaldi yaad aaya ke tumhe hospital bhi jaana hai"
S:" maannn... I will kill you"
Maan laughed and said
Mk:" sorry... Sorry chalo"
Both left from there... Maan dropped her to hospital and left from there
Mk:" bye sheetal"
S:" bye maan" sheetal smiled and maan left from there...
S:" I love you maan... Par mein janti hu Tum mujhe sirf apni aachi dost maante ho... Aur mein yeh baat bata kar humari dosti nahin torna chahti" she smile with tears and went inside.

Maan went to office... He was a photographer... Taking photos of models
Karan maan's best friend
K:" you are late maan"
Mk:" sorry yaar woh sheetal ko hospital chorna tha bas isliye"
K:" hmm"
Mk:" humari model kaha hai"
K:" room mein kabse intezar kar rahi hai"
Mk:" sorry chal jaldi"
They left to room and their model sitting on couch...
Mk:" I am sorry miss... Actually mein late hogaya... Aaj hum yahan Nahin... Balke kahi aur shoot karenge"
M:" what... Kaha"
Mk:" meine ek buhat aachi Jagah dekhi hai photo shoot keliye... Waha"
M:" okay... Then let's go"
Mk:" yeah let's go"
They packed their everything and left from there

They went to a beautiful place... With mountains around
M:" wow beautiful place"
Mk:" hmmm thanks"
K:" start kare"
Mk:" tu baaki Sab logo ko bhi keh ke Sab kuch tayar rakhe"
K:" thik hai"
They start their photo shoot
Maan was clicking photos when a girl crossed his way... And accidentally maan clicked her picture... She turns around her... Maan looked at her... He was lost in her... He was staring at her madly
She is so beautiful... Maan thought
She came near him and said
P:" I am sorry"
Maan was still lost in her... She was also lost in him... It was love at first sight... Both were lost in each other
Maan smiled and geet also smiled... She was geet
G:" I am sorry"
Mk:" it's okay" still lost in her
Geet smiled at him and turns to leave... Maan saw her leaving... It was just like his life is slipping from his hands... Maan became sad
Once again geet turns around and waved him by her hand... Maan smiled and also waved at her
Both smiled at each other... She left from there... Both were in love with each other
After finishing photo shoot they left to their home... Maan was still lost in her...

Next day.. Maan went to office with big smile on his face...
Karan was seeing photos which they took yesterday... The one picture came in his hand and surprised to see her and said to maan
K:"'maan whos is she" he pointed at picture
Mk:" who"
K:"look"
Maan looked at photo and smiled widely... He remembered when she crossed his way and accidentky he took her photo... He grab photo from his hand... He leaves from there.. Karan was confused
He went to his cabin... He saw admiring her... He kissed her photo
And smiled
Mk:" pata Nahin Mein tumse dobara milu ga ya nahin"
He was continously thinking about her

Later... He went to coffee shop...
And saw her again... Sitting alone sipping coffee and reading some novel... He was very very happy to see her again
Maan slowly went to her and said
Mk:" excuse me"
Geet looked at him and she was also very surprised and happy to see him again
G:" aap yahan" she said softly
Mk:"kya itefaq hai... Hum phir se mil Gaye"
Geet smiled and said
G:" plz baithye na"
Mk:" thnanks"
G:" aap photographer hai"
Mk:" hmm aur Tum... I mean aap"
Geet smiled and said
G:" it's okay you can call me tum"
Mk:" nahin it's okay"
G:" meine kaha na... You can call me... Mujhe aacha Lage ga"
Eyelock

Mk:" tumhara naam kya hai"
G:" geet"
Mk:" beautiful name"
G:" thank you... Aur aapka"
Mk:" Maan Singh khurrana"
G:" nice name"
Mk:" thank you"
Both were thinking what to say..
Both looked at each other and smiled
G:" I think mujhe chalna chahiye... Kaafi late hogaya hai"
Mk:" ok... May I"
Geet smiled
G:" sure"
Both walked out and said
Mk:" aap ghar kese jayi gi"
G:" taxi se"
Maan was feeling hesitate and finally asked
Mk:" can I drop you"
Geet looked at him and said
G:" nahin... Nahin mien chali jaogi"
Mk:" it's okay... Mujhe aacha laage ga"
Geet couldnt say no and said
G:" okay"
Maan smiled and opened his car door for her... Geet smiled
Both sit in car... They were stealing glances from each other... Geet noticed Maan is looking at her and she feels shy
Maan dropped her home
G:" thank you"
Mk:" plz thanks mat Kaho... Mujhe aacha laga ke tumne ke mujhe pe bharosa kiya thank you"
Geet was staring at him with tears
Maan saw her tears and feels sad and worried
Mk:" geet tum ro kyun rahi ho... I am sorry agar meine kuch galat kaha ho aur Tum hurt hoyo ho"
Plz I am sorry"
Geet wiped her tears
G:" thank you maan"
Maan cupped her face and kissed her forehead.. Geet looks happy
G:" bye"
Mk:" bye... Btw miss geet dobara hum mile ge yaa nahin"
Geet smiled
G:" aapko kab milna hai"
Maan smiled and said
Mk:" jab bhi princess kahe"
Geet smiled at word princess
G:" ahh kal"
Mk:" kitne baje"
G:" 5 at afternoon"
Mk:" okay"
G:" bye"
Mk:" bye princess"

