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Posted: 13 years ago
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After watching yesterday epi my take hope you all like it 

Meera: oh i saw at tv the news people saw that
Geet: cried i ruin Maan sir life 
Meera: why you are sitting here 
Geet: i dont have a place to live 
Meera :if you dont mind come with me.i live alone
Geet: per woh
Meera : i am a stranger but some time stranger are more then everyone
geet: recollected maan in HP..  
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aaj dil dukha hai  ( how he safe her from drowning)tum yaad aaye...maan saw a girl sitting near the lake  (as the had shown him in jungle) murmurer Geet 
Meera: took her to her home "this is your room "
anjanay loog hain 
Geet: remembered how they had fight when she stared living in outhouse 
apnay kahan dhoond payein  (maan cutting wood he cut his hand remind him of geet ..
imagine her "oh your hand is cut let me see she grab it tight and clear it with her duppata" tore herduppata nad wrap it on it..he smiled looking at her try to remove her curls she vanished ..he  punch more hard "i will find you Geet"
Meera : here is your blanket . please rest we will talk in morning  and find a solution .
Geet: hold the blanket remind of Maan how they had fight on blanket..she try to settel her self in bed...totally restless sometime she pull blanket up , some time hit the pillow 
jagay hain sooye nahin" maan voice echo in her ears "mera din tum see sharo tum pe khtam" Geet cried Baji help me..hug the pillow
aisi hai yeh meri baichaini  (maan try to sleep but her thought again and again  he stared at moon..
both at same time thought when he propose  ...)
next morning they woke up at here place.
Maan: i will find her today  placed his hand on taveeze ..drove back to city
Geet: prayed please i want to meet him once before i leave this place..
Meera: may i come in ..
Geet yes  aw her coming with her breakfast
Meera: you relax today dont go any where this is your home ...i have some work i will catch you in evening...she left her alone
meera called dev "i want to meet you at once"
DEv: ok meet you at 12
Meera:i asked you soon
DEV: baat kya ha 
Meera you meet me out side i am waiting
Dev: ok coming he quickly walk out
Nt: dev dev as she came out of washroom saw him no where around "yeh dev kahan chala gai"
NT:dadi aap na Dev ko dekah ha 
DAdi yes he is gong with meera.
NT: first Geet now Meera yeh dev bhi na 
Maan: walk in..he heard Geet name.."dadi kya geet aaya thi"
before dadi could speak NT replied
NT: haan veerji hum na iss ko dhaka maaar kar nikal diya ..gave a cunning smile
Maan: grab her from her arm "how dare you?"
Dadi: "maan aap aab bhi"
Maan: haan dadi mine aap bhi..NT i willnot let you play with my life again...Push her to sofa..
Nt got scared from his anger
Maan: i am going to find her
Dadi: she is not a nice girl Maan...nt open my eyes
Maan: is nt a nice girl dadi...what she told you ? if she had told you about her past i already know that
.Geet had never hide a single thing from me...
nt: phir bhi aap iss se
Maan: it is none of your business... he walked out 

dev: why you called me
Meera:  dev i found Geet
Dev: how is she ?
Meera very upset lets find Maan & tell him truth.
Dev: yes lets find him as without out telling him i will never be in peace,
Meera : what you will do of nt?
Dev: you don't worry i will sort her out.

maan went to pinky home
Pinky: oh sir aap 
Maan: is geet here?
Pinky:no sir 
Maan: if you get anything about her do tell me at once
Pinky dad : oh Maan sir aap
Maan: hi 
P dad: beta i want to talk to you come in
Maan: jee 
Pdad: beta you go and make tea..
Pinky : jee 
P dad: beta geet had a past i think she was notable to tell you
Maan" Uncle i know about it
P dad: do you know that she is expecting 
Maan: yes i know ..we both made this relation on truth 
Pdad: oh puttar then it must be her family or that guy
Maan: jee uncle she wanted to tell me something but i didnot get her at that time..
Pinky:sir coffee
Maan: thx  pinky do you remember when i was talking with you both she wanted to say something..
pinky: yes sir ..
ADi: hi sir aap yahan 
Maan : hi any news 
Adi :sir i check every station and bus stand she had not left Delhi 
Maan: then she must be in city lets find her 
Adi: yes sir lets find her
Maan: i hope she is if in this state she should not be alone. lets check hospital
Pinky dad: beta acha socho acha ho ga ... be positive 
Maan: jee..he  drove like crazy on road  ..check all the possible places.

