~Madhoshi maaneet thread # 2~

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 thread 2

 

bus tha ek anjaana madhoshi ka allam jo unhe jodai rahtha... Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 19

geet kuch ghadi yunhi palke jhapkathe dehkathi...
phir khud ko sambala...aur nazare jhukalethi..
maan - challen
geet - umm!!

they sit in the car..geet was too lost looking at him
and wat he just said...maan takes his hand to wipe her lips
his touch just burns her..she looks down & involunterly kisses his fingers
uske bekudhi se mano maan jal gaya...use bhi is anjane ehsaas me tadpathe dehk
maan ghabrasa gaya... aapne aap ko sambal na hi muskil tha..aur aab uski
aankhoo main wohi junoon dehk aur bhi madhosh hogay..
chaya madhoshi ka alam saanson se saansien takrane Lagi
bhula ke phir aaj duniyaa saara dono agosh mein khone laghe..
maan moves back..geet looks away flushed!!!
they drive to the cake shop...when th walk into the cake shop..
baby~yummy yummy mujhe woo wala chaye yah     
geet~teri liya nahi le rahen
mano maan uski dil ki baat samjh jatha...
maan - tumhe taste karna hain
geet - nahi (baby~hain)..nahi mera matlab hain..nahi.. HAIN(closes her eyes)
maan smiles & picks the same flavour for tasting..
baby~love u papa  
geet - love u papa(says it loud & closes her mouth..jhali tu chup kar ja..tu aaj paka kuch
gadbad karne waali hain)
maan narrows his eyebrows..main tumhe papa lagtha hoon (baby~yes😃)
geet nods her head for a yes & then NO NO
maan feeds her cake (baby tu chup chap ka..moo mut kholna..baby busy enjoying the cake)
maan - geet yeh deehkoo tumhare engagement ke liya perfect cake...
he points at a red heart shaped cake...
geet - wow...I have never seen anything so beautiful..meri liya yehi cake order karna
maan - umm!!! aur kuch!!
geet realzises wat she said..& looks down
kuch chunchal se kuch chup chup Se, kuch pagali pagali se lagtay ho jaise
kuch kehtay kehtay ruk jana ..Kis uljhan main rehti ho jaise...fir bhi aapni se lagh thi hoo

maan clears his throat..points at another cake
maan - dev ke liya yeh wala cake teehk hoga?
geet - umm!!
maan places the order & then they leave to the jewellers

the jeweller place was quite a drive..geet dosses off in the car..
maan smiles looking at her.. after reaching the shop..geet was still sleeping
maan looks at her for a while & honks the car really loud in parking..
geet snaps up & gets scared....maan starts laughing ...
geet~baby dehk papa hasthe huwe aacha laagthe hain na...
baby~akhir papa kis ke hain..😳
geet smiled...maan smiled & looked away..
real excotic expensive showroom...geet felt little intimitaded by the looks
of the sales girls & other people around...
she cluctched her duppata & walked sticking close to maan
maan put his hand around her & walked in...
his hand was so comfartable & easing her fear...mano koo gayee ho us ehsaas mein..
kaise mehesoos karletha tha uski bechani ko..aur jaane aanjane mein kuch kar jatha jo
geet ko uske aur bhi nasdeek lee aata...kitna mehfooz pati voo apne aap ko
uske chaav mein..mano aab to aadat si pad gaye ho...
sales girl - Mr.Khurana aap ka order ready hain
maan - umm!!
sales girl - aap ko aur kuch lena hain
maan looks a geet..tumhe kuch chahiya
geet nodes her head for a no..
sahame sahame se..nazare jhukathe...kuch na bolna uska..
masoomiyat ki intaha hogayee ho mano..
huzara bar kurbaan ho hogaya ho mano...
maan - I want an anklet ...
geet was too concious to look around she was unware of maans intentions
the sales guy comes from the anklet section with different anklet designs..
maan selects one & tells geet to try it on..
geet - ji mujhe nahi chahiya...
maan - tumhare liya nahi hain...sasha ke liya hai
geet gets angry & tries it..but was not able to put it on...
the sales guy bends to help her...maan shots a glare at him
geet slaps the guy right then...maan looks away & smiles
geet cluctches her duppatta & walks to the car...stands there getting wild
maan comes out after paying for the rings
maan opens the car door for her...she makes the face sits inside..
maan - tumne mera gussa bechare sales person pe nikal diya
geet - aap gussa main aap pe nikaloongi..uspe kyun?
maan - phir use kyun mara..woo to tumhare help kar raha tha
geet - aise koi help kartha hain kya? how dare he touches me?
har ghadi roop badlthi thi mano..khabhi chanchal khabhi teez meezaz uska...khabhi to darthe darthe hante kapkapana..to kabhi gussa me laal ankhee...uske har ek baath anookhi thi...

as she walked away...
maan - suno
geet - ji
maan - dinner kar lena
geet - ji..
geet - suniya
maan - umm!!
geet - woo aap bhi dinner kar lena
maan smiled
inka rukna rukhane silsila mano khatham hi nahi hota...agar brij had not come out
brij - thanxs maan for taking care of her in the morning
thats really nice of you..aaj kal kaun itna kartha hain!!
maan - thats fine...
maan smiled & left...geet went into the room..& hit her head...
kya ho jatha hain tujhe unke samne...
brij called geet to have dinner...
she told him about daadi, dev's engagement & how daadi wanted her help them
brij was every delighted to see geet involved in something finally
brij - geet main kal HP jaa raha hoon.. u will have to take care of ur self
geet - umm!!!
kya baath thi ki geet itna mehfooz feel karrahi thi ki..brij veerji ke jaane ka
bhi gum na tha use...
brij - if there is any thing just call me
geet - ji
brij - take ur medicines on time
geet - ji
brij - maan ka kha mana..he seems to be nice person..unhe jada pareshan mat karan
geet mumermers yello mainne kab unhe pareshan kiya ..woo hi mujhe pareshan karthe hain
baby~giggles

precap
maan gift umm !!

love muskan Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago

hey congo for your new thread.. lovely update... maan feeding her cake was so cute  n geet slapped the salesman.. my god thts funny.. do continue soon..

muskiii update it soon honey oooh geet was too good 

PM se pehlay read ker liya awesome part dear congrates for new thread👏

congrats on new thread...🥳🥳 that is just so awesome... i am loving it ...really nice.. keep writing..and maaneet as adorable as ever..the baby is just so cute...and brij is so nice as a brother...all in alll

nice update...wow second tread already!! congrats!

cute update ....

yaar.. muskiiiii... I was checking FF section for your update 😃😃😃

loved it.. yaar Maan kitna romatric hai.. Geet ko anklet bhi kharid li.. but why did he get her anklet??????  😊 .. ..loved it a loooot....
yaar  tumhara FF mein babies kitne acchi hai..ma

Congrats for a new thread............ love the updated. .........🤗