Both went their home while dancing and singing... Maan shouts happily
Mk:" I love you geet"

There geet was dancing with joy
G:" I love you maan" she said happily

Next day
Geet was waiting for Maan...she was feeling angry he was late... Maan came and saw her angry face
Mk:" shit... She is looking angry"
Mk:" I am sorry geet"
Geet looked at him and turns away
Ek baar Maaf kardona princess maan said and hold his ears
Geet looked at his baby face and burst out laughing... Maan was lost in her
Mk:" why are you laughing"
G:" you were looking so cute" she pulled his cheeks"
Maan smile and said
Mk:" princess you look so beautiful when you laugh"
Geet blushed
Mk:" chale"
Geet nodded both sit in car and left from there
Both were lost in each other... Maan was staring at her lovingly...he was driving less and looking at her more...geet blushed and said
G:" maan age Dekh kar ghari chilaye"
Maan laughed
Geet screamed
G:" maan... Aage"
Maan looked at front and banged...
Everything was finshed... Just finished nothing was left

Both were in operation theatre
Geet was breathing heavily... Blood was continuously flowing from her head...
There was in OT... Both were injured very badly...they were checking maan
D:" Hume blood ki zaroorat hai...warna yeh mar bhi sakta hai..."

After 3 hours doctors came out and saw sheetal and Karan
Doc tell them everything...
D:" mr maan aab bilkul theek hai... Lekin"
They looked at doctors with fear
S:" lekin kya doctor"
D:" him miss geet ko nahin bacha paaye"
They looked at him with shock face
S:" kyaaa"
They had tears in their eyes
They remembered when maan told them that he is love with geet...and he can't live without her... Sheetal was crying hardly Karan hugged her and consoled. He was also crying
S:" what will we tell Maan... That... That his ... His geet is dead"

After 1 hour maan regain conscious
Maan opened his eyes and saw sheetal and Karan standing there with tears in their eyes
Maan remembers about geet and said
Mk:" geet... Meri geet... Meri geet kahan hai"
K:" woh theek hai maan..."
Mk:" kaha hai woh"
S:" woh yahin room mein hai... Uska bhi accident hua tha na" she tried to control her tears
Mk:" woh kesi hai... Meri geet theek haina"
Karan and sheetal looked at each other and Karan said
K:" woh theek hai"
Mk:" mujhe usse milna"
Karan and sheetal looked worried
K:" maan woh abhi aaram kar rahi hai... Baad Mein milna"
Maan nodded and feeling something very bad
Sheetal went out and starting
Crying hardly
Karan consoled her

After 2 days Maan was discharged from hospital
Mk:" geet kaha hai" he asked to sheetal and Karan
K:" tumhe kuch kehna hai Maan"
Mk:" pehle geet kaha hai"
S:" Maan... Woh... Woh geet"
Maan was scared
Mk:" where is geet I want to meet her...WHERE IS SHE" he shouts angirly
K:" geet is no more"
Maan was like someone stabbed knife in his heart... He feels anger and slap Karan hard
Karan looked at him
Mk:" what did you say... Ha"
He held his collar and shouted
Mk:" what did you say"
K:" YOUR GEET IS NO MORE"
Maan was about to slap him again when sheetal stopped him
S:" MAAN... Rukh jao"
Maan looked at sheetal angirly with tears in his eyes
Mk:" sheetal where is my geet"
S:" ge...geet is no more maan"
Maan stepped back
Mk:" you guys said she is fine what the hell is wring with you" he shouts
K:" us waqat teri haalat nahin thi ke tu sach sun sakta isliye humne tujhse yeh sach chupaya"
Maan falls on his knees
S:" us accident Tum log buhat buri tarah se injured hogaye the... Hum tumko hospital lekar aaye... Maan geet ne tumse buhat pyaar kiya... Sacha pyaar... Usne tumhe bachane keliye apni jaan dedi"
Maan looked at her shocked with tears
Mk:" ma...matlab"
Sheetal tells him everything which doctor told her