dev :reach home NT 
Nt where were you ?
DEv: why should i tell you?
NT: i am your wife
DEV: you were once?
NT: you were with meera?
DEV:with who ever i am it is not your head ache
NT: first Geet mow Meera i will kill both of them
Dev: i have pity on you NT  ,you will never ....paused
NT: Veerji came he was searching for Geet. you are searching For Geet what is in that Geet which you dont have.
DEV: bro back 
NT: reply me what is in that Geet
DEV: everything
Nt: you cannot go like that 
DEV i will stop me if you can
Meera reach home saw Geet sitting 
Meera: how are you?
Geet: i am fine?reading newspaper
Meera; what are you doing ?
Geet: i am search for  a job out of Delhi
Meera: why?
Geet; i cannot stay in this city now my love will make me weak everytime
Meera: when you love him why dont you tell him?
Geet: i went there to tell him but he was not at home
Meera: for how long he will stay away he will  for sure come back.. hug her
Geet: hug her back ..
Meera: oh you have fever
Geet: yes i thora se ha
Meera:let me take you to dr
Geet: no plz i all be fine
Meera: please
Geet: no i dont want to go out plz
Meera ok you rest  
it was evening my was roaming like crazy he  saw a girl with same height and same kind of clothes 
Maan: stop car and shouted "GEET"
that girl turn back 
shamain ab dhalti nahin
anchal jo tera simat jaye
Maan; sorry..his phone rang
DEV: bro where are you
Maan: why?
DEV: i found Geet
MAan: where is she
DEV: she is at Meera home
Maan: ok i am coming
DEv: bro but you have to met me first before meeting her
Maan: what is there DEV:
DEV: a bitter truth
Maan: ok meet me out side meera home
DEV: ok
at meera home 
Geet was trying to sleep but his thought was again and bothering her
aap yahan hamesha rahein  (geet maan aap tou mera dil mein ha  aap muhje se aik baar 
zaroo mila ga ..i will tell you the truth)
duuri rahay na houn faslay(maan;geet see i found you ..you are just mine)

maan: reached Meera home dev was waiting for him
Maan: yes tell the what is the problem
dev: prob Geet was my wife 
Maan: what?
Dev: yes i betray her 
Maan; grab his collar how dare you
Dev: bro fro money
Maan: why didnot you asked form me ,you ruin a girl life
Dev: bro punish me but dont leave her she loves you alot
Maan: oh you were the cause 
Dev: yes  i asked her is my hatred more for  you or Bro love
Maan: you harted:
Dev: no bro your love as she came back to home but NT 
Maan: oh that why nt so against Geet
Dev: yes
Meera: why you both are standing out...as she heard their voices 
Maan: where is Geet
Meera: she is having fever i gave her medicine.
Maan: can i see her
Meera: yes 
Maan: i will talk to you later... 
DEv: bro i am here where i will go.
Maan: quickly walk in the room 
Geet was just lying with close eyes .. i am feeling as if you are very near to me 
Maan:walked in   heard what she said
Geet: meera as it was very dark n room
Maan: no me
Geet: aap 
Maan: ha mein
Geet: how you find me?
Maan: bas i did? 
she sit 
Maan keep lying you are sick
Geet: ab nahi
Maan:why you didnot told me that guy was dev he sit next to her
GeeT:i wanted to tell you but you said he is very imp to you i didnot wanted to hurt you.
Maan: what you think i am not hurt  now?
Geet: hmm
Maan: Geet i always took side of truth how would i?
Geet: woh mein
MAan: chup .. tears roll down their eyes
Geet; i came back but you were not there.
Maan: placed his finger at her lips .. jo hogaya wo hogaya ab bas..Geet is only Maaan's
Geet :Maan is only Geet's
 ..hug her tightly and kissed her
ab agar tum milay to
itna yaqeen hai
hans deinge hum to
roona nahin hai ......
                 the end 
sorry for mistake .. 
 For  those who lost their life and home in 8 oct earthquake 
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i am sry naddiya, i am poor in expressing my feelings. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz bare with me
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hi

like your post i hope sab kuch aisa he ho .............. cross your finger for maaneet.... like it wow great job done .๐Ÿ‘
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wow wonderful , its really amazing job done by u .so here is a big clap for u righting such a grt predictiction    ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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stellar and outstanding.............

how i wish that u FF writers shud be made the Cvs of the show...........the show wud b much more colourful and romantic..........nyways....even otherwise i love the show ...
i mean simply brilliant
 
a fabulous OS from a talented writer....
keep it up dear
 
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great is not enof to appreciate ur writings.
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loved da one shot it was so awesome