~deewangi~ maaneet THREAD 1

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Posted: 13 years ago
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~deewangi~

~GEET HANDA~ 10YRS Delhi Public School Class 6th STD
just moved from junior section to higher section. lots of friends
only daughter of her parents. just stepping into senior grade..excited
reading archies & M&B already..naughty naughty, watching movies romantic,
great at studies. center of attraction ths way or other. best in what ever she did
Ek ladki thi deewani si
Ek ladke pe woh marti thi
Nazrein jhuka ke
Sharma ke galiyon se guzarti thi

~MAAN SINGH KHURANA~ 15yrs Delhi Public School Class 10th STD
silent, no friends at all brought by his daadi after his father ditched his mom for another
lady. his mom died after few years of their parents separation.
average in studies, never an achiever, nothing drew him to that level of excellence
very nervous, can't even speak a word infront of his teachers or any one for that matter. peers take
advantage of that & bully him. he was used it by now.
Jab bhi milti thi mujhse
Mujhse poochha karti thi
Pyaar kaise hota hai
Yeh pyaar kaise hota hai

Kaise kahoon main o yaara
Yeh pyaar kaise hota hai..maine to kabhi pyaar paya hi nahi!!!

geet dressed in her navy blue skirt pulled little above her knees intentionallyπŸ˜‰
walks through the corridor of the school. Actually she was thrown out of the class
because of her mischeif again. she saw him standing in navy blue pants & white shirt
hidding his face, feeling very concious of been sent out of the all because
some one elses mistake.
geet went & stood next to him, folding & resting one leg on the wall
geet nibbling her choclate bar - kya huwa?
he was too embarressed to show his face. he kept quite, hidding his face between his long fingers. she offered him a bite from hers
he just nodded his head for a No
she forcefully fed him..trust me u will feel better
she kept bumping her back restlessly - period katam hone main aur kitne deer hain
he looked at his watch - 20mins
geet - nahi maths ka double class hain, rosy miss second class bhi nahi attend karne deghi
maan raised his head - tumhe bhi class se inkal diya
she looked at him & probably just kept looking at him
he was feeling intimidated with that stare now ..she parted her lips still keeping him
capaitive of her eyes
geet - I love u
maan looked around & seeing if anyone heard or saw them
geet - I really love u
maan fluttered his eyes in disbelief & scared.

PART 2        PART 3        PART 4     PART 5    PART 6   
 
PART 7        PART 8      PART 9     PART 10    PART 11
 
lets see how does this becomes deewangi..intrestingly kiski deewangi!!
please do let me know whether to continue
please please do comment
love
muskan
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I loved it. I never comment much but I love your and FireSafireFire ff. You 2 are amazing. It is so good. Pls update soon. Can't believe you ended your other FF but glad you started a new one. I think it will be maans! Umm maybe geet or both!!!! Update soon. XEdited by Ahill-ks - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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New FF. That was pretty quick. You never cease to amaze me!!!
Interesting beginning. 
Here we have Geet who's confident, outspoken, achiever and Maan is introvert and scared and low on confidence. 

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Posted: 13 years ago
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kool another FF from you to read, πŸ₯³



geet saying "i love you",   me think dhal main kuch kala hai🀣
Edited by kirti_fiji - 13 years ago
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WOW MUSKAN NEW FF......πŸ₯³
CONGRATS.... I M GLAD THAT U STARTED A NEW ONE........AFTER MADHOSHI............  πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
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seems interesting..... looks like skul ka pehla pyaar and all in the making.... :)
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My god...what are you girl..??? Some ff factory or what...???? You are so damn quick with new ffs....!!!!

Like always, this is interesting as well....!!!! Geet saying I love you at first meeting and only in class 6th...is damn funny...lol....πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Muskan Di!!!!!😊
Oh my dear, when I read the subject to your pm and found it said last part of pyar ka ehsaas - I nearly had tears in my eyes😭 because I realised...........I'll onli have truly magical from you - and and and I wanted more!!!!!!!!!! πŸ˜ƒ
but then........ I realised - no 1 can stop ur creative flow😳 and knew you would write more......so here I amπŸ˜› very proud to be a die hard fan of your FFs.....................oh my my I can't wait to read deewangi............u have chosen a good name because we all are filled with deewangi of your writing!!!!!!! luv luv luv it!!!!!!!! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
 
 
ooooooooooo Geet is very confident here - oh baalleeeeee......and Maan the introvert - hahaha nyc comboπŸ˜‰ and omg........................pehle intro main seede keh diya I LOVE YOU!!!!!😲 wow!!!!!!!!!!! bohut forward niklii πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³
😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hahahhaa....i love u...
where did that come from???
nice n interesting comcept...
plz add me to ur pm list...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love this ff already.. grea start.. cont soon!!!!!!