Flashback:-
Geet was breathing heavily
G:" mere... Mere maan kese hai"
D:" unko khoon ki zaroorat hai... Unka blood group o negative him Jo milna buhat mushkil hai... Aur hym intezar Nahin karsakte"
G:" me...mera blood group O negative hai... A,..aap... Me...mer...mera bl..blood le..lijiye"
Doctors were shocked
D:" yeh aap kya keh rahi hai agar humne aapka blood leliya tau aap mar jaaiye ge"
Geet smiled sadly
G:" mere maan ko bacha lijiye... Agar unko kuch hogaya tau mein wese bhi nahin jee paogi gi... Mein keh rahi hu na... Mera khoon lelijiye"
Doctors looked at each other
D:" par..."
G:" plz it's a requset... Plz"
Doctors nodded and took her blood... Doctors closed their eyes and covered her face with white sheet they came outside and tell everything to sheetal

Flashback ends
Maan was crying hardly... Karan hugged him tight
Mk:" I love you geet"
He went to his room and looked at her photo... He remembers their first meeting
Mk:" I love you geet.. I'll always love you...you left me"
Maan was crying uncontrollably

After 3 months
Maan was in hospital... This was 3rd time when he tried suicide
Seetal was crying
S:" Maan... Tumne aesa kyun kiya"
Mk:" geet ke bina meri koi zindagi Nahin hai... Uske Bina mujhe jeene ka koi haq hai" he said softly
S:" tumne ek baar bhi geet ke baare mein socha maan... You are so selfish maan... You are thinking about yourself... Kya tumne socha ke geet ko Kitni takleef hoi hogi... Tumhare andar uska khoon hai air tum usse khoon ko paani ki tarah baha rahe ho... Usko kitna dard hoya hoga Maan" she was trying to divert his mind from suicide
Maan was feeling guilty
Mk:" I am sorry geet... Mein kabhi aesa nahin karunga"
Sheetal smiled and hugged him
S:" thank you"
His world was only geet...JUST GEET
Maan loves geet more than anything


"A Million Words Would Not Bring You Back, I Know Because I've Tried. Neither Would A Million Tears, I Know Because I've Cried."

"When I Look At You My Heart Skips A Beat But Later That Beat Could Mean A Lifetime Of Tears Wasted On Something I Knew I Could Never Have"

Even when I pour my heart out to you, I'm not sure it shows, that I love you more than you'll ever know."


"I know in reality we can't be together, so I just close my eyes and you're right here with me... in my dreams you're mine forever."

"I was reborn when you first kissed me. Part of me died when you left me. But now I still live, waiting for the day you return to me."


"There is one pain I often feel which you will never know because it is caused by the absence of you."




Teri meri meri Teri prem kahani..
Hai mushkil.. Do lafzo mein yeh bayan na ho paaye
Teri meri baato ka har lamha Sabse anjaana...do lafzo mein yeh bayan naa ho paaye
Har ehsaas mein tu hai..har ek yaad mein Tera afsana.. Do lafzo mein yeh bayan naa ho paye...
Ek duje se hue juda.. Jab ek duje keliye bane
Meri Teri Teri meri prem kahani... Do lafzon mein yeh bayan na ho paaye
Ik larka aur ik Larki ki yeh kahani hai nayi... Do lafzo mein yeh beyan naa hopaye


This was the real sad love story... I had tears in my eyes when I was writing this


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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
Even I'm crying while reading this
it is so heart touching... I feel so bad for whoever is in place of maan in real story 😭
u r an awesome writer.. Ty for sharing this beautiful yet sad story
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Posted: 12 years ago
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u made me 😭😭😭 i cant control my tears beautifully written
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jazz07_dh

Even I'm crying while reading this
it is so heart touching... I feel so bad for whoever is in place of maan in real story 😭
u r an awesome writer.. Ty for sharing this beautiful yet sad story





Thank you so much jazz
I was feeling very sad and I was crying when I read this real story I wanted to share with u all... Love is so painful... I can imagine through this story... That person who lost his true love... Don't know where he is right now... Feeling really really sad for him... That girl loves him more than anything... She gave him new life 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: abinash079

u made me 😭😭😭 i cant control my tears beautifully written




Thank you so much sweety
I still thinking about that person who lost his love
O god it's so difficult when u love someone you can't loose him 😭 😭
But he lost her...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
hard to believe that people like that exist like that in real life :-)
if only everyone was happy :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautifully written, I had tears in my eyes while reading it ðŸ˜­ðŸ˜­
It was so touching
 
Saba xxx
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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
so sad...felling like crying
thanks for pm
it was really sad one
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
I feel bad for the guy in real life.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
Awesome story dr,
very well written, loved it.
this made me cry😭, so touching. now also tears r in my eyes.