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Posted: 13 years ago
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Okay!!!
So this OS was wriiten with My janupies Armaan and Bharti in my mind...
I thought of posting a MaanEet version so here it is!!!


He still remembers his mom persuaded him to see a girl and after a lot of discussions Maan agreed to at least give it a try but with one condition that he will go alone and if he likes her then they can go and settle everything with her parents and told them that He will meet her in the green valley park

With a strong mind to say no he made his way towards the park and it started to rain which reminded him of the girl of his dreams, the girl he loved the most

Maan's views

The girl which is in ma heart since the day I met her

I can never forgot that day I clearly remember how much I used to hate rains but that one day changed ma whole life

I was going to confess ma feeling to ma love of the life and called her to meet me at the basket-ball court of the college

Basket-ball - the sport I was least interested in but her making way into ma life changed me completely and brought out a different person from me

I reached the court and saw her playing basket-ball

She was wearing a red top and a white long skirt with her hair tied making a high pony-tail looking beautiful as ever

I was lost in her and came back into ma senses when that stupid ball hit me

I was very pissed off but all ma anger vanished when I saw her laughing loudly

Oh God how much I love her laugh

Whenever she laughs her whole face starts to glow and I loved it

The shine which makes it way to her eyes always makes me loose maself in her deep eyes

I came back to the world and saw her approaching me with a sweet smile on her face

She came to me and stopped in front of me

Geet:Tou mujhe yahan kyun bulaaya??

Maan:Wh mujhe tumse kuh kehna hai

Geet:Acha'. Kya??

Maan:Mujhe kehna hai ke ke ke'

Geet:Kya ke ke ke laga rakha hai ke ke ke aage bhi kuch bolo

Maan:Geet I I

Geet turned to go

Maan seeing her go said loudly

Maan:Geet I Love You

She stopped in her tracks

Maan: I Love You Geet

She turned and looked at him in dis-belief

Maan:Mujhe nahin pata ke tum mere baare mein kya sochti ho lekin Geet maine tumhe jab se dekha hai since that day I have become completely mad about you

Maan stopped speaking waiting for her to reply but she kept mum

Seeing her lost maan said

Maan:Geet say something

But she did not uttered a word

Maan turned back to leave when he heard a really low voice

Geet:I Love You Too Stupid

He turned around and saw her

She was standing at the same place looking at him with slight tears in her eyes

Both of them just stared each other for a while

Then Maan opened his arms and she came running to him and hugged him tight

Both shared a passionate hug they broke the hug

Maan held her face and cleared the tears that were on her cheeks

Just then the thunder strikes and it started to rain

Maan being the biggest rain-hater made his way towards the shelter

He saw that Geet was not with him

He looked in the court and saw her standing in the middle of the court closing her eyes with her arms spread feeling the rain

She opened her eyes and saw that Maan was no longer with her

She looked here and there and say him standing in the shelter looking at her as if she had done a crime

She approached him and reached the shelter

Maan was about to say something but she held his arm and took him out in the rain

Maan:Geet kya kar rahi ho bemaar hone ka iraada hai kya??

Geet:Kya yaar Maan tum kitne boring ho Just spread your arms and feel evry drop of the rain it feels so great

Maan:Haan Shahrukh ne rab ne bana di Jodi mein yeh keh diya aur tumne maan liya

Geet:Dekho Maan Shahrukh ke bare mein kuch bhi bola na tou I will kll you aur waise bhi mujhe rains bachpan se hi pasand hain ye alag baat hai ke Rab ne dekhne ke baad aur zyaada pasand aa gayi hain Kheir choro yeh sab aur jo main keh rahi hoon wo karo

Maan:Okay

He opened his arms and felt the rain

For the first time he did not hate to get drenched but he fell in love with the rain

He cursed himself for not giving himself a chance of enjoying such a beautiful weather

He was standing closing his eyes when he felt someone throwing water on him

He opened his eyes and saw that Geet was filling her hand and throwing that water on Maan

She saw Maan and started to run but Maan caught her in no time and held her hand

Geet thought that this time she is in trouble but she was shocked when Maan starting humming a song

You're the one, you're the one
Baby you're the one
You're the one, you're the one
Baby you're the one

Maan held Geet from her waist and started to dance

You may be
Just a lil bit deewani

He twirls her around


Thodi thodi si crazy
But baby you're the one

Pulls her towards him with force

Tum jaisi (jaisi)
Hai na koi yun deewani (deewani)

He then lifts her and she opens her arms feeling him and the rain

 
Thodi thodi si crazy
But baby you're the one

He slowly lowers her and locks his both hands behind her and starts to move slowly

 
(You're the one)

She frees herself from his grip and runs

Ab aur kise na chahata hun
Aur kise na chahunga

She stops and turns around to see him approaching her

 
Tu jo taare mangle
Toh woh bhi thod launga

He reaches her and signals toward the sky


Kehke toh dekho na
Kartha rahunga main pyaar
Ohh..

