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Posted: 13 years ago
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Angel : lets go baby..

The baby looks up and sees the angel protecting her till
yesterday smiling down upon her and holding a hand to her .



The baby shakes her head and clings harder to the cord .



Angel: U cant stay here anymore, god wants you back with
himself.



Baby: but mamma wants me too, she loves me.



Angel looked at her with a sad smile.



Angel: I know ur mamma loves u a lot but the outside world
doesn't let her be happy and now its her time to be unhappy again. U must leave
her and come with me.



Baby: No mamma has no one except me in her life. She will be
all alone if I too leave her.



Angel: baby, mamma has papa too now.



Baby: but papa fights with mama



The baby puts on a sad face.



Angel eyes are filled with tears now. She had taken many
children away before but this one, the child for whom this girl had given up
everything, even the angel didn't have the heart to take her. But God had given
her clear orders to bring her back. The child who had been the reason for this
girl of 18 to live.



Angel: papa fights with mama coz he loves her.



Baby: But papa forgets about mama when he is angry, he hurts
her too.



Angel had no answer to this. She didn't know what to say.
She usually had answer to all the questions but today she failed. For the first
time the angel had run out of words and explanations to the little one.



Angel: baby come we are getting late. I cant leave u here,
mamma will be up any moment



Baby: But mamma will not be able to live without me.



Angel: baby she will learn to and u can come back to her
later but not now.



The baby was baffled at this statement. If she could come
back later why couldn't she stay now.



Baby: have I been a bad girl.



Angel: no baby u have always been good. U have supported ur
mamma and given her strength when she was weak u have been a good child to her
always.



Baby: then why should I come



Angel: baby ur mamma needs to learn to live with papa too
and she thinks only about u all the time not papa.



The baby chuckles at this.



Baby: see my mamma loves me so much.



Angel : I know baby.



Baby: papa, loves me too u know that and he is happy that
mamma thinks of me more than him.



Angel: papa loves u and mamma more than u know baby but..



The angel was again lost for words



Baby: I can come back later..



Angel: Yes u can..when mamma and papa call you, you can come
back to them and at that time I promise I will let u be with her always.



Baby is confused what to say to this.



But baby ehsaas ( I named her that) does not wanna go with
angel. She cant leave mamma all alone and go.Yes papa is there but mamma will
be shattered if she goes.  She is
thinking of some thing to say so that he can stay back with mamma.



Baby: what will mamma do once she knows I am no more with
her.



Angel knows very well that mamma will never be able to get
hold of the fact that her baby left her all alone in life. Mamma had fought
against the world for the baby and now baby also leaves her. Mamma will take
days or even months to accept the truth.



Angel: baby papa will help her to live ahead..i promise u
that..papa will be always with her..he will stand with her whenever she needs
him..



Baby: papa will be with her, but mamma will not be able to
take it in that I left her..i know my mamma I know her.



Angel : Baby mamma will have to live with that..I cant leave
u here..not with these people the outside people do not like u and they will
harm u .



Baby: I am not afraid till I have my mamma and papa with me.
I know they will protect me always.



They hear a voice..its mammas..



" baby I will be ok..dont worry and don't worry u will be ok
too..i know I hurt u but papa will take care of us..i know he will.."



That's the last words that mamma spoke before darkness surrounds
the baby..



They hear another voice.."angel come back with the baby I cant
give u any more time.."



Angel: come baby..we have to go now..



Baby: but..



Angel: u heard him we have to'I am sorry..



The baby is in tears by now..but she knows she has lost the
battle..



She says: mamma I will come back, I will back whenever u
call me and then I will be with u forever..i am sorry to leave u like this..but
I know papa will take care of u..and mamma u love me na so take care of urself
for me..i will come back soon..



With this the baby ehsaas hands over herself to the angel
and the angel and baby leave..



In the world outside..the doctor says.." sorry Mr. Khurana I
couldn't save the child.. but your wife is out of danger now.."



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Ilovemsk thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
Nice os....
Misscariage. :(

R u going to carry on... I want to see wat happens next x
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Posted: 13 years ago
#3
OMG! i hope you are happy...making me cry while im at work! but haye...Ehsaas! beautiful...heart breaking but beautiful! =)
 
JAZ
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Posted: 13 years ago
#4
awwwwwwww..tht was so sad but so cute at the same time :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#5

that was so sweet yet so sad... I'm going to cry now!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awwww,,,,wonderfully written....first bit left me with teary eyes....but last part justified...good job👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#7
beautifully written .... you had me in tears!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#8
wow lovely OS.. very cute n sad...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#9
Gorgeous work Shreya... luvd it 👏👏👏👏👏
 
And surely shows wats coming up........ Hate th CVs 👎🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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shreya, that was simply beautiful. I dont know how you came up with this but its too good. I hope the cvs see this before they trash the baby. You just made me all teary and i am blinking fast to wipe off the tears. 😔