FF:- meri jaan.{updt prt 04/pg12}

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey everyone i tried to write one FF hope u all like it.


this is continuation from the current track..


thanks to pritta for beautiful siggy..luv ya..πŸ€—

maan rushed to railway station..

geet was at ticket counter

ticket checker:kahan ka ticket chahiye madam??

Geet:iss jagah se bahut door..

Tc:madam jaldi kariye..peeche badi line lagi ahi aur aap yahan paheliyan bhuja rahi hai..

Geet keeps mum..

Tc:agli train Amritsar ki hai ..wo ticket dedoon??

Geet:haan..

Geet takes the ticket and move to the platform..recollecting all the moments with maan..and then "main samajhta tha tum sirf meri ho.."

 

Maan reached railway station and was searching for geet..

Geet looks at maan and hide behind the pillar..

Maan frantically searching for geet here and there'

Geet moves away from the pillar..

Maan comes near the same pillar..

Geet goes and hides near a water tank

 

Maan:plz geet mujhe ek mauka do..plz laut aao..

He looks down and he finds a doll..

He picks it up and recollect the office scene where he finds a doll from geets bag..

Maan:ye to ..

 

Geet looking at maan

Maan scream:geettt...




plzz do hit the like button..
nd do comment

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Edited by sweetshab - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey...that was fab...

really awesome...i loved it
 
do cont'd soon...and keep writing...πŸ‘πŸ‘
 
add me to ur pm list
 
thx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was cuteee.
Plzz continue soon.
can u plzz add me in ur pm list?


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hii 😊
Awesome Fan Fiction!!
I can't wait too read more- Do continue and add me
to your PM list please. Well done. πŸ‘

xx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Shabz I will only read this FF if you promise me that you will update it regularly and wont leave it midway..I still cannot forget one of my favouraite FF |Tere Liye| by you which hasnt been updated for months..plz promise me😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice...Sweety...Carry on....wonderful begining...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ love the way U connect it to Geet's doll.....can't wait to read more....do pm me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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add me 2 the pm list plz....
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Plz continue and add me to the pm list....
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