He bends and sits on his knees and kisses her hand

You may be (may be)
Just a lil bit deewani (deewani)

He stands up and goes to her back and hold her from her waist sending chills down her spines

 
Thodi thodi si crazy
But baby you're the one

He turns her towards him with a jerk making her wet hai touch his face driving him crazy

Holle holle humse yeh khawayein jane kya keh rahi hai
Khete khete phir zara lajja ke dekho chup reh rahi hai

He hold her hand and start to play with them but she takes them back and turns such that her back is facing him

 
Bath hai toh wahi, dil mein tehre kahin
Sapno ko mere hai bas ek tera intezaar

He goes and stands infront of he takes her hands in his hands and kiss them

You may be (may be)
Just a lil bit deewani (deewani)

She shy and turns to go but he held her hand which made her stop


Thodi thodi si crazy (crazy)
But baby you're the one
(you're the one)

He goes in front of her and hits on her head with his head gently

You're the one, you're the one
Baby you're the one

She looks at him with anger but then shy as he flies a kiss towards her


You're the one, you're the one
Baby you're the one

Both the held each other arm and make their way inside the shelter as they were feeling cold

Khule khule teri aankhon mein hai mere armaan saare
Khile khile aise hai ke pheeke pheeke hai sab nazare

Maan look at her while she was opening her hair to dry them

 
Hai naya ye jahan, yeh hua na yahan
Itna kabhi bhi kisiko kisise hai pyaar

He goes to her and hold her from her waist and plants a kiss on her neck

You may be
Just a lil bit
Just a lil bit deewani (deewani)

Geet shivers feeling his touch and turns to him to stop him

 
Thodi thodi si crazy (crazy)
But baby

Maan holds her face and kisses her eyes one by one

 
But baby you're the one
(you're the one)

He then kisses her cheeks

Ab aur kise na chahata hun
(Ab aur kise na chahata hun)
Aur kise na chahunga(chahunga)

He kisses her forehead

 
Tu jo taare mangle (mangle)
Toh woh bhi thod launga
(thod launga)

He was about to kiss her but seeing her uncomfortable makes his way towards her forehead and plants kiss there

 
Kehke toh dekho na
Kartha rahunga main pyaar
Ohh..

Geet opens her closed eyes and looks at him with love and respect

Tum jaisi (tum jaisi)
Hai na koi yun deewani
(Hai na koi yun deewani)

She hugs him tightly not letting him go

 
Thodi thodi si crazy
But baby you're the one
(You're the one)

Maan breaks the hug and both remain standing with Geet lying on his shoulder

You're the one, you're the one
Baby you're the one
You're the one, you're the one
Baby you're the one

Both make their way towards the gate of their basket-ball court

Maan chains of thought were broken as he heard someone calling him

He looks at the source and heard what his driver was saying

Driver:Sir park aa gaya

Maan:Oh haan acha

He gets off the car and makes his way towards the entrance

He looks for her a girl in blue dress as he have called her to come wearing a blue as he refused to see her pic

His eyes stopped when he saw a girl wearing a light-blue top with blue jeans standing with her back facing him in front of the water-fall

He makes his way towards her with practicing what he had to say her

He reaches her and taps her shoulder and was about to say something wen the girl spoke

Girl(Without turning):Dekhiye main aap se shaadi nahin kar sakti main kissi aur se pyaar karti hoon

Maan was in complete shock he did not expect that the girl will say the same words what he was about to say

But wait a minute why the voice is so familiar DON'T TELL ME is she the one??

Maan's mind was racing at a very high speed he then again tapped the girl's shoulder

Now the girl turned around and Maan was shocked to see her

Girl:Dekhiye maine kaha na'''

The girl also stopped and looked at Maan

Both together

Maan:Geet tum??

Geet:Maan tum??

Both of them look at each other in dis-belief

Maan to confirm that it is Geet pinch on her hand and she shouts

Geet:Ouch!! you stupid'.. how dare you???

Maan smiled as now he was sure that it is his Geet

He immediately with out wasting a single secong hugged her

Priya:So that's how dada and yours marriage was a love cum arwrange marriage

Geet:Yeah

Just then they heard the horn of the car

Geet:Looks like your dada is here

Both of them rush downstairs

Maan entered the house and Jiya reaches him and jumps on him

Priya:Hey stupid

Maan:Bad Manners princess... why are you calling me stupid??

Priya:Why?? When mom used to call you stupid you never min and when I called you are reacting like I have commited a crime??

Maan looked at Geet who was trying hard to control her laughter but then seeing him looking at her bursted out laughing

Maan:So you told her everything

Geet just nodded

Maan just looked at her in pure shock

Priya:Dada now stop giving mom those looks lets go and have an ice-cream

The trio left the house and have a whole lot of ice-cream

Then they made their way back towards the house with Priya sleeping on the back-seat

It started to rain and both of them were surrounded by the wonderful memories connected to the rains

Maan and Geet together:Oh I just love the rain

Both look at each other and pass each other a sweet smile

Maan: I Love You Geet

Geet:I Love You Too ma Stupid

She keeps her head on his shoulder and both proceed towards their home enjoying the rain


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my genius angel  you are too good 
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AWWWWWWWWWWWW SO CUTE
DADA WAO
 
N ONE DIALOUGE U MENTION ARMAAN INDTEAD OF MAAN
BUT NO PROB
 
LOVE U
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Soooooo sweettttt!!!!
Awesomeeeeeeeee os!!
I also loveeee rain.
Thanxx for the pm.




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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was a very diff Os.lovely
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realy nice.......thanks for the pm
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awesome os
loved it
was so cute
thanks 4 da pm
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awww loved it
it was amazing
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awssuuMMMM!!!!

loved IT!!!!!
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Awwwwwwwwwwww.....................That was Awesome!!
Priya calling maan stupid and dada..was so Adorable..
Lovely OS!!
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