FanFiction :: Geet Huwi Maan ki Part7 pg12

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Posted: 13 years ago
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   Maan lead geet out of there , It was obvious that he couldn't stay any longer with those people looking at HIS Geet !! Geet was speechless , she coul'nt believe her ears , everything around her was moving fast , her heart was beating so fast , she was going to faint .. when she gain back concious by maan making her seat in the car .

   M.Rawal came out running

Geet open her window to talk to him , to apologize .

But Maan didn't let her , he already started the car and drove away .

Geet : Sir !! M.Rawal baat karne ahai the

Maan : main Anda nahin hoon Geet !!

Geet : (furious) ande nahin ho to , car ko kyun chalaya !!

Maan : to avoide him !! main nahin karte in jaisse logon ke saath deal !

Geet : Abh inone kya kiya hai ??

Maan : (calmly) you are right Geet ! ghalati unki nahin tumari hi hai  !! (back in anger )main yahan Shaadi ki deal karne nahin aya !!

Geet : Meri ghalati !! ABH MAINE KYA KIYA !! Na apne daadi se jhoot bola hota , nah humko meeting ke liye kahin jaana hota , na aaj hum ider hote !!

Maan : you could have picked another DEAL !! Manali hi kyun !! deal ka kuch pata nahin , lekin rishta banane main bare tez hai. Shukar hai Mandap nahin tha , warna 7 phere karwa ke hi chorta !! aur tum kuch kehti hi nahin .

Geet : KYA !! main kuch keh .. (she took control of herself) haan haan acha hota nah ! acha ladka hai , aur phir Rawal papa ji keh saath khubh gape marti main !! (maan was looking at her shocked and furious at the same time ) and this place is sooo beautiful to romance with Bunty !!

Maan : GEET HANDA !!

Geet : nah nah !! Ajj se main Bubly , Bunty ki bubli , haye babaji yeh to wohi huwa nah , Bunty aur Bubly in dono ki jodi (geet begun to sing)

Maan : Bunty my foot !! You are geet !! My ge..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very funny! I like it, please do continue!
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very cute ff😆............ pls cont..
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very cute n funny.. do continue soon....
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amazing...pls continue
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very nice.plz continue.plz add me to ur pm list.do pm me the next part.it was awesome.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Accident ho gaya ..

Maan : (with concern) Geet tum thik to ho na !!

Geet : Main toh thik hoon , lekin apki gaari toh gayi ..

Maan : hu?

Geet point in front of her .

Maan : Damn it !!

Maan got out of the car .Geet also come out .

Geet : dekha nah yehi hota hai jab aph mujhe tang karte hai !

Maan : Geet ; tum kabhi chup nahin ho sakti kya !!

It started raining

Geet : dekha !! phit aph mujhpar ghussa huwe , is liye barish ho rahi hai !! mera kya mujhe toh barish pasand hai.. probleme toh apko hai , apko jo nahin pasand

Maan moved toward geet , geet took a step behind .. she was stuck between the car and Maan ..she was about to say womething but maan put is finger on Geet lips , look straight in her eyes

Maan : Tumko kisne kaha ki mujhe nahin pasand ..

Geet : apne hi toh ..

Maan : woh woh maan tha jisse pyaar ka matlab nahin pata tha , is barish ka ehsaas nahin pata tha .. main voh Maan hoon , jisko Geet ne badal diya ..

Mahiiiiiiiii , they looked deeply in each other eyes ,  Nothing  was around them , they were in the middle of nowhere , but it was'nt bothering them at all , no.. because they were in eachother .. talking the language of love , that only them could answer ...

Geet hair came in front of her eyes , it was bothering her , but she didn't wanted to break this moment , Maan saw this , he gentlely pushed her hair behind her ears , caresing her cheek , but Suddenly a thunder !! Geet freak out and hugged Maan Tighly !! Maan could'nt help but smile ..

Maan : humain koi jaaga dundni chaye , barish bohut tez hoti ja rahi hai .. lagta hai kuch ziada pyaar hai in hawahon main...

Geet : ji?

Maan : kuch nahin , woh dekho ek cottage , dekhte hai agar rehne ki koi jaaga hai ki nahin

They started to walk toward the cottage when another thunder makes geet hug Maan ..Maan cary geet in his arm , both were looking in eachother eyes .. Maan was walking , and geet hugged him even more tighter , this time without the help of the thunder ;) ..

Maan : Geet ..

Geet didn't reply ..

Maan : Geet (a bit louder but sweetly)

Geet : ji ?

Maan : tum uthar sakti ho , hum a gahai hai ..

Geet  looked around , she was all shy because she didn't see that it as been a litle time that they where in front of that door .. she was so deeply lost in him ..

Maan smiled , and knocked the door ..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you averyone ^^😳 ..
I hope you like the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey aesome.hope u will include a roop tera mastana scene in ur fic. wt a roamantic scene.maan n geet hugged.wow.thx 4 the pm.waiting eagerly 4 the next part
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so nice
love it
continue soon and
add me yr PM.